Vampyre II (Short Story) - 1/27/2007 7:57:43 AM
Let it be me, Sir?
The Chieftain (Short Story) - 1/7/2007 10:09:13 AM
Dear J L Day I realy liked your story and would love to hear more story's of Scotland during its fight of freedom from england if you have anymore story's of Scotland let me know ok Sincerely your's Alma.
Vampyre (Short Story) - 1/3/2007 11:34:27 AM
Leading up to a mystery! Can't wait to see what happens.
Vampyre II (Short Story) - 1/3/2007 11:30:54 AM
Very interesting!
Vampyre II (Short Story) - 1/3/2007 8:32:22 AM
Chilling, but very good! Very well done! :)
The Chieftain (Short Story) - 12/21/2006 4:25:33 PM
Excellent! :)
Meeting Angel (Short Story) - 12/21/2006 10:33:14 AM
Well this story stumped me. On one hand it negates all my ideas of what angels are, on the other I found it well constructed and interesting, vivid with pictures and images. So I'll allow poetic licence as to what angels are, and say, an excellent story. Victor
Life? (Poetry) - 7/14/2008 3:56:13 PM
Sorry you feel this way. I do sometimes too and must get myself positive when I feel this way. We are all here for a purpose til God calls us home. Get your thoughts in better order if you can and then post us an encouraging message to read if you will.
Life? (Poetry) - 7/13/2008 10:26:23 PM
You have the power within to change those things you can change. We are the masters of our destiny under God's gentle guidence....
Be always safe,
Karen
Dying to Live (Poetry) - 8/27/2007 12:49:26 AM
Man must struggle against his destiny, but for those who believe, they can find consolation for "my yoke is easy and my burden light". Victor PS Sorry I read this so late. But I was not informed by AD about your poem.
Dying to Live (Poetry) - 8/5/2007 12:45:53 PM
I hope that this is a work of imagination JL, because if it isn't, and you are writing about your own struggles, all I can say is that my heart goes out to you. I've been there and experienced what you speak of here, and the memory of those struggles leaves me debilitated. Blessings ...
Richard
Dying to Live (Poetry) - 8/5/2007 10:38:24 AM
J.L. written in simplicity but provoking and profound. Life is hard to handle but I would image it's even harder if the one we share it with is not connected to us and it's strangling us from no feelings or love and you want out because you want to escape. Sad but I do think it's an exceptional write.
Summer Comes (Poetry) - 7/29/2007 5:36:38 PM
You wrote it so well I could SMELL it. Nice work!
Summer Comes (Poetry) - 6/14/2007 10:21:39 AM
J.L., I was living every line in this poem, the images, sounds, and your voice were great!
Summer Comes (Poetry) - 6/14/2007 8:37:32 AM
Yes I can JL ... but for us it's bluejays, scrubjays, falcons, and mocking birds that are heralding summer where we live. A fine write! Blessings ...
Richard
25 Years (Poetry) - 6/6/2007 9:34:13 PM
You are both certainly blessed, twenty five years, a milestone of love and sharing.....
Be safe,
Karen
25 Years (Poetry) - 6/6/2007 5:18:51 PM
J.L., what a wonderful tribute to your wonderful wife. Isn't it a great feeling to look in the face of the one you've loved all those years and still get gooseflesh as you kiss her lips. It makes me so happy to read about a happy couple...I've been truly blessed to so I know exactly how you feel. Live each day to the fullest and be thankful you captured a true love.
25 Years (Poetry) - 6/6/2007 2:53:29 AM
J.L.,
Excellent feelings. Like the old saying goes, "Tomorrow is the first day for the rest of your life." Congratulations on your accomplishment. May all your Days be filled with love, joy and blessings.
25 Years (Poetry) - 6/5/2007 8:25:12 PM
'As I become a new Day.
This is a clever play on words. A touching tribute to your lovely wife. Twenty-five years is a number to be proud of in marriage Jeff. Welcome back!
Light and Wisdom ...
