You Creep (Poetry) - 3/2/2019 12:52:36 PM
Truly an unsettling thought.
You Creep (Poetry) - 12/8/2018 4:03:06 AM
A thought of a vision that would always creep into our dreams while we sleep - yes, I have donne it many times before because I dream every time I sleep.
Sandie
Do You Know? (Poetry) - 12/8/2018 3:55:17 AM
You write like the way I used to write my love poems years ago. Very sweet and romantic! Your poem is speaking to someone you love.
Sandie :)
You Creep (Poetry) - 12/5/2018 10:03:30 AM
Creepy but true. Our dreams sometimes carry our greatest fears. In a very short poem, you have shared with us one of our greatest fears.
Ron
You Creep (Poetry) - 12/5/2018 8:57:01 AM
Wouldn't it be nice if we could control our dreams, and choose what we dream about?
What's That Sound? (Poetry) - 7/21/2018 4:56:32 PM
Beautifully penned and emotive.
What's That Sound? (Poetry) - 5/8/2018 8:17:04 AM
You make sound out to be a mystery. To me the most un-mysterious sound there is, is the sound of birds twerping in the morning and the morning dove's mournful call to its mate.
Ron
What's That Sound? (Poetry) - 5/7/2018 5:02:18 PM
The sound of silence can be moulded into any kind of sound, depending on how we feel. You are hearing good sound, and that is good.
Sandie
Grant Me Two Nights (Poetry) - 5/6/2018 9:04:13 AM
You have touched a point that so many ways for… Just another chance to rekindle those feelings that once were there. Very genuine and sad in a way, because that wish rarely happens to come true.
Ron
Grant Me Two Nights (Poetry) - 5/5/2018 11:35:36 AM
yes, you write in depths of your rich instincts of a feminine, with all the power of Mother Nature. . . (BTW: the Mother's Day is coming) Enjoyed reading this desperately beautiful poetry. Cheers, alex
Love You Strong (Poetry) - 4/27/2018 5:31:34 AM
Sad poem, but hopefully you are able to put this love at rest, and get on with your life without even thinking of this lost one.
Haunting Love (Poetry) - 4/21/2018 9:37:09 AM
I completely understand, and agree with every line of this one.
Haunting Love (Poetry) - 4/21/2018 8:30:53 AM
lyric quality, nicely done
m
Haunting Love (Poetry) - 4/20/2018 8:34:33 AM
That repetition reminds me of cyclic dreams that I have at night. The kind of nagging, haunting that you want to wake up from and get away from.
Ron
Haunting Love (Poetry) - 4/18/2018 11:47:34 AM
this is the case when yes is no, but no is yes. . . sitting on the fence? No. It's just the haunting passion people use to name love. I love this ditty. Cheers, alex
Goodbye (Poetry) - 4/18/2018 4:13:55 AM
A clean break is better than a long goodbye.
Goodbye (Poetry) - 4/14/2018 6:55:58 AM
your simple words are so touchable. . . and this is due to your rhythm which is bulky, multi-dimensional, I'd say. Thank you for your sharing with some gems from your feelings collection. Cheers, alex
Goodbye (Poetry) - 4/11/2018 5:50:42 AM
Even though we invest so much sometimes, love can be a fickle thing and turn us down.
Nicely expressed about your love that didn't turn out the way you planned.
Ron
Goodbye (Poetry) - 4/10/2018 7:49:30 AM
a very touching poem Sylvia, thanks for sharing
Goodbye (Poetry) - 4/10/2018 6:49:54 AM
Heartbreaking poetry of love shunned, leaving only tidbits of what could have been. Love! I wonder sometimes why we chase after it.
The Death of a Romance (Poetry) - 4/10/2018 6:32:54 AM
The death of a romance was spot on, with much depth and heartfelt
Love You Strong (Poetry) - 4/9/2018 10:28:36 AM
Love can carve quiet a chasm in our tender hearts dear poet. I feel the emotion of your tender soul. Love can change us and then walk away done.
Love You Strong (Poetry) - 4/8/2018 9:27:43 AM
this piece has knocked me out with its preciseness of expressing my emotional state at the moment. . . nothing is new under the moon unless it touches you 'hard and deeply' to your marrow. Cheers, alex
Love You Strong (Poetry) - 4/8/2018 7:14:24 AM
There is certainly something troubling in this love. And your poem is a fine example of a "Dear John" letter.
Ron
Love You Strong (Poetry) - 4/8/2018 6:53:41 AM
Beautiful write. I'd say it's time to move on.
