Dancing Aloud (Book) - 11/1/2008 8:24:36 PM
Very, very, VERY easy to get into this. You are a talented writer and storyteller. Love the the story idea and the title.
Much success,
Kevin
Dancing Aloud (Book) - 8/11/2008 2:42:56 PM
This was a really good read! It has the style of my grandmother "Big Mama" who would sit on the porch and tell me stories as we spoke to passing neighbors on late afternoons.
I found myself laughing during the first chapter as I got into the character and followed her lead into the island adventure she has gotten herself into! Just too funny. I loved the setup and events.
Good POV and prospectives throughout. Don't stop writing, you really have a good story telling style that is rare these days.
~Jonathon~
Dancing Aloud (Book) - 10/1/2007 6:52:54 PM
I like the flow of the first chapters. The scene at the airport when the plane lands offered enough suspense and intrigue to hook the reader. Some of the sentences and dialogue attribution could be tighter, for instance--using "She said" before dialogue is not needed.
Good story still.