Richard
25 Years (Poetry) - 6/5/2007 7:13:26 PM
Hun that is one of the most romantic things I have ever read!!! Loved it! Sandi
On This Day (Poetry) - 4/8/2007 7:52:45 PM
This was just beautiful to read. So very inspirational, touched my heart. Thank you.
Be safe,
Karen
On This Day (Poetry) - 4/8/2007 1:20:30 PM
A beautiful penned poem...I felt such compassion from the voice contained within this writing. Thank God for His precious son, Jesus Christ, His death provided Christians an eternal life!
On This Day (Poetry) - 4/8/2007 1:06:52 PM
OUR VICTORY WOn indeed he conquered death and gave us grace, peace and eternal life to those that will believe,..... Thank you for sharing your poetic voice and faith this Joyous Easter Day!
Joselyn
On This Day (Poetry) - 4/8/2007 8:53:05 AM
"But the miracle
Unfolds at the
Very next step."
Yes indeed Jeff ... His resurrection is what gives all men, who believe, a future in Him. And what an incredible future it will be. Poignantly penned. Welcome back!
Light and Wisdom ...
Grandma's Kitchen (Poetry) - 3/24/2007 6:55:22 PM
What a lovely way of remembering your grandmother. I wish everyone could find a way to express that special feeling.
Now I'm a grandma, and loving it. I think your poem is special and comes straight from your heart and memories. The way it should with all poems. Poems to me are nothing more than a way to express what we have loved, do love and will love.
Great going here.
Bliss (Poetry) - 3/20/2007 4:22:49 AM
Beautiful Jeff.
I know it makes me feel as if I need the attention of someone so attentive.
Jacks
Knock At The Door (Revised) (Poetry) - 2/23/2007 3:11:13 PM
Makes me think of folks who live with chronic pain
of a physical kind
but i imagine this poem speaks of the spirtual agony, aka deperession
Does Dr Kavorkian still practice???
pax A
Knock At The Door (Revised) (Poetry) - 1/28/2007 9:40:42 AM
yeah......that is how it is sometimes
leave that door closed
enjoyed this....
Knock At The Door (Revised) (Poetry) - 1/27/2007 7:57:02 AM
It makes me very sad jeff that you would think along such sombre lines.
A great piece!
Knock At The Door (Revised) (Poetry) - 1/26/2007 1:37:54 PM
I like what you did with the flow and the form. Death will only come when you wish it WOULDN'T. lol And you don't HAVE to open the door to those other guys.
Knock At The Door (Revised) (Poetry) - 1/26/2007 10:30:10 AM
"Knock At The Door (Revised)"
An intriguing write, and I enjoyed the reading.
The flow and the scenario were wonderful.
Thank you for sharing,
From the Heart of an Artist Quiet Storm
Knock At The Door (Revised) (Poetry) - 1/26/2007 10:16:43 AM
J.L., death is held in the hands of one man only and it won't come until it's your time. Now, to reply about this poem, the flow is good and each line has much meaning. A lot of time, us readers, read something into a piece that may only be figments of the writers words.
Knock At The Door (Revised) (Poetry) - 1/26/2007 10:10:07 AM
Death will come in its own time and very often it will take you unawares. Victor
Knock At The Door (Revised) (Poetry) - 1/26/2007 9:54:15 AM
KNOCK ... KNOCK ... KNOCK ... Pizza Hut ... (-:
You are a dark creative force Jeff. But you write with a certain hopefulness and longing that is infectious. The poem flows great!
Light and Wisdom ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Know Me (Poetry) - 1/15/2007 1:16:24 PM
A self-revealing account; very interesting and engaging. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Know Me (Poetry) - 1/15/2007 12:52:32 PM
Ahhh.. YOur heart was worn on your sleeve J.L.!
I like the deep thinking in this!
WArmest HuGs,Warrior Sheeeooxx
Know Me (Poetry) - 1/13/2007 8:54:26 PM
Excellent! Very much enjoyed the peek inside the man.
Cruel Jester (Poetry) - 1/13/2007 9:01:21 AM
Awesome passion. Someday you will cherish it. Beautiful write.
