Heartbeats & Musical Tears of Man (Book) - 4/13/2004 4:51:38 PM
Jim...I am so happy for you!
What a wonderfully upbeat thing to happen in your life!
The cover is gorgeous, and I know the poems will be a
treat, too.
I hope you sell thousands!
Heartbeats & Musical Tears of Man (Book) - 3/22/2004 4:47:50 PM
(((shy)))
need a snail addy so i can mail a check--no credit/debit card
i want this book. :)
you've enticed me, okay?????? (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
Heartbeats & Musical Tears of Man (Book) - 7/5/2002 12:40:56 PM
Hi Jim, well let me try again. Authors Den would not allow me to write two reviews and I just got your book and really want to write one, so I have come on in a different address, hope this works.....Jim I am astounded at the beauty of your poetry book. It is so amazing, your words are full of sadness, joy, hope and a true love of God.. I just received it and am so priviledged to know you Jim, and to have your book. It is truly a work of art and a treasure. I wish you all Gods blessings in promoting it..God bless your words as you continue to testify of His enormous love to us. Floria
Heartbeats & Musical Tears of Man (Book) - 4/24/2002 7:21:20 AM
I cannot wait for it to come out so that I may purchase it Shy. It will be a treasure. And I will cherish it. Your poems are explosive. And yet there is such gentleness and Love of God. Bravo!!! Floria
37 Billion, The Crop (Short Story) - 5/17/2006 10:02:07 PM
surprising character,story line and plot depth in such short space....truly the work of a craftsman using a vast excess of the average brain power.....at least 10%....well done SHYPOET1 !
Backlash (Short Story) - 7/8/2005 12:10:40 PM
What a write! I felt like I was in the rooms with the characters. You describe very well, Shy Poet!!!
God bless,
Sandie.
Ambrosia Is Waiting - chapter 4 (Short Story) - 4/11/2005 9:50:07 AM
excellent addition to this story, jimmy! well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your tx. friend, karen lynn. :D
Ambrosia Is Waiting - Chapter 3 (Short Story) - 4/9/2005 9:36:30 AM
Excellent story, Jimmy; very well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
U-FATSO (Short Story) - 3/28/2005 4:55:31 PM
sad, but very readable story; thanks for sharing, jimmy! well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :(
Chasing Picasso (Short Story) - 2/14/2005 8:22:01 AM
'Shy',
Great title and a most definitive, extra well-done write - Bravo!!
Best regards,
Robert
37 Billion, The Crop (Short Story) - 2/9/2005 3:01:01 PM
what an interesting conception, that has some analogie in the early mythology of many of humanity's traditional cultures, from the dogon to the maya. the scenes that you set were astounding, the world completely envisioned.
i read this as an outline of the book that you will write, where you will flesh out these general streams of thought with details and conversation and action. i look forward to it!
Talking to the Man in the Moon (Short Story) - 2/8/2005 12:21:04 PM
Shy~~~~~~~~~~~oh my goodness
so close to my three part poem a Japanese Garden n' America
cept the dealer didn't die he got sent-up state as they say
Man!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!
You are trult amazing in this with story telling
WoW!!!
Talking to the Man in the Moon (Short Story) - 1/7/2005 11:41:49 AM
i have deleted some of my works too by accident; it happens to the best of us. good write, jimmy!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D
Talking to the Man in the Moon (Short Story) - 1/7/2005 9:09:06 AM
I have a good freind that is in a situation like this. I have told her that she cannot change him or save his soul. But don't feel bad I posted an item in the wrong column just a slip of the fingers. This is still a very interesting story and it is written very well.
Backlash (Short Story) - 12/28/2004 6:53:45 PM
I am glad that I read your stories too. I was not offended by anything in the poem it is just that too many place blame on something for chemical dependancy and the article you wrote could be true of any person regardless of color that sells drugs. It used to be moonshine etc. I know quite a few dealers through what I see in our area. They are white exploiting everyone they can. What I hate is the young kids.
Claire's French Recipe (Short Story) - 9/1/2004 4:43:08 PM
The ending is a happy one, and I really like it. I agree--it can be made longer into a novel.
