Tolemac (Book) - 8/28/2009 6:21:43 AM
I loved this book and I'm putting links on the web site to it. Look forward to more from you. LadyJ
Tolemac (Book) - 10/21/2007 12:19:08 AM
Go for it, man!!! This is awesome for it in reality show exactly the why things are heading in this world. Supreme is how I see where this work is going. Please visit my website. It is fantasy, but heck, it is my best work. Waiting to hear from you in my guestbook. www.freewebs.com/rwwatt/ Robert W. Watt
Tolemac (Book) - 1/5/2007 6:13:14 AM
Really sounds like a great story HJ I enjoyed reading the synopsis
Losing Chris (Short Story) - 4/26/2009 6:52:33 PM
Powerful story HJ. Thanks for sharing it. Tom
Losing Chris (Short Story) - 2/5/2009 2:16:08 PM
What a story. Its soul shattering . Rest assured , Chis is there waiting for you . He lives on in your memories and heart. It took a lot of courage to write this story. Thanks for sharing.......M
The Pen Of Solomon (Short Story) - 7/4/2008 7:39:19 PM
Enjoyed reading this story, entertaininly truthful and thinkable for me. Must read it again. Sound as if you have a divine soul leading you to write this kind of story.
The Master and his pupil (Short Story) - 3/15/2008 6:31:34 PM
Wise ponderings... "The Master and his pupil" strikes ontological thoughts, and leads the reader to a learning adventure.
The fifth question affirms a scientifc or assumed position, and the answer doesn't stand to back scientific ground. The misinterpretation of the words INTELLIGENCE and INTELLECT is still one tall and long wall blocking the road to understanding.
I have enjoyed the reading of "The Master and his pupil".
In respect,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Song of a Mariner (Short Story) - 1/28/2008 10:20:00 AM
Downloaded it. Read all nine and a half pages. Very captivating. Enjoyed the read.
The Nutcracker (Short Story) - 12/10/2007 10:25:52 PM
what do i press for me to read it?
Master and his pupil II (Short Story) - 11/30/2007 8:51:22 PM
Very creative. An excellent write.
Losing Chris (Short Story) - 8/28/2007 12:27:24 AM
An amazing story! Excellent write! I seriously enjoyed it from beginning to end.
Losing Chris (Short Story) - 8/23/2007 1:26:59 PM
I was scared from beginning to end....
Losing Chris (Short Story) - 8/17/2007 2:40:23 AM
Wow! This story of your memoirs "H" was intense!
Thank you for sharing your heart and soul, with each intense caring line!
IN spirit he will always be!
I feel so blessed to know you better, through this life you once lead.
Your way with words are astounding "H"!
I felt I was there holding your hand, and wanted to be there to the very end.
Warmed in Inner Peace, LOVE, Light and Wisdom! Warrior Purple Lady Sheeeoox
STay POsitive!
STay SAFE!
Losing Chris (Short Story) - 8/1/2007 10:19:46 AM
well done
Losing Chris (Short Story) - 7/31/2007 10:42:22 AM
This touched me so deeply H. You are so masterful with memoirs. You live them again in each line and cause your readers to live them along with you.
Losing Chris (Short Story) - 7/31/2007 6:39:22 AM
this takes us down many roads, the meaning of loss and the transition we undertake as we deal with the physical loss and the spiritual infinity. energy is all around us, and those who have touched our lives continue to exist, awaiting our time to become one with them again. having recently lost my grandfather, you touched something really deep with this one. thanks.
The Pen Of Solomon (Short Story) - 7/31/2007 6:35:41 AM
your use of imagery rewards the literary vision quest. quite an enjoyable ride, even when that ride hits the bumps of reality and an awakening comparable to biting into the fruit from the tree of knowledge.
Losing Chris (Short Story) - 7/31/2007 2:31:36 AM
Chris will be there, besides you, always, until the day when you can follow him inside, beyond that fogged landscape.
Extraordinary well done.
Georg
Losing Chris (Short Story) - 7/30/2007 5:38:37 PM
Lives are filled with remarkable things both sad and glad and then you read a story like this and find the balance. Lady J
Losing Chris (Short Story) - 7/30/2007 3:53:18 PM
Wow what an amazing story I have heard of communicating
With the spirits and also have experience ounces in my life!
it sure was a very emotional journey
Thank you for taking me along!
Hugsss Love Peace and Joy to you...Morning Star
Losing Chris (Short Story) - 7/30/2007 2:21:04 PM
I almost passed out readin this AWESOME from the heart write, cause I was holdin my breath and absorbin every word. Gosh Amighty, yore beauty is dazzlin! There be a lot goin on behind them dreamy dark eyes. SC
Losing Chris (Short Story) - 7/30/2007 10:10:58 AM
Quite a gripping story.
Losing Chris (Short Story) - 7/30/2007 8:24:01 AM
HJ,
I am completely taken by this story. I love how you weave your words, and you take the reader on your emotional journey along with you.
Brilliant story of sadness and love for your brother. He was an incredible human being. Remember, though, he is not gone, his spirit lives on, especially right now as you have told of his death.
I shall be thankful for knowing you...
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"
The Ropes (Short Story) - 7/28/2007 4:29:19 AM
YOU write of such deep expression, I enjoyed immensly HJ
Memories - we need em'!
fleeting but truly endearing your hear and this well written heartfelt story is!
You write beautifully of painful memories and more HJ
Thank you for sharing!
WArmly, Warrior PURPLE Lady Sheeeoox
STay Positive!
Tobie's Secret (Short Story) - 7/28/2007 4:24:35 AM
HJ :)
Her memory still after so long, haunts your heart!
Her impressed passionately burned in!
Her spirit so strong within your own!
YOu wrote of passions between so well...and with such intensity!
HOT!
Loved your heart and Tobies! IN spirit you BOTH are!
She wanted NOTHING to come between the two of you, I feel that deeply within~ These memories still stand TRUE! Through your words and expressive feelings of a wonderful caring, loving memory!
WArmest Blessings, of LIGHT, LOVE, and PEACE!
WArmly, Warrior Lady Sheeeoox
STay Positive!
STay SAFE!
Song of a Mariner (Short Story) - 7/26/2007 12:42:24 PM
Read it, loved it. The description, characterization was wonderful for such a short work. The love scene was sweet and hot. Lovely work. I hope you will take it out of doc file form and post it here.
