Perfect (Poetry) - 3/8/2008 4:27:57 PM
This is incredibly powerful. Really well done. There's a lot of pain here. But, more importantly, there's much personal insight and strength. I don't know if this is about you, or not, but I hope MANY women read it and find liberation. Wonderful write. JD
Drowning (Poetry) - 12/19/2007 7:59:02 PM
Now thats what I call love. Great Poem Tina!
Drowning (Poetry) - 4/21/2007 2:09:40 PM
Inviting, passionate and provocative.
It's skinny-dipping time, for sure.
Of course, what's being talked about is not love but making love.
And I'm reminded that one-night stands usually fall (though it may take a fortnight or so to bottom out).
Still, who can feel the power of love sans making love? If you can figure out how to own that in a fulfilling way, you can keep it to yourself. I'll take the whole package, thank you.
Richard
P.S.
Did I tell you that after reading your poem Drowning I'm putting in a diving board? (Okay, so I don't have a swimming pool. I'm sure my softly lighted bedroom will suffice. Be spontaneous!)
Secret Admirer (Poetry) - 4/2/2007 6:32:06 AM
Very nice.....a poetic expression of the love one reaches for from a distance, each line of thought expresses the intensity with which desire and passion are on the brink of merging....
very nice.....
a very enjoyable poem....
enjoyed.....Art Sun...
Drowning (Poetry) - 3/15/2007 2:25:57 PM
This is great! Makes me want to take swimming lessons for sure!
Drowning (Poetry) - 2/4/2007 7:42:38 PM
What a wonderful way to drown... in the love of one whom you hold dear! Great write, my Sister!
RM Green
Secret Admirer (Poetry) - 1/30/2007 9:20:24 AM
A stunning view of your sensuality
And very romantic and very intense yearning
Excellent view of thoughts!!
Excellent imagery painted with your words!!
Love And Peace to You...Morning Star
Drowning (Poetry) - 1/26/2007 1:26:32 PM
okkkkkkkkkkkkk, great love poetry Tina Martin
Drowning (Poetry) - 1/14/2007 8:31:46 AM
What a write! Your title drew me in, for I am very afraid of water, due to a near drowning experience when I was a teen...but this kind of drowning, no fear there..loved it! Great write my friend!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Drowning (Poetry) - 1/13/2007 10:29:19 PM
drowning in love....how nicely expressed...
enjoyed the view.....Art Sun...
Drowning (Poetry) - 1/13/2007 9:16:41 PM
Very intense, electrifying, and daring, a great illusion concept, I love it!!
Drowning (Poetry) - 1/13/2007 8:49:11 PM
yes, this is excellent metaphor ...
Secret Admirer (Poetry) - 1/13/2007 7:11:48 PM
A passionate plea; your verse are replete with the intensity of yearning. Well done, Tina. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Drowning (Poetry) - 1/13/2007 7:08:49 PM
A fine metaphorical write, Tina. That would be a wonderful way of learning how to swim. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Secret Admirer (Poetry) - 12/17/2006 10:31:19 AM
But the candle will still be hid. Quite an intriguing poem. Victor
Secret Admirer (Poetry) - 12/17/2006 9:34:38 AM
I LOVE your poem about passion from afar.. been there and done that too! I am looking forward to reading more from you...
Peace & Blessings,
RM Green