37 Billion, The Crop (Short Story) - 7/9/2004 2:04:10 PM
Man Shy I am a sci-fi lover
but never to the point of machines
it's like aliens scary type...but i really enjoyed this
it is so well put together and i love the way you break it down in section makes it very easy to read....not what i was expecting
but this is a winner in sci-fi you should summit somewhere
People Are Strange (Short Story) - 4/25/2004 7:25:00 AM
another great one, this is fully developed and rounded:)
interesteng and true it is a good thing he spoke up hopefully repaire some of the damage and helped to open the eyes of that young minister putting him in the right lane of the right road he had choose
Stark in Candyland (story being edited again) (Short Story) - 4/25/2004 7:09:53 AM
i couldn't download it i think i delected my acorbat reader
i mean i downloaded it i couldn't open it
what i read so far was hot
Backlash (Short Story) - 4/22/2004 12:01:24 PM
I really don't know what to say how could i have missed all these great stories.....You are definitly a talent it's not just your poetry I have alot of reading to do I see....this was outstanding so real I could picture everything
The Devil's Candy (1st edit) (Short Story) - 4/22/2004 11:34:47 AM
wow this is truly an amazing write, I wrote out a very beautiful comment on it and my computer frozed, but what i did say was that i came on here to write you a thank you message and when i got to your page i was blown away at the things you've written this story starts out with a wild ride that was so real (sadly i know) and then it's like someone grabbing you by your shoulders shaking the shit out of you with reality, after smacking the you know what out of you!!! This was I think one of the best stories I have read here...I liked Tuesday Night by Dempsey and it was one from Reilly and now this one got to copy this so when I'm not on I can reread it....this is it. man
Backlash (Short Story) - 4/13/2004 4:35:34 PM
Excellent story Jim...I loved the characters and the story line...
Your descriptive lines of scenes and places is fantastic..you get
better and better with each story you write...same with your poetry...I liked that this took place in Chicago...your characters were very interesting...I am not quite sure I understand the thought for the day....I don't think it had anything to do with this story did it..but your life....your real life....hope things get better for you Jim....clap clap clap on the writing...floria
Backlash (Short Story) - 4/12/2004 6:21:53 PM
Hey, I really liked this story. This is the first short story that I've read of yours. Thank you for sharing your work. I look forward to reading more.
Travonne
John Tiberius Dryer, Thief (Short Story) - 4/4/2004 8:08:58 AM
Jim..this IS one of your best....I love the intrigue here..and the plot of the story keeps the reader interested throughout...you always pick such great colorful characters...and you know there is such a great moral to this story....everyone is always wanting money...to win the lotto etc....money surely isn't everything...many times it is the cause of a mans downfall....Great writing from you...clap clap....floria
People Are Strange (Short Story) - 3/31/2004 7:24:42 AM
Intriguing story - the title first attracted me because of the muisc title by the 'Doors.' Strange and not so strange. I believe that every person we meet is a reflection of us, saying that nothing ever happens without a reason. A deep-minded exchange with another person means that they take from me, and I take from them. I become them, and they become me. And your friend is now in church. Maybe the precher will join the Air Force and receive medals. Cool story. Franz
People Are Strange (Short Story) - 3/30/2004 7:11:53 AM
Stranger, still, my friend...are the ones in the pulpit whose
eyes are NEVER opened...and those in the pews who gullibly swallow
every word they utter...without making them show a scripture to
back up their "college knowledge."
This was an extremely well-written story, Jimmy. One of your finest.
Company Man 2545 (Short Story) - 3/27/2004 8:22:12 PM
::donning the \m/:: This is a tight story; one that is not only tight but very dark as well. You can deliver the goods when it comes to this genre.