Tobie's Secret (Short Story) - 7/3/2007 12:18:20 PM
Toby was a wonderful person. She didn't tell you about the illness because she wanted to enjoy every moment with you knowing there was no room for pity just happiness and joy. This is a bittersweet story. Great write.
Tobie's Secret (Short Story) - 7/3/2007 11:41:38 AM
HJ this is not only wonderfully erotic, it's high adventure and romance and bittersweet tragedy with characters who are real in every sense of the word. I hope you will publish a volume of your short stories!
Black Friday the thirteenth (Article) - 2/5/2009 2:18:48 PM
I read the book ,, The Last TEMPLER and then saw the movie on Tv.. Great historical piece....M
Black Friday the thirteenth (Article) - 11/27/2008 10:17:39 AM
I really enjoyed this article as I have been exploring the records of Historic Scotland. Very interesting.
Will the real William Shakespeare please stand up! (Article) - 4/10/2008 1:31:05 PM
this is an excellent article..I love Cruz's innovative catchy back and forth between old English and modern language to get the point and flavor across. Very true and penetrating insight.....where's part lll lV and V???!
TolemaC (Article) - 12/11/2007 12:14:22 AM
This really sounds fascinating. Willie
Black Friday the thirteenth (Article) - 7/16/2007 5:03:56 PM
Well selected. societies of secret date back into time's eternity. mgf
Go to www.secrets-blog.com
Go softly into the night.
Will the real William Shakespeare please stand up! (Article) - 7/15/2007 11:13:38 AM
Perhaps it was remarkable that he did not give credit enough to whom it was due, and therewith acquired his historical murkiness. A truly remarkable author nevertheless. I have always greatly admired his works.
Black Friday the thirteenth (Article) - 7/14/2007 2:01:11 PM
I have no idea what the author's credentials are and find the article to be useless. My selection of the article was due to my wanting a little information on the origin of Friday the Thirteenth. Unfortunately, this one has too much legend and propaganda for Masons, as far as I can tell. How can anyone believe any part of the article when the author writes that Colombus was really not from Italy, but from Portugal? Finally, there are mistakes in grammer and spelling in the article.
Black Friday the thirteenth (Article) - 7/14/2007 8:28:19 AM
Excellent this article has refreshed my memory
Of history and also about superstitious
Black Friday the thirteenth
My mom was real afraid of Friday the 13
Love how you captured such beautiful imagery and the vividness I could almost see it all happening as I read it!
Outstanding write!
Love Peace and Joy many hugsss to you always...Morning Star
Black Friday the thirteenth (Article) - 7/13/2007 3:41:29 PM
good walk through history. I hear rumor these societies are not gone. What say you? Lady J
Black Friday the thirteenth (Article) - 7/13/2007 8:03:35 AM
OOOOOOO WEEEEEE I loves it when Ya gets riled. How's bout a lovely pair of apples fur the teacher! SC
Black Friday the thirteenth (Article) - 7/13/2007 6:50:27 AM
Someone always will name himself the shepherd while the rest of us will always be the lambs to the slaughter.
Georg
Did ya ever (Article) - 6/27/2007 11:05:19 PM
I must admit to all but 3 of these:) I do rather like your rambles.
Visions of Santa Fe (Article) - 6/25/2007 8:05:00 PM
Wow I been to Santa Fee many times
If I was to move out of Texas
I want to live in Santa Fe
Its more beautiful and inspiring place I ever been to!!
I know about that carpenter Oh those spiral stairs
Are just out of this world!!Your words have captured perfectly
That magnificent beauty and spirituality of this place!!
Outstanding Job!!
Love Peace And Happiness to you my friend
Your Friend..Yolie that's my christian Name
Visions of Santa Fe (Article) - 6/17/2007 11:28:59 PM
I want to go to Santa fe and feel the atmosphere for myself now :) Nice although a little brief hun, so want to take me there in the NON twister season?
Visions of Santa Fe (Article) - 6/17/2007 5:33:33 PM
Interesting write and well done. Lady J
Visions of Santa Fe (Article) - 6/16/2007 3:52:17 PM
Howdy Professor Dreamy! Loved yore history 101 class, you are a delightful travel guide and teacher! I too have visited Santa Fe and thoroughly enjoyed my visit! BE SWEET SC
Will the real William Shakespeare please stand up! (Article) - 6/7/2007 3:08:40 AM
food for thought, this. i guess it's safe to say that some things simply defy human explanation. the genius of Shakespearean literature is still genius. it doesn't matter whether or not he did it all by himself or with some help. on that note, could writing be a bit like sex: bad for one; but good for two?
Earth Dreams (Article) - 5/27/2007 8:14:42 AM
A good write with lot's of thought. Lady J
Earth Dreams (Article) - 5/27/2007 6:31:43 AM
What’s a corrupt man to do?
What many of your fellow corrupt men and women have finally started doing - letters to congress, donations to save the whales, etc - every single voice, and every single dollar truly does help. And we better all start helping - before it's too late.
Earth Dreams (Article) - 5/27/2007 1:17:07 AM
If you are a 21st Century snake-oil-salesman so are we all, with the exception of a few that were born to be duped by us.
Keep on dreaming? more like nightmares.
Very well done!
Georg
Earth Dreams (Article) - 5/26/2007 10:55:05 PM
This write was AWESOME and truly touched my heart. At one time America belonged to my people, The Cherokee and other native American Tribes. GOD put us as caretakers of Mother Earth. We respected her and only took from her what we needed to survive. Then so-called civilized people came and took our land away from us and banished us. The civilized ones daily rape her and abuse her, for there is no one to stop them. SC
Earth Dreams (Article) - 5/26/2007 9:45:12 PM
Wow! Joe, a wonderful story that resonates on many levels. Your connective tissues are finely tuned indeed and your expression is excellent. keep it coming.
With respect, tom
Music (Poetry) - 8/17/2009 10:35:30 PM
'Still no matter what your disposition,
Always an empathetic minor composition..'
Wonderful!! ...
Great musical piece about the rock of ages!! Love it!! :-D
Music (Poetry) - 8/11/2009 6:37:18 AM
Well Sir Honey Jam, thou hast said a mouthful and very eloquently indeed. Time marches on, music is immortal.