Know Me (Poetry) - 1/12/2007 5:39:24 PM
wonderfully great adventure this is
this poem has great imagesand I really enjoyed this
dark and exciting write
Know Me (Poetry) - 1/12/2007 1:35:12 PM
Deep thoughts here, man is a paradox..
BTW I used to work over the pond at Dyess AFB...
Dreaming of a Goddess (Poetry) - 1/12/2007 9:59:33 AM
Great descriptions although I expect a story to have some action. Victor
Know Me (Poetry) - 1/12/2007 1:41:11 AM
Dark poem, fascinating write. Victor
Know Me (Poetry) - 1/11/2007 7:07:34 PM
thought provoking intros pection ... tears of laughter cleanse the soul ....
Know Me (Poetry) - 1/11/2007 2:56:39 PM
J.L., this is interesting! No one ever knows what's in the mind of another and no one knows the sadness, pain and tribulations another has had to endure; therefore, each does have his/her own song to sing. "One side has dark and smoldering eyes, they lock on conquest and conquer on domain." This says a lot! I like this deep thinker!
Not Being Able To Write (Poetry) - 1/9/2007 3:45:29 PM
J.L., Yes, I think all writers feel a need to release something that is choking us to death. Write and release it...once it is said, "All will be well inside." Fears can rob us of our will to get out the words that hold us captive. It could be something the world is waiting to hear...don't hold back, your words might help another person.
Not Being Able To Write (Poetry) - 1/9/2007 2:13:05 PM
Who hasn't suffered from writer's block. Same as stage fright. Just write what comes to mind and you will find inspiration. Read a lot too. Victor
Not Being Able To Write (Poetry) - 1/9/2007 12:52:01 PM
Yes, been there,done that!! Hugs, Laura
Like Two Ships (Poetry) - 1/8/2007 2:54:04 PM
She must have been incredible Jeff. This write reads like a paean to momentary pleasure/or, to the sensual works of imagination.
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Cruel Jester (Poetry) - 1/8/2007 2:48:47 PM
Man ... I haven't kissed the hours away since I was in my twenties. Seems now-a-days all you have time for is a coupla slobbery ones and a couple pecks each day. You are a romantic Jeff my man, and this write proves it.
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Cruel Jester (Poetry) - 1/8/2007 10:56:23 AM
Life is what you make it. Victor
Like Two Ships (Poetry) - 1/8/2007 10:53:58 AM
A short love affair described as a two ships in a storm. Vivid imagination. Victor
You Never Looked Back (Poetry) - 1/8/2007 10:51:03 AM
I don't think she deserves much consideration. Egoism is to be abhorred. Victor
Cruel Jester (Poetry) - 1/8/2007 10:46:23 AM
J.L., this is a good read & I love the ending. Enjoyed!
Calling (Poetry) - 1/5/2007 9:16:01 AM
I enjoy the enjoyable
loved the way you take the reader
along seducing and entertaining
i too love a great vampire tale/poem/story etc.
Calling (Poetry) - 1/3/2007 2:25:46 PM
You're such a secret....... I Love it!
Dark and bewildering! Ahhhhh.... I have some REAL Kewl picts...
that would go with this poem/write and page from a Great Vamp write...
I do - I do
I love the dark side of the mind! heart and soul!
Your imagery is utterly amazing my friend~
Super GREAT!
I have the collect. of Dracula, and My total favorite is the "Crow", Dark Shadows, and Vincent Price - Oh my - he is sublime...
Warm HuGs,Sheee
Calling (Poetry) - 1/3/2007 11:37:21 AM
The images here are fascinating and interesting!
Calling (Poetry) - 1/2/2007 9:26:37 PM
Sucks!!! I hate bats especially when they turn to vampires. I'll never forget the first film I saw, Dracula. Couldn't sleep afterwards. You did well in this description. Victor
Calling (Poetry) - 1/2/2007 4:01:52 PM
very well written ... the imagery and story line is captivating ...
Reprieve (Poetry) - 1/2/2007 12:53:46 PM
I never thought I would see death and orgasmic relief in the same thought process. You paint a dark despondent character here Jeff that seems taken directly from the pages of Poe himself. Well done poet!
