The Outsider (Poetry) - 1/29/2007 2:51:09 AM
"The Outsider"
Madhavi, this poem is so beautiful.
Personally, I think this poem reads of such strength, and endurance in love. Moreover it echoes a willingness to wait for the one a person loves, regardless if the wait is from afar.
Welcome to the den, and thank you for sharing.
Keep on penning no matter what, lots of luck and love to you.
Author, Gwendolyn A. Thomas Gath
From the Heart of an Artist Quiet Storm
The Outsider (Poetry) - 1/29/2007 12:45:36 AM
A beautiful post...wonder why you used uppercase throughout, and used a comma in a restrictive clause (S1 L3: TOO SOON{,} THAT
YOU WERE MY ONLY BRIGHTEST STAR.)
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My Quest (Poetry) - 1/28/2007 9:34:25 PM
a nice work of thought...
enjoyed.....Art Sun...
The Outsider (Poetry) - 1/28/2007 9:18:46 PM
A very beautiful truth.
My Quest (Poetry) - 1/28/2007 9:15:30 PM
Very romantic and mystical. There is always that knight waiting in the mist to emerge. At the right moment, when time converges, the Celestial clock flows backwards in Times Arrow. The knight steps from the mist through its axis.
My Quest (Poetry) - 1/28/2007 8:52:12 PM
This is lovely, all quests like this should end so well :)