Music (Poetry) - 8/10/2009 9:50:58 AM
alright, alright!!!
Music (Poetry) - 8/8/2009 7:30:48 PM
All I can say is:
Supercalafragleistikexpialladoscious!
Great write, HJ, I had a blast reading it.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Music (Poetry) - 8/8/2009 11:52:58 AM
Great write, glad I stopped by, I could use a spoonfull of that medicine she offered...LadyJ
Music (Poetry) - 8/8/2009 6:25:24 AM
HJ This is a gourmet feast for the music lover! Bravo! I love it.ET
Music (Poetry) - 8/8/2009 1:31:54 AM
Long time no see HJ, and I am happy to read that we are hearing the same tunes, although Leonard Cohen and Gloria Gaynor can give us something about taking Manhattan and being a Survivor.
Nice done, pal.
Georg
Music (Poetry) - 8/7/2009 11:29:21 PM
and I am movin & groovin to the sounds
as I am steppin to these really groovy words playing in your poem......dig it? GroooooVAY Baby!! :)
I can't see the picture though :(
Time dah Book....Peace Out Babe :)
Vickie
Music (Poetry) - 8/7/2009 10:54:40 PM
A masterful play on words and a great read. :)
Chanti
Music (Poetry) - 8/7/2009 6:40:05 PM
Cleverly expressed, HJ. Music is magic. I've expressed my opinion in one of my poems at AD entitled, "I Would Be Music." Thanks for sharing. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Castrated (Poetry) - 8/3/2009 8:47:19 AM
Awesome write....giggled all the way through reading this cleverly crafted poem! Well done!
Anna
The Promise (Poetry) - 8/3/2009 8:43:56 AM
Very interesting write! Absolutely loved the story and the flow of your words. Great job.
Anna
The Promise (Poetry) - 8/1/2009 9:23:53 AM
Very touching sweet man..well done indeed keep smiling always OK...Hugss,much happiness to you
2012 (Poetry) - 7/4/2009 10:56:52 PM
A very interesting read. Well written.
The Promise (Poetry) - 7/4/2009 10:53:39 PM
Avery good write. Loved this one.
The Promise (Poetry) - 6/28/2009 9:15:10 AM
So real and honest... ...and to me, sad. Thank you for sharing. Love and peace,
Regis
Valentine diddy (Poetry) - 6/19/2009 5:14:16 PM
for some reason I am hearing bruce springsteen i'm on fire!!
2012 (Poetry) - 6/19/2009 5:10:42 PM
H.J...our very life force we destroy will destroy us...I Loved This Poem!
Peace & Inspirations 2U
Embraced~Embrassé
Vickie
The Promise (Poetry) - 6/19/2009 5:08:08 PM
oh this is an honorable man to resist stealing love!
not a forsaken one!
Embraced~Embrassé
Vickie
The Promise (Poetry) - 6/6/2009 12:56:58 PM
I'd call it unnatural selection. Gave me deja vu. Women are a fickle lot, love the one you've got.
Ron
The Promise (Poetry) - 5/14/2009 12:42:12 AM
I doubt it, I think her instincts must have betrayed her. Beautifully penned HJ and deeply touching.
The Promise (Poetry) - 5/10/2009 10:17:50 PM
An outstanding write HJ! That saying"what goes around comes around"
seems to be true many times...This is one many can relate to!
Love,
ET
The Promise (Poetry) - 5/10/2009 2:37:45 AM
Far too long in between your excellent writes arrive like tears from a rock. But when you decide to treat us with a poem, it is worth to read a few times!
Georg
The Promise (Poetry) - 5/9/2009 9:20:39 PM
I loved those first three lines. What a hook!
An introspective, nostalgic and somewhat reflective write. I am sure that many will relate to this.
Great poem HJ! :)
Chanti
The Promise (Poetry) - 5/9/2009 6:08:07 PM
Ahh! This touches a chord. Difficult to comment without going on forever. As usual HJ, an excellent expression, well done. Tom
The Promise (Poetry) - 5/9/2009 4:08:27 PM
Hi HJ, on a rock called ages.... sums it up, doesn't it? Your promise might lie spent or traded, but not over... always second chances... this is a perceptive write...
In Spirit,
Bear
The Promise (Poetry) - 5/9/2009 3:27:03 PM
H.J. I love this poem, very methodical and thought provoking.
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber V
2012 (Poetry) - 5/2/2009 11:12:07 AM
we are in for an awakening for sure! The Universe is the ruler of our destiny. We shall see what is in store for us. They Mayans knew more than we could ever dream to know.
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
2012 (Poetry) - 4/29/2009 4:05:14 PM
~ mankind is definitely in conjunction with the stars ~
2012 (Poetry) - 4/29/2009 3:38:25 PM
Wow this one gave much to ponder
I agreed things are heating up for sure!!
Brilliant write!!
Peace Love and Light....Yolie
Whoville/ Shmooville (Poetry) - 4/28/2009 6:17:12 PM
Wow, you have an amazing flow in this. Enjoyed! Thank you, Will
2012 (Poetry) - 4/27/2009 4:41:19 AM
Things are definitely heating up, and maybe those wise old Mayans were right after all.
2012 (Poetry) - 4/27/2009 4:14:42 AM
Wow..this is great writing dear man..enjoyed very much..take care be safe..Hugss
2012 (Poetry) - 4/27/2009 3:12:58 AM
Yes they are and we've ignored the signs too long. This is a truly thought provoking write, with a eloquence and strong voice HJ.
2012 (Poetry) - 4/26/2009 6:19:00 PM
This is awe inspiring writing, and message to boot, you take us through time, the cosmos, astonomy, astrology, observations, and predictions, it was a wonderful walk through time and space.
Blessings! Jasmin Horst
2012 (Poetry) - 4/26/2009 4:50:58 PM
If the world is to end on Dec 21st, 2012, I want to watch...Ed
2012 (Poetry) - 4/26/2009 12:59:12 PM
The Mayas told long ago that the end will be in 2012, but they never said the end of what, so, beware!
"2012" a poem to wonder and when one finish to read it, is a what if...
Georg
2012 (Poetry) - 4/26/2009 12:54:30 PM
You certainly do make one think; there is indeed much thought and speculation about the year 2012. Thank you. Love and peace,
Regis
2012 (Poetry) - 4/26/2009 12:40:55 PM
Wow definately jumping through the years into the future but with insight and a sense of history teaching a lesson...if we listen.