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Reprieve (Poetry) - 1/2/2007 12:14:15 PM
This is a description of an individual personal hell. Very powerful. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Reprieve (Poetry) - 1/2/2007 11:08:50 AM
J.L., I felt every word of this poem...it reached in and grabed at my soul and made me yearn to be able to say or do something that would bring an end to such suffering. "I melt into a puddle of despair and dream silent dreams of deaths sweet reprieve." This says so much!
Reprieve (Poetry) - 1/2/2007 10:10:20 AM
Sincerely dark!
Nonetheless an excellent write J.
Sincerely,
From the Heart...
Reprieve (Poetry) - 1/2/2007 9:56:00 AM
In such a situation, death would be a reprieve. Great dark poem. Victor
Thanksgiving Recipe (Poetry) - 12/31/2006 9:54:15 PM
Just beautiful, JL. Reminds me of Thanksgiving on my Grandma's farm. Great times. Many people missed.
Words Fail Me Now (Poetry) - 12/29/2006 11:41:02 AM
Goodness do you set the stage with your first strophe. You paint a fine picture of your muse Jeff, with delicious imagery and simile. Very accessible to the senses. 9th stanza ... your or you?
Light and Wisdom ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Words Fail Me Now (Poetry) - 12/29/2006 11:10:50 AM
Blimey good discriptions...I worked over there at Dyess AFB, stayed at the embassey suits...Keep dreamin...
Beyond the Veil (Poetry) - 12/29/2006 10:15:43 AM
Great prose that shows great imagination. Victor
Words Fail Me Now (Poetry) - 12/29/2006 10:04:07 AM
Great description and lovely tribute to your dream woman. Victor
Words Fail Me Now (Poetry) - 12/29/2006 8:57:20 AM
It is 3am and I think I shall go back to bed and dream. You certainly have set the scene for one.
Beyond the Veil (Poetry) - 12/29/2006 8:43:22 AM
J.L., what a touching prose poem...the evils that often touch so many people's minds can only be echoed through words but never the true reality of what the person is actually feeling inside can be felt but by the person suffering it. No, no, no one knows the torture another lives with every day. I truly hope peace will come!
Words Fail Me Now (Poetry) - 12/29/2006 8:33:31 AM
As your fantasy came to reality, your soul said, "NO." I liked this!
Words Fail Me Now (Poetry) - 12/29/2006 8:08:13 AM
No, I don't think after reading this stunning write that you my friend would ever be at a loss for words. This is simply a stunning and about the most romantic poem I've read in a long time...this is the poem that every woman dreams of reading...lucky lady my friend. Great write, enjoyed....so glad I stopped by.
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Beyond the Veil (Poetry) - 12/29/2006 7:19:22 AM
Powerful prose and thoughts so many emotions. The silver thread lies in Jesus he can overcome all the pain, suffering, depression. Thank you for sharing this one.
Blessed and Prosperous New Year 2007 With all that heaven has to offer for you.
Joselyn
Epiphany (Poetry) - 12/29/2006 2:00:12 AM
Jeff, you always amaze with me with your sacrosanct grip on reality and how best to present it.
A lovely poem. Heartfelt and true.
Jackie
Epiphany (Poetry) - 12/28/2006 2:49:50 PM
I loved you poem. Especially the use of mirrors. Very heartfelt and surreal.
Epiphany (Poetry) - 12/28/2006 2:38:51 PM
Epiphany is a divine revelation. Your revelation was quite harsh. A poem to ponder on. Victor
Epiphany (Poetry) - 12/28/2006 1:53:34 PM
J.L., this left me in awe and left me thinking! Sometimes we don't see the image of ourselves unless we get a good reflection. This is a great reason for all of us to take a good look at ourselves and ask the question...why "we" (he/she) can't seem to loose yourself in me? I liked this!
Epiphany (Poetry) - 12/28/2006 12:02:10 PM
Such self-reflections and admissions; smooth as gentle waves leading to a crescendo. Well done, J.L.