Company Man 2545 (Short Story) - 3/17/2004 10:41:00 AM
excellent story, jim! compelling (and frightening) story! very well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :(
Company Man 2545 (Short Story) - 3/17/2004 9:32:57 AM
Wow....what a fabulous twist on the truth...You just took some
truth and wove a wonderful fiction out of it Jim...I love the creation
of the space shuttle company...when you get into the family part...that is very tender....how loved ones can be torn apart by hatred inflicted .... you did well with this....You used hate to create a novel that is very rivetting....You will always be one step ahead because of your mind, creativity and strong will...like you say at the end...your warrior spirit...which leads me to believe that you were a great military man.....well done....floria
Everywhere I Wept (Poetry) - 10/29/2024 6:28:31 PM
As always your words are beautiful.Love to you,from,Kay.
Black Superman Blues - song (Poetry) - 5/13/2024 4:20:33 AM
Although 20 years late,
I thank all of you commenters, readers etc.
I actually have seldom looked at this poem song
for obvious reasons. Truthfully, I wrote it, OK as
a release from what ever I was feeling 20 plus years ago.
I am a much different, better man now chiseled out of repeated challenges.
Come Sit With Me In The Shade And We'll Watch A Parade (Poetry) - 5/12/2024 10:45:18 AM
It has been a long time. I had forgotten your writing style. But this epic, but so repetitive, poem did remind me of Edgar Allen Poe and other poets that wrote epic story poems like this, that you call El Dorado.
Few will have time to read the whole thing in our multitasking and texting environment these days. Where we jump from one blurb to the other while trying to find time to relax from all of the urgent information of rather inferior quality.
I fully enjoy the effort you put into this poem and if it is not the final version, that's okay. You can reach near perfection if not perfection by reediting. I rarely do, but my poems are much shorter and I write them to be succinct and as truthful as I can possibly make them.
Ron
A Poem for Dreamers (Original) (Poetry) - 10/12/2022 5:50:00 AM
Deep and rich. A poem of substance, an expression of your soul. I am impressed. Everything good, started with a dream and ended with reality.
A Poem for Dreamers (Original) (Poetry) - 10/12/2022 2:32:29 AM
This reads like a classic and I coud easily hear these words formed as a fabulous delta blues number (love blues music...lol)
As for deleting anything...because it's "too angry"...Don't.
Such pieces are our growth stages and reflect on past eras...they show which way our individual paths led....and where from.
A Poem for Dreamers (Original) (Poetry) - 10/7/2022 4:19:39 PM
WE THAT BELIEVE...ARE ALREADY SAINTS. AND, MANY OF US ARE ALREADY SAVIORS. HOWEVER, INDEED, WE ARE ALL...DREAMERS. THANK YOU FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...HIS+INSPIRATIONS
Haiku 6-30-05 (Poetry) - 6/25/2022 3:06:17 PM
You have done a great job with the haikus; I especially like:'Mind Riders', and 'Shock Treatment'.
Thanks for sharing with us in the Den, and continued success.
Barbara J. Henry
From the Ruins Appeared a Dove (Poetry) - 1/20/2018 3:03:40 AM
I have enjoyed your poetry this morning, Thank you for sharing your talent.
A Poem for Dreamers (Original) (Poetry) - 8/26/2015 1:51:00 PM
So powerful, poignant,and beautifully written.I was reminded of Hughes' poem: "I've Known Rivers," as I read.
Thank you for sharing this gem, and continued success.
Sincerely,
Barbara J.Henry
Magic Whispers (Poetry) - 2/24/2015 8:49:38 AM
these old works are wonderful reads and craft stanzas for the heart. I am glad you shared, my fellow poet Jimmy
Destination Oblivion (Poetry) - 12/14/2013 12:14:10 PM
You captured the ebb and flow of life in general and tragedy in particular, Jimmy. There seems to be more opportunity for mayhem than there is for peaceful living. I particularly loved your last line.
Black Superman Blues - song (Poetry) - 8/20/2007 6:55:03 PM
This is pure soul music for sure...
Stay safe....
Thanks for your reviews...
Hugs...
Black Superman Blues - song (Poetry) - 5/1/2007 1:45:51 PM
I Oveeeeeeeeee Blues and I'm glad you added this----->I got da big ole Black
Earthshaking Su-per-man Blues …
The whole song is a winner!
A gem for me to treasure! and savor again later!
Thank you for sharing ShyPoet!
BE SAFE~!
STay POsitive!