Fee
If This Were a Poem (Poetry) - 4/23/2009 7:51:15 AM
Yes, it's a poem with lots of rhyme and rhythm.
Cynthia
Valentine diddy (Poetry) - 4/19/2009 12:55:06 PM
Fabulously well-wrought, HJ, with a tantalising mix of literary high-taste, low-brow and a certain tongue in cheek...and everywhere else, by the sound of it! :)) Realist and romantic, lusty yet still a piquant hanker after "the real thing"... A very good summation of what's uppermost in everyone's mind on that Hot Date in our calendar year. And Cathedral Rock IS in Sedona, yeah... xx
Valentine diddy (Poetry) - 4/13/2009 10:41:19 PM
I'm late in reading this, but am so happy that I did! Beautifully sensuous.
If This Were a Poem (Poetry) - 4/11/2009 12:04:05 PM
You do have a way with words and rhyme. :)
Whoville/ Shmooville (Poetry) - 4/6/2009 5:15:53 AM
Keep this great writing up. Man it is smooth and taking you places. I like your style smooth and rythmical. Your bio says you so not have a sheepskin hanging on your wall. Believe me, you have one hanging on the inside of you my Brother. Take good care.
Tommy
Castrated (Poetry) - 3/24/2009 3:08:59 AM
You grabbed me with your title....you kept me with your humor!
Valentine diddy (Poetry) - 3/17/2009 9:15:22 AM
Well I missed this on Valentine's Day but it can be apt any day as far as I am concerned. Thank you. Love and peace,
Regis
Valentine diddy (Poetry) - 3/11/2009 5:41:19 AM
Very lovely..as always a pleasure to read you sweet man..sure have missed you and your wonderful writing..stay safe and well..Hugss
Sunset Tears (Poetry) - 2/16/2009 2:45:37 AM
Very captivating,beautifully written poem,take care
Edwin
Valentine diddy (Poetry) - 2/16/2009 2:42:34 AM
Excellent poem,very well written.I enjoy reading it,take care
Edwin
When Wal-Mart comes to town (Poetry) - 2/15/2009 8:05:23 PM
The Dark side of Wal Mart.
From Sams dream small folks get creamed!
Amen
Pousse'-cafe' (Poetry) - 2/15/2009 6:40:56 PM
"a fifth of tequila" LOL.
Man, do it with a lime,
Will turn a two into a nine every time.
Great write.
~W~
Whoville/ Shmooville (Poetry) - 2/15/2009 6:35:58 PM
Enjoyed this one.
Where do I send my fifty buckarollas?
Walt
Valentine diddy (Poetry) - 2/15/2009 6:37:13 AM
HJ, I couldn't stop reading this erotically beautifully mastered poem.
A very well done tribute to a lover's day!
Good to read your work again.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Valentine diddy (Poetry) - 2/15/2009 6:11:48 AM
Stunning hot and melty warm inside the heart as you take us on a date of passion, desire and want...
Fee
Valentine diddy (Poetry) - 2/15/2009 5:10:58 AM
Hey HJ, where have you been hiding? Welcome back buddy!
From Pheromones to tongues doing tango Venutian Delight has the taste of Olympus Elixir and that bottle of wine in dark alleys, a kaleidoscopic travel one does straddling on a horse made of words.
Georg
Sunset Tears (Poetry) - 2/6/2009 1:40:29 AM
I'm sitting here with a smile on my face...this is incredible...and your ending...totally unexpected.
Whoville/ Shmooville (Poetry) - 2/5/2009 6:37:31 PM
A fun and interesting read! LOL!!! :)
Sandie Angel :o)
Castrated (Poetry) - 1/24/2009 1:10:37 PM
Thank you for sharing your wit and humor, H. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Good Knight (Poetry) - 1/14/2009 4:52:01 AM
Had a good vision day today and found I could see this. A most enjoyable read and I for one love series poetry. Will be back to enjoy the others. Kathy
Whoville/ Shmooville (Poetry) - 12/2/2008 10:57:28 AM
lol...fantastic job!! lol
I do believe :)
Great Pic To Boot!!
Peace, Love & Poetry
Embraced~Embrassé
Vickie
Whoville/ Shmooville (Poetry) - 11/29/2008 9:47:54 AM
Nice too read you dear man..great pen cute indeed..be well and always safe...Hugs
Whoville/ Shmooville (Poetry) - 11/28/2008 2:16:14 PM
hahaha!lol I always had a hidden soft spot for the grinch!;-)
Funtastic poem, even if I don't share all the sentiments!
Good to read you again,been too long...
Love,
Eileen
Whoville/ Shmooville (Poetry) - 11/28/2008 12:01:01 AM
Apt and timely; thank you, H. Love and peace,
Regis
When Wal-Mart comes to town (Poetry) - 11/27/2008 8:48:58 PM
There's a reason I don't shop at Walmart--99% of their products are manufactured in China and they are opening super stores in Shanghai, Beijing, etc. Go get em!!!!!
Castrated (Poetry) - 11/27/2008 8:44:23 PM
'Castrated' sounds like my autobiography. It's always nice to know you aren't alone in the world--no man is an island, or did I get that wrong?
Whoville/ Shmooville (Poetry) - 11/27/2008 6:48:00 AM
You are a trip, but I really can't believe you are a grinch! Brilliantly composed, it sped along like the Grinch's sleigh.
Whoville/ Shmooville (Poetry) - 11/27/2008 4:50:59 AM
We should parade in front of the fat dude paying minimum wages, maybe he uses all that money on 6 packs of Crown Royal Canadian Whiskey! ! !
Georg
Whoville/ Shmooville (Poetry) - 11/27/2008 4:07:15 AM
HmmnnnnSANTA FEE is not happy with this guy at all, and just when I had figured out how to get that new flourescent orange car(to contrast with your lovely shade of green) onto my sleigh to bring to you on Christmas Eve. Gosh darn Mr Grinch now I have to reopen the coal mine and send the elves in just for you...
Santa Fee
Whoville/ Shmooville (Poetry) - 11/27/2008 2:16:58 AM
back in the groove HJ, a healthy dose of cynicism to slight them on their merry way. Excellent!!
