OOGO the Caveboy 1 (Short Story) - 7/6/2007 9:24:00 AM
This is a good story. The next to the last line, though - They was very proud of their son - is surely a mistake. Was should be were, but I'm certain you know that and just made a boo-boo here instead. You use excellent grammar everywhere else. I'm wondering if you've ever had these cave boy stories published in a magazine.
OOGO the Caveboy 1 (Short Story) - 6/9/2007 8:40:02 AM
Excellent story; enjoyed~