Micke
Epiphany (Poetry) - 12/28/2006 11:45:09 AM
Jeff ...
This is fine flowing thought process. Although the revelation was instantaneous, there are still so many "bits and pieces" that make up the whole of it. You captured them well.
A lot of your poetry has an underlying theme of self awareness, and also, confronting self with an element of abhorrence and dissatisfaction attached. I like this - it's real, and everyone deals with it from time to time.
I wrote a poem along these same lines entitled CRACKED MIRRORS.
Light and Wisdom ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Epiphany (Poetry) - 12/28/2006 11:17:22 AM
well written...it reads smoothly, as a monologue. very, very sad, but a description of a defining moment that can be taken in various ways.
Susan
Reflecting on Mary (Poetry) - 12/28/2006 4:38:58 AM
wow, this is a keeper
happy holidays
pax A
Reflecting on Mary (Poetry) - 12/28/2006 4:30:45 AM
Our Lady did not know the fetails of future events, but she was told by Simeon that a sword would pierce her heart. Despite this, she cared for Him for thirty whole years, and she stood tall beneath the cross. Tradition holds that she was so distressed that she could not even cry. Great poem. Victor
Reflecting on Mary (Poetry) - 12/27/2006 11:34:00 AM
"Reflecting on Mary"
J. L. a powerfully exquisite and prophetic artwork.
Heartfelt I love it indeed!
Deep down I think she did know the outcome, that is why she was chosen, she could accept without hesitation.
Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem,
From the Heart of an Artist Quiet Storm
Reflecting on Mary (Poetry) - 12/27/2006 8:27:27 AM
A fine write about one of the two most important events that have happened on planet Earth. It touched me Jeff. Well done!
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Reflecting on Mary (Poetry) - 12/27/2006 8:17:00 AM
Oh, J.L. this is so inspiring and well thought out. I like every verse because each one contains truth & emotions. I've often wondered how Mary felt to have given birth to a son and a Heavenly Father...awesome!
Thanksgiving Recipe (Poetry) - 12/26/2006 9:53:23 AM
Glad you enjoyed your Thanksgiving Day. Of course here in Malta we don't have this feast. Usually it is Christmas that brings families together. Victor
Thanksgiving Recipe (Poetry) - 12/24/2006 7:27:46 PM
J.L., this sounds like our family. I like the images and the sense of smell this brings to the reader
Thanksgiving Recipe (Poetry) - 12/24/2006 7:04:25 PM
What a great way to spend any holiday or for that matter to just spend a weekend with family. This is what quality time is meant for. Great write my friend...sounds a lot like our holidays here.
Blessings and Merry Christmas,
Joyce Bowling
Thanksgiving Recipe (Poetry) - 12/24/2006 3:31:41 PM
This sounds like the best way to spend Thanksgiving, though I don't allow myself to overeat anymore. Not for reasons of any diet, but because I just don't like to feel that uncomfortable. Admittedly, I take a second plate of everything home with me and enjoy it later or the next day. There is just nothing like the holidays, family and wonderful food. This was an excellent and entertaining offering, thank you.
Take care,
Sherry
Thanksgiving Recipe (Poetry) - 12/24/2006 2:32:19 PM
Sounds like a special day in the life of a thankful and loving family Jeff.
Light and Wisdom ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Grandma's Kitchen (Poetry) - 12/24/2006 10:53:04 AM
Wonderful memories and a fine tribute; thank you for sharing them. Blessings to you,
Regis
Beltaine Dance (Poetry) - 12/23/2006 1:48:13 PM
You have shared the aura of this write most effectively. Thank you. Blessings to you,
Regis
Beltaine Dance (Poetry) - 12/23/2006 4:57:05 AM
A fleeting smile,
a darting kiss,
within our fire white embers hiss.
Prancing by,
a grazing touch,
soft moans in throats
that say so much
I love this poem . . . GREAT job!
Beltaine Dance (Poetry) - 12/22/2006 10:50:57 AM
This poem is very flowing. You did well. Victor
Grandma's Kitchen (Poetry) - 12/22/2006 9:43:35 AM
This is heartwarming! I love the sense of smell and the images portrayed in this piece. It is as though I'm there in the kitchen...