Tom
Whoville/ Shmooville (Poetry) - 11/27/2008 2:10:14 AM
Goober! You is a cute hoot! HUGS! SC
Whoville/ Shmooville (Poetry) - 11/26/2008 9:58:22 PM
Now this is one lighthearted twist and joy, full of fanciful fun and mischief, well said. Nice to have you back...
Be always safe,
Karen
Whoville/ Shmooville (Poetry) - 11/26/2008 8:19:12 PM
Love this H J, great to read you again. Hope you are staying a while.
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Sunset Tears (Poetry) - 9/21/2008 2:28:01 AM
enjoyed the read
Sunset Tears (Poetry) - 7/18/2008 3:49:23 PM
Woooow I was not expecting that type of ending
It took me by surprise and busted out laughing
That was a fantastic twist
Brilliant poem and truly hon st and
profound raw sexuality!!
Peace Love and Hugessss...Morning star
Sunset Tears (Poetry) - 7/16/2008 11:25:10 AM
WHAT A HOOT! The end was priceless! Goober! You is the cutest little ole thang! HUGS! SC
Sunset Tears (Poetry) - 7/15/2008 1:28:25 PM
LOL well damn, will the store give you a refund? what an explosive poem!
Sunset Tears (Poetry) - 7/14/2008 6:50:29 PM
This is by far, your best HJ...such well-thought out lines and well-chosen words. This is reality! A blow-up doll! What a finale! This has such cross-over potential. When a writer can get themselves out of a pigeon-hole, writing more than one genre, (even in one poem!) this is a good writer. I have seen this from you lately, your versitility. Sunset Tears is well written with a latex twist...kudos...
Love,
Sage
Stat/U.S./Quo (Poetry) - 7/12/2008 11:26:35 PM
A brilliant write.
Sunset Tears (Poetry) - 7/12/2008 11:21:42 PM
A beautiful and romantic write.
Sunset Tears (Poetry) - 7/12/2008 4:09:54 PM
The lure of love or the lust of desire...either way we fall with open hearts and closed eyes far more often in our lifetimes than we should.
Good write
Fee
Sunset Tears (Poetry) - 7/12/2008 10:17:41 AM
Wow! Harsh... ...but honest. Thanks, H. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Good Knight Part III (Poetry) - 7/12/2008 7:15:23 AM
wonderfully evocative and provactive series..methinks this Knight needs to write more..
thoroughly enjoyed the series
Sunset Tears (Poetry) - 7/12/2008 4:59:39 AM
You are such a knave Sir Honey Jam! And yet I do believe you deserve a "Real" woman LOL! Loved the poem and the suprise ending.
Sunset Tears (Poetry) - 7/12/2008 4:25:40 AM
This is a sad poem and so true. The cyclops must waste its storm. What chance truth when the one-eyed monster is loose. As usual, no holds barred from HJ, well done. Tom
Sunset Tears (Poetry) - 7/12/2008 1:04:54 AM
HJ, most have take you an awful lot of time inflating her, no wonder you got windless after all that job!
But what matters is you twisting but good the panties of some readers.
Georg
Pousse'-cafe' (Poetry) - 7/11/2008 8:59:34 PM
LOL - What a hefty write and pict. you conjured up HJ!
MOre time to play!YOu sure have a fun way!
Great Poet you are by far....
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Lady Sheexooo
STay Positive!
Stat/U.S./Quo (Poetry) - 7/11/2008 8:54:57 PM
Thanks for sharing your wise heart HJ
on the unwise ways of this tragic world
I love monkey and always have, but not these kinds! NEVER Will1
Your commentary was filled to the brim in sad truth! YOU tell very well!
WE NEED A CHANGE and NOW!
WRITE ON!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady Sheexooo
STay Positive!
Sunset Tears (Poetry) - 7/11/2008 8:49:55 PM
Alright HJ
Very profound erotica indeed!
Passion oozed out from many lines!
This is super great surprising poetry from you heartfelt heart!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady Sheexoooo
STay Positive!
Sunset Tears (Poetry) - 7/11/2008 8:22:40 PM
HJ,
I am a bit speechless, your poem really rocked my world, tonight, I didn't expect this from the title, but man you packed a punch with your ending..Loved your passion, eroticism, and profound raw sexuality...
You are one fine poet!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber
"V"
Sunset Tears (Poetry) - 7/11/2008 7:35:28 PM
Good profounding written love poem. Words I would not even think about came into your write. I analyzed them and find them to be right. So good a write and it will be read by lots. A good write.
Sunset Tears (Poetry) - 7/11/2008 7:25:38 PM
HJ,
Your words are Sensual & Exotic & I Love This Beautiful Express!
This Is An Equisite Romantic Write, the Elegance of Love & Passion just flow from your pen!! Your words just captivated me!!
Very Beautiful Poetry!!
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie
Stat/U.S./Quo (Poetry) - 7/11/2008 1:25:08 PM
Hmmm... these monkeys look familiar... and your words ring brilliantly and devastatingly true. I wish it WERE "only" poetry... but alas and alack... tis fact, not fiction... or have I been spending too long in the ape house listening to idle chatter?? :)) A rockin write, Senor Cruz... perhaps a certain heavy metal band could put it to music... K xx
Good Knight Part 2 (Poetry) - 7/10/2008 5:07:27 PM
loved this, it spoke volumes
Stat/U.S./Quo (Poetry) - 7/10/2008 8:04:48 AM
Oh may, the people are awakening from that lethatgic catharsis and don't believe the Snake Oil Salesmen no more...but, what is left out there after the gold toothed barracudas left the table?
Sorry HJ, we have been telling them from twenty years back but nobody was listening mesmerized as they were by the machiavellic Hamelin's flute promising the sky but delivering us inside a big bottomless hole.
Georg
Stat/U.S./Quo (Poetry) - 7/7/2008 1:37:22 PM
Very sad but true excellent rant!
I must comment on your chosen picture
I heard we all have a double some where in the world
Now I know its true!!!
Brilliant commentary of the times we live in!!
Peace Love and Hugsssss...Morning Star
Stat/U.S./Quo (Poetry) - 7/7/2008 10:11:10 AM
A sad but timely commentary on the state of affairs. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Stat/U.S./Quo (Poetry) - 7/5/2008 7:34:23 PM
Drop Dead gorgeous, with a thinkin brain! I know yore Mama took one look at you and knew she had done good! SC
Stat/U.S./Quo (Poetry) - 7/4/2008 7:02:49 PM
A good commentary, should be passed on. Makes lots of sense as to what is happening in the world today.
