Love You Forever (Poetry) - 4/14/2010 12:38:09 PM
AND GOD IS 'SO' WORTHY OF OUR LOVE...FOREVER. THIS IS A KEEPER THAT IS WELL DONE AND SO ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING AND LOVE,
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Love You Forever (Poetry) - 4/13/2010 7:34:21 AM
Very nicely written-- the recurring phrases remind me of the poetic forms of villanelle or pantoum, so I'm wondering if this is written in a specific form. Either way, the refrains underscore each other, making the text more powerful with each verse. --Charlie