Tree (Poetry) - 4/8/2018 2:26:27 AM
lovely sentiment, lovely read
Never Stop Writing!
m
Tree (Poetry) - 4/7/2018 5:37:39 PM
This poem left me feeling tree-rific.
Tree (Poetry) - 4/7/2018 4:44:22 PM
I love trees and they are symbolic of all I want to be - deeply rooted, standing tall, inter-connected and providing shade for others. A lovely write!
Love (Poetry) - 3/26/2018 3:21:21 AM
Beyond love must be agape love that's unconditional. Jesus has that love for us but can we truly reach that high of a love for others? It's worth seeking. Amen
Love (Poetry) - 3/25/2018 4:12:40 AM
the race in which time and love participate. . . neither a finish line nor a victory ceremony. One question only: with or without you? Cheers, alex
Love (Poetry) - 3/25/2018 4:01:41 AM
Somehow, I wish your explanation for leaving and coming back was less dramatic. I'm not fond of haiku. I realize it may be a Japanese high art, but I will leave interpretation of haiku poems to the experts, not me.
Ron
Love (Poetry) - 3/24/2018 2:46:22 AM
BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Be Foolish (Poetry) - 3/23/2018 9:49:39 PM
With the touch of Emilie Dickenson. Lovely
Love (Poetry) - 3/23/2018 9:48:10 PM
You raise some challenging questions that strike at the heart concerning the question of love. Well done.
Be Foolish (Poetry) - 3/14/2018 1:38:50 PM
'Be Foolish' supposes some kind of playing... What is known as love does not discriminate for winners and losers ;)) Only time matters. Cheers, alex
Be Foolish (Poetry) - 3/14/2018 1:53:42 AM
it is hard to put your trust in another after being fooled once
Be Foolish (Poetry) - 3/13/2018 9:47:09 AM
If only one, then you are lucky.
Ron
Be Foolish (Poetry) - 3/13/2018 5:20:01 AM
Ax they say, Fool me once, shame on you. Fool me twice, shame on me.
Is It Real Or Make Believe? (Poetry) - 3/12/2018 8:08:39 PM
What you believe in your heart will eventually come to pass. Amen
I Am In Love (Poetry) - 3/11/2018 11:22:45 AM
since they say: 'life is one whole dream,' I just wonder, where're you with your ideal man, in your living dream or in your dreaming life? ;)) Cheers, alex
I Am In Love (Poetry) - 3/11/2018 7:04:17 AM
A beautiful wishful poem about your ideal man. My ideal changed over the years when my ideal of a woman ever transpired. And then, one day, she came along with all the attributes you describe, and she was nothing like the woman I originally set out to find.
Ron
I Am In Love (Poetry) - 3/10/2018 5:34:45 PM
Lovely poem Sylvia. I always loved to daydream when I was younger. Many of those dreams came true. I am now a fan of yours, now that's for real too! JMD
I Am In Love (Poetry) - 3/10/2018 7:54:38 AM
I hope this isn't a case of only in your dreams. Until then, dream on.
Soap (Poetry) - 3/10/2018 4:43:19 AM
Wow! You "Wowed Me" with your soap opera! I think I will take a shower now. Got Green Tea soap? Try it I say and perhaps it will make your day! LOL
Soap (Poetry) - 3/9/2018 10:39:03 PM
he really pisses you off, . . it is no joke, it is no laughing matter as it could be viewed by the outsiders below ;(( My question is: What will be then, when everything comes to normal? To be continued?. . . :)) Cheers, alex
Soap (Poetry) - 3/9/2018 10:38:28 AM
This is absolutely brilliant in its cleansing humor.
I will never see a bar of soap in its usual way ever
again. Gotta go. The shower's running.
Soap (Poetry) - 3/8/2018 8:26:02 AM
I really love the fresh idea and humor in this one. It was obvious that this love was definitely going to slip away and probably washed down the drain with all the suds.
Very creative! Post more.
Ron
Soap (Poetry) - 3/8/2018 3:43:57 AM
a cool use of soapyness
Soap (Poetry) - 3/7/2018 10:44:23 AM
Clean humor at its best. This is one sudsy poem a person could fall in Lava with.
Rain (Poetry) - 2/9/2007 6:03:52 PM
Interesting view of rain...your poem reads of one who feels the pain and sorrow and or the overwhelming of emotions and the results of one walking out the door...
interesting and nice work.....Art Sun...
Rain (Poetry) - 2/9/2007 11:59:23 AM
And GODDAMITT YOU GOTTA KLEEN THAT FLOOR....