Stat/U.S./Quo (Poetry) - 7/4/2008 8:45:11 AM
I'd say great rant, those pictures are a riot, funny as the kings of comedy
A letter to Mother (Poetry) - 7/1/2008 9:07:50 PM
Brilliant and beautiful write. Enjoyed very much.
Stat/U.S./Quo (Poetry) - 7/1/2008 7:17:10 PM
Exceptional rant and photos~`*
Stat/U.S./Quo (Poetry) - 7/1/2008 4:11:32 AM
Cute indeed..you take care OK see you soon hopefully....thank you also for all your reviews on my work....stay safe and well..keep smiling ,its a nice one...Hugssss
Love,
Chanti Lace
Stat/U.S./Quo (Poetry) - 7/1/2008 2:53:32 AM
H you truly do see and write the big picture. We need HELP and not from more monkies!!
Stat/U.S./Quo (Poetry) - 6/30/2008 4:05:56 AM
Good Rant - covered a lot, much mirrored in Europa too - could it be 'An Oily Tycoon...' in the bathtub instead? A position more open for all then? just a suggestion Mr Cruz - enjoyed the read, cheers
Stat/U.S./Quo (Poetry) - 6/29/2008 3:55:20 PM
You keeping on ranting, you make more sense than the monkey in the White House...Awesome commentary, when are we going to wake up?
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Stat/U.S./Quo (Poetry) - 6/29/2008 1:42:53 PM
EXcellant commentary on the times we live in.
Fee
Pousse'-cafe' (Poetry) - 6/24/2008 6:38:52 PM
Look but don't touch or you may be bounced out the door. Drink all the liquor you want, but please have a designated driver to get you home safely. Would hate to lose a good poet like you. Terrific write by the way.
Castrated (Poetry) - 6/23/2008 7:06:14 PM
WOWZERS! What have you been snortin or drinkin? All I can say is," I'll have what he's havin!" YAHOO! SC
Pousse'-cafe' (Poetry) - 6/23/2008 7:01:59 PM
So Little Booger likes to mountain climb! Ya gotta whach those Jello shots! After a few of those aint nobody lookin ugly! SC
Castrated (Poetry) - 6/23/2008 3:29:12 AM
LOL this is too much, you know, I get a lot of emails that promise my body a big, hard thing I don't even have!! Love your humor HJ.
Pousse'-cafe' (Poetry) - 6/23/2008 3:27:08 AM
Where did you find that picture LOL!! You are such a naughty boy Sir Honey Jam and you write such unique and explosive poetry with a twist of your own brand of humor. You should post your work more often.
Pousse'-cafe' (Poetry) - 6/20/2008 4:54:32 PM
LOL funny and sad that this has happened to many a gentleman~`*
Pousse'-cafe' (Poetry) - 6/18/2008 4:02:45 AM
Bravo Cruz. tbis is soooooooo lovely
Pousse'-cafe' (Poetry) - 6/10/2008 3:30:32 AM
Oh my,real cute indeed..have a wonderful and safe day..Hugss
Castrated (Poetry) - 6/9/2008 7:07:31 AM
Just What I Needed This Morning LOL :)
"In a world that wasn’t sexual
You wouldn’t ask for heterosexual,
Get an operation to be transsexual,
Open closets and scream homosexual."
Have a Fantastic Day!
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie
Pousse'-cafe' (Poetry) - 6/8/2008 12:06:11 PM
Love the write and the picture.
Fee
Pousse'-cafe' (Poetry) - 6/8/2008 10:14:31 AM
The Title alone is dinner! This is one of your better pieces..a pair of tits and I raise you two bits for a full house...get Big Betty to ante up, Cruz! I really liked this style...pour me another Tequila Sheila, where's Purple Passion Shee? She'll wolf one down with us...be well on your way, HJ...fire up your quill for some more of these twin peaks...
Sage
Pousse'-cafe' (Poetry) - 6/8/2008 8:53:34 AM
Ha ha that's what happens when you drink to much tequila
You know tequila my husbands calls it tekillyou
Sooooooo funny I guess you should just drank beer!
Excellent sensual thoughts write
Brilliant write still laughing
Peace Love and Hugessss....Morning star
Pousse'-cafe' (Poetry) - 6/7/2008 8:08:31 PM
What a witty way with words HJ!;-) This is a hoot..ET
Pousse'-cafe' (Poetry) - 6/7/2008 6:49:07 AM
LOL... I heard Big Betty knows how to throw down or was that called slammin? lol
Pousse'-cafe' (Poetry) - 6/7/2008 4:19:00 AM
In the barroom where dreams are made!!!!! Cute and humorous. The punch line caps the tale.
Pousse'-cafe' (Poetry) - 6/7/2008 4:11:24 AM
If you had hold yourself only to ice cold Coors...but you needed to chase that tequila with a Bud???!!! you traitor...
Georg
Good Knight Part III (Poetry) - 5/31/2008 3:51:20 PM
You speak of your stories with lots of glory!
I love to hear of your nobleness H J
Write On!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady -She-xoooo
STay Positive!
Good Knight Part 2 (Poetry) - 5/31/2008 3:45:33 PM
What wonderful imagery in your adventures H J and such passion.
Now, onto part 3
Write On!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple PaSsion Lady -She-
STay Positive!
Good Knight (Poetry) - 5/31/2008 3:41:49 PM
My Sir, You tell a wise wisdom filled tail!
Love your style H J
Glad you are back, recharged and ready to go wild! I see...
Write On!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple PaSsion Lady -She-xoooo
STay Positive!
Castrated (Poetry) - 5/31/2008 2:24:25 PM
To what do you owe of my pleasure of a visit, ? you ask.. I missed your style "H"
It's been awhile and all because of my choosing, so I plan to devour a few to my pleasing today and try harder to play catch up!
This poem tickles my funny bone!
Your style makes my mind roam!
Write On! My friend....
Stay Positive!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple PaSsion Lady -She-xoooo
STay Strong!