Beltaine Dance (Poetry) - 12/22/2006 9:38:46 AM
"We feel plight, this blessful night, all is good and all is right."
I've come back to your site J.L and I've been reading some of your poems. I must say, you certainly have a wonderful perspective of things and I'm so glad you're sharing with other readers. I like you poetry much and I've put you in my Tracker Log. You write with much tenderness and caring...love it!
Beltaine Dance (Poetry) - 12/22/2006 9:31:55 AM
Unique poem on an ancient theme.
Fire's energy
Mingled ash
Through door of destiny
My form and my match
Sage,
'An it harm none, do what ye shall'...Blessed Be
Vampires Lament (Poetry) - 12/21/2006 1:24:16 PM
Wow..........way cool! I love vampire lore......its creepy and tantalizing. This is told in the style I love, the melody, is hypnotic, and the story classic. Saw your website, browsed a bit, you are an interesting writer, ty for the note of praise you sent earlier today, I am flattered, and as far as I can see, you are more than on the right tract...leagues beyond me
I have one vampire poem on my site, called Vampire Operetta.......if you want to take a peek!
pax A
Into Port (Poetry) - 12/21/2006 1:19:52 PM
To me this speaks of the human spirit of determination. There is a note of optimism here as well, and the tenacity of hope. This ship does Not sink............it has an eternal quality of its course
Very well expressed I'd say!!!
Into Port (Poetry) - 12/21/2006 10:03:09 AM
Enjoyed
Into Port (Poetry) - 12/21/2006 9:54:12 AM
Quite a surprise ending, splendid dark poem of a soul rejected by all. Victor
Into Port (Poetry) - 12/21/2006 9:17:37 AM
Jeff ...
Certainly I saw the ship as a metaphor for a persons life - and in the last line you resolved that very well. The write is filled with colorful and tactile imagery and produces in this reader the ambiance of the scenes painted.
Light and Wisdom ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
The Solitude of Lonliness (Alone, revised) (Poetry) - 12/21/2006 8:45:59 AM
It is alone.
It is empty.
It is, I.
Very compelling endinig to this well penned poem! I had thought you were writing about a lonesome tree in west Texas...what with the drought so bad this year. Enjoyed...
Micke
Grandma's Kitchen (Poetry) - 12/21/2006 8:36:51 AM
Thanks for this, J.L.; a great tribute you've penned for your Grandma. I, too, have many beautiful memories of my Grandmas, and the wonderful aromas from their kitchens!
Welcome to A.D. :o)
Micke
The Solitude of Lonliness (Alone, revised) (Poetry) - 12/20/2006 11:36:19 PM
J
"The Solitude of Lonliness"
Sensationally beautiful and dually sad.
Bitter sweet~"it searches the horizon
in hope of discovering someone,
anyone, bringing relief into its life."
Sincerely,
From the Heart of an Artist Quiet Storm
The Solitude of Lonliness (Alone, revised) (Poetry) - 12/20/2006 2:48:15 PM
I truly loved this piece of poetry! I hope to see another piece written about living life to its fullest. This poetry is great!
The Solitude of Lonliness (Alone, revised) (Poetry) - 12/20/2006 12:03:33 PM
Very interesting approach Jeff - loneliness as the protagonist looking out at the desolation that surrounds him. This is potently written and threaded with complimentary imagery to the overall message.
A dark quill that paints a desolate and frightening place to be.
Light and Wisdom ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Grandma's Kitchen (Poetry) - 12/19/2006 12:00:11 PM
A very tactile and evocative write. Well written and touching.
Light and Wisdom ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Grandma's Kitchen (Poetry) - 12/19/2006 11:11:51 AM
Absolutely beautiful. Makes me remember both grandmas' kitchens. And one grandma was known for making biscuits as if they did come from heaven.
Grandma's Kitchen (Poetry) - 12/19/2006 10:39:37 AM
A great tribute to your grandma and a lovely memory to share. Victor