Castrated (Poetry) - 5/22/2008 7:24:07 PM
Lite and filled with humor.. When I saw the title , I wondered!!!! Am glad I read it.........M
Castrated (Poetry) - 5/19/2008 7:17:23 AM
...or a good Catholic! LOL! Please tell me eleven s enough! ROFLMAO!
This was way too funny!
(Hmmm? trying to imagine a world as such...CAN'T!!!)ha ha
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
Castrated (Poetry) - 4/30/2008 12:33:22 AM
You are so right HJ. People have to get over themselves before their light can shine. The sexual appendages are monuments to human failure. When we were wise there was no sex.
Great job, keep it up - pardon the pun!
Tom
Castrated (Poetry) - 4/29/2008 3:57:38 PM
Humorous with a message... I liked it.
Castrated (Poetry) - 4/28/2008 11:28:04 AM
quite a funny poem. Enjoyed!
Castrated (Poetry) - 4/28/2008 7:13:42 AM
Wow love this one funny but within this write
A very important message!
This poem brought many thoughts About The serious problem of Polygamist
Brilliant write!
Peace Love and Light...and hugessss...Morning Star
Castrated (Poetry) - 4/27/2008 9:52:45 AM
Glad I stopped long enough to catch this one...Very good and long time no hear. I don't have time yet to read many yet I'm so glad I paused on this. Cute to say the least. Hope all is well in your world. Lady J
Castrated (Poetry) - 4/27/2008 7:21:13 AM
The Big Bang - quite an ending, or perhaps, the very beginning? I guess, both.
Castrated (Poetry) - 4/27/2008 5:37:34 AM
How gay and glad i am to read
your write on nads and lads and spam
and wham and bang and thank you mam - lols and lollys and pops! xx
Castrated (Poetry) - 4/27/2008 2:12:17 AM
HJ, long time no see! welcome back with that kind of "bang" who needs Viagra? and I see that you still have that funny bone.
Georg
Castrated (Poetry) - 4/26/2008 9:03:08 PM
H J This is brilliant and a hoot besides, I love it! You outdid yourself;-)
Love,
ET
Castrated (Poetry) - 4/26/2008 7:51:10 PM
Well, Well, you came back with a bang!! Very hilarious, but very serious!
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Castrated (Poetry) - 4/26/2008 3:08:45 PM
Too funnny, you captured the humour of being a man in modern day world. Well done.
Fee
Ships of Relations (Poetry) - 4/26/2008 8:34:36 AM
The photo strongly complements these powerful verses. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Good Knight Part III (Poetry) - 4/20/2008 6:53:46 AM
This is wonderfully sustained, HJ, and I salute you for it! It's not easy to craft such a narrative with such convincing skill without losing something of the plot or the quality of the language. But you have maintained both and the result is quite epic! Well done! Kate xx
Good Knight Part III (Poetry) - 4/13/2008 10:25:24 AM
Thank you for sharing this poetic account. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Good Knight Part III (Poetry) - 4/9/2008 7:07:52 AM
Awesome write I love the fantastic imagery
your words captured I could almost see
like a movie in my mind playing
Oh and the tone was outstanding
Brilliant!!!!
Peace Love and Hugssssss...Morning Star
Good Knight Part III (Poetry) - 4/7/2008 2:59:41 PM
My goodness HJ you really went all out with this one and did a magnificent work!Kudo's!
Love,
ET
Good Knight Part III (Poetry) - 4/7/2008 3:09:11 AM
Sir Honey Jam this be a glimpse of apocolyptic carnage. Thou dost rattle the thoughts and pierce the hearts of thy readers with such vividness of image and sword-sharp words! Yea, tis sadly so for fools and widows caught in the wheels of war.
Good Knight Part III (Poetry) - 4/7/2008 1:29:47 AM
HJ, long time no see! ! ! welcome back! ! ! my body was out of town while I was here, illness you know, and now I see that you still have that sharp quill of yours to call a spade for a spade.
And very actual too.
Georg
Good Knight Part III (Poetry) - 4/6/2008 6:56:50 PM
HJ,
This is by far a superb ending...You never fail to impress me. Wonderful!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Good Knight Part III (Poetry) - 4/6/2008 6:06:16 PM
As always,well done dear man..take care...Hugsss
Good Knight Part III (Poetry) - 4/6/2008 12:46:52 PM
HJ,
Excellent Arthurian Write!
And A Nobel Poet Is Thee!
Embrassé
Vickie
Good Knight Part 2 (Poetry) - 4/4/2008 10:23:24 AM
Wow Part two it's very interesting
I love part one but I think these one
Its more powerful I too love Don Quixote!
Peace Love and Hugsssss...Morning Star
Good Knight Part 2 (Poetry) - 3/26/2008 2:47:48 PM
The well crafted hook has me deep my friend.....
Bill :-)
Good Knight Part 2 (Poetry) - 3/20/2008 11:15:42 AM
Ah Sir Honey Jam, thy plot dost thicken, as thy ale dost sicken!! Waiting for part three Sir.
Wilted Gardens (Poetry) - 3/20/2008 10:53:20 AM
Shocking and familiar in its reality. Love and hate are both so complex--multi-faceted, like raw crystals that become polished with the years and sometimes reflect off one another resulting in a very odd light. Thank you for sharing this.
A Yankee Doodle (Poetry) - 3/20/2008 7:23:58 AM
I'm with Ronald Hull... I agree with much, but not all. My 100% goes for your style of writing, though. What a creative idea, and very clipped, and precise in meaning. I love the weaving of the songs throughout it. LET FREEDOM RING !! That's for sure. --Charlie
Good Knight Part 2 (Poetry) - 3/16/2008 7:14:12 AM
Well done, great hook to interest you further. Lady J
Good Knight Part 2 (Poetry) - 3/15/2008 6:45:37 PM
This "Good Knight Part 2" has improved from part ONE in every form: rhythm sound and imagery; and the development of the subject dealt.
I am enjoying the series.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Good Knight Part 2 (Poetry) - 3/15/2008 10:49:35 AM
Another episode of daring and medievil meanderings told with flare and passion...well done.
Fee
Good Knight Part 2 (Poetry) - 3/15/2008 7:43:07 AM
Thanks for ataking us to better times, when dreams and illusion where going hand in hand with naivité.
To when man had chivalry and honor.
Georg
Good Knight Part 2 (Poetry) - 3/14/2008 7:48:35 PM
Heroic efforts to determine the birth of a Lancelot type or will it be the Guinnevere type? - last line is a cliffhanger. Perhaps there will be a lance left in the skid marks of the mud as a peace offering...I am swayed by the romance in Good Knight Part 2...
Warmly,
Sage
Good Knight Part 2 (Poetry) - 3/14/2008 7:34:32 PM
This reminds me of some great spoofs I've seen on film
of knights,Ladies, and their shennanagins !Excellent work!
Good Knight Part 2 (Poetry) - 3/14/2008 6:43:55 PM
Wonderful writing sweet man,enjoyed very much,can't wait for part 3..stay safe and well...Hugss
Good Knight (Poetry) - 3/12/2008 12:54:45 PM
A good beginning here...I always raise an eye brow when I hear someone say they wished they lived back in those days. For many reasons but the thought and how true of how a small cabin table would smell like in a sort time when such a knight "dropped" in. Lady J
Good Knight (Poetry) - 3/12/2008 12:49:32 PM
Welcome back and wow what a come back!
Love the vividness and imagery
Anxiously awaiting continuation!
Peace Love and hugssss....Morning Star
Good Knight (Poetry) - 3/10/2008 3:35:21 PM
Very interesting tale all brought to life, well told....
Be always safe,
Karen
Good Knight (Poetry) - 3/10/2008 2:45:04 PM
A wondrous tale Sir Honey Jam, we anxiously await the next part!
Good Knight (Poetry) - 3/10/2008 5:26:24 AM
Well you got my attention for sure...looking forward to next installment.
Fee
Good Knight (Poetry) - 3/10/2008 4:06:20 AM
I like this "Good Knight".
Appreciatively,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Good Knight (Poetry) - 3/10/2008 3:14:54 AM
When there were towers with fair maidens to free and dragons to slain, when the one on black armour was the bad dude and the one in shining armour on a white horse was the one getting the girl.
But, one can't just start a story and let the readers hanging like wet blankets in the wind...how many girls the dude in the white horse gets??????????????????
Georg
Good Knight (Poetry) - 3/9/2008 5:48:44 PM
Excellent writing,stay safe and well sweet man...Hugssssssssss
Good Knight (Poetry) - 3/9/2008 4:21:11 PM
Wonderful, looking forward to more. Tom
Good Knight (Poetry) - 3/9/2008 3:38:46 PM
Renaissance Festival in Larkspur this June, could use a Good Knight! It's time for a good joust and a turkey leg to absorb the grog. I love this style prose/poem/storytelling. This would be wonderful illustrated, H.J...continue, cruise on Cruz...be well my Colorado neighbor...see you at Donkey Derby Days in Cripple Creek in full armor and brass spittoon...
Warmly,
Sage
Good Knight (Poetry) - 3/9/2008 3:22:48 PM
H.J.,
Enjoyed and delightful.
Good voice - I know that was some work.
~D.
Ships of Relations (Poetry) - 2/23/2008 10:35:48 PM
Fantastic! A brilliant write.
Wilted Gardens (Poetry) - 12/27/2007 4:42:11 AM
Wow! This powerful piece scraped the skin off of my body just reading it! The words nearly brought me to tears. You have a gift for bringing emotion to the surface with your words. Well done! -=ra=-
The springtime of our youth (Poetry) - 12/27/2007 4:38:51 AM
Hmmm...expertly rendered nostalgia for days gone by. I was entranced by the rhythm and flow of your writing. The imagery is evocative and strong. Lovely piece. Thanks for sharing. Reminds me of many a lost love. -=ra=-
Free Gas! (Poetry) - 12/19/2007 9:45:46 PM
What a great sense oh humor you have. Enjoyed.
Ode to the Seduction Sisters (Poetry) - 12/12/2007 9:51:41 AM
So clever and very distracting... must be why I didn't remember to review this when reading it at the time, HJ! Fair bursts with oggling images and boggling diction. Pretty kitties left you feelin skitty, huh?! :)) Love, Kate xx
Santa somebody (Poetry) - 11/30/2007 9:09:12 PM
A beautiful and touching write. Enjoyed.
Ode to the Seduction Sisters (Poetry) - 10/29/2007 12:06:05 PM
Wow what a witty wordsmith you are <-- unintended alliteration.
A teasingly good write. Thanks for the smiles. :-) Seems the ladies have inspired you well.
Chanti
When Wal-Mart comes to town (Poetry) - 10/27/2007 3:32:06 AM
Yea' isn't technology great?
they push it over there, to make more towns aware, as prices soar
from all over.
I hope our next generation can learn a thing or two!
Wonderful Write H!
Warmly, Warrior Lady Sheeeoox
STay Positive!
Ships of Relations (Poetry) - 10/27/2007 3:22:43 AM
WOW! This is EXCELLENT Sir CRuz!
YOu 0utdid yourself on your thinking and writing here!
I feel a sad pain, in your wording!
Hang In!
WArmly, WArrior Lady Sheeeoox
STay Positive!
Ships of Fools, can be many thoughts and relationships in depth!
Love the X-ray pict. Way Kewl! Passing Time, I see...
Ode to the Seduction Sisters (Poetry) - 9/29/2007 4:35:49 PM
Gosh...now that some time has passed I wonder how Big she says it is now! LOL!
Too freakin' funny!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
Ships of Relations (Poetry) - 9/29/2007 11:28:33 AM
I especially love the photo my friend....Beautiful work.....
:-)
Wilted Gardens (Poetry) - 9/10/2007 10:19:12 AM
Bittersweet. A powerful write.
Once upon an ego (Poetry) - 9/10/2007 10:02:27 AM
An excellent write. Enjoyed the read. Very nice.
The springtime of our youth (Poetry) - 8/28/2007 12:33:25 AM
Another great write. you are a gifted writer. Well done. Thanks for sharing.
Ode to the Seduction Sisters (Poetry) - 8/20/2007 2:27:51 PM
CREATIVE, ENTERTAINING, ENJOYABLE AND OH SO POINTED.
A Yankee Doodle (Poetry) - 8/8/2007 11:19:50 PM
Powerful! Excellent write. enjoyed the read. Thanks for sharing.
Ode to the Seduction Sisters (Poetry) - 8/5/2007 5:29:16 AM
H J --
The picture and caption do not say it all. not at all.
great,
Kathy