I don't think I've been here, but I will be BACK! :)
and I just may start tracking/following them there Blue Heartfelt writes...
WArmly, WArrior Lady PURPLE Sheeeoox
Shy’s Ode to Poetic Souls (Poetry) - 2/13/2007 6:35:35 PM
Shy Poet, how beautiful the gift that you possess! Reading this beautiful piece causes me to question what I've been doing that has kept me away from Authors Den so long! Never stop stirring up and pouring forth the gift.
God bless you.
Gloria Lewis-Vaughn
For Loretta (Poetry) - 2/13/2007 7:04:29 AM
Very touching! Holly
Sunday’s Song (Poetry) - 1/7/2007 6:48:36 PM
AWESOME!
Your mind shares so much at 1 time~
WArmly, WArrior Sheee
For Loretta (Poetry) - 1/7/2007 6:47:13 PM
This touched my soul, with your expressive personality!
Wow!
What a fulfilling tribute too!
WArm HuGs,Warrior Sheeeoxxo
Man Not Boy 24/7 (Poetry) - 11/25/2006 5:10:04 PM
thank you for your writing-and for your thoughts for today
Everywhere I Wept (Poetry) - 11/25/2006 5:06:01 PM
What a great introspective write-i enjoyed reading
Baptized a Baptist (Poetry) - 11/15/2006 5:29:05 PM
No one should define who you are except YOU.
I like that bit about the Alabama poop farmers. ROFL
Jim, you are priceless...and you are the only one who doesn't think so.
You really have a gift.
Elizabeth
A Poem for Dreamers (REPOST) (Poetry) - 10/21/2006 6:21:44 AM
Beautiful sentences, beautiful poem!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Sunday’s Song (Poetry) - 2/28/2006 3:51:44 PM
Beautiful, Jim.
Keep writing... you definitely have a calling.
For Loretta (Poetry) - 10/15/2005 8:24:55 PM
This is absolutely gorgeous, beautiful, passionate work!
Elizabeth
Sunday’s Song (Poetry) - 9/18/2005 12:12:14 AM
This is wonderful, so very deep and outstandingly written,
Reindeer
Sunday’s Song (Poetry) - 9/13/2005 9:41:55 AM
A most excellent expression of emotions, Shy!
Sunday’s Song (Poetry) - 9/11/2005 3:39:09 PM
Will never kill a mocking bird again.
Ron
Sunday’s Song (Poetry) - 9/11/2005 11:04:44 AM
Shy, you never fail to stir all the senses, very emotional poem!
Hope one day you can just be...!
Eileen
Black Superman Blues - song (Poetry) - 9/11/2005 6:39:24 AM
Don't ever let go of that song in your Soul, Shy Poet! Magically engaging write. Bravo!
Peace,
Carolyn
I Danced with the Devil Ha! Ha! Ha! (Poetry) - 7/24/2005 12:23:34 PM
" ... In a place where the truth is blurred by evil men,
it has become less important whether i live or die.
It is more important, how I live or die! "
Love it! Wonderful inspirational write!
God bless, Jimmy!
Sandie.
Black Superman Blues - song (Poetry) - 7/24/2005 12:10:00 PM
You got the blues and you got them bad!! Love it! Excellent piece, ShyPoet!
God bless,
Sandie.
Haiku 6-30-05 (Poetry) - 7/6/2005 4:23:15 PM
a fantastic collage of ku!
Haiku 6-30-05 (Poetry) - 7/4/2005 5:24:03 PM
OK Sweets, so good to read you again!
Take Care & Happy 4th, Janny xoxoxo
PS. Speaking of the south, I am a member of the 'Nat'l Campaign for Tolerance', have my name on the wall. ;)
Haiku 6-30-05 (Poetry) - 7/1/2005 1:56:18 PM
Shy,
Thought provoking, powerful haiku--exceptionally well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(
Haiku 6-30-05 (Poetry) - 6/30/2005 9:17:44 PM
Nice to see you are still penning such insightful and powerful writings. :)
Haiku 6-30-05 (Poetry) - 6/30/2005 5:34:28 PM
Very unique poems.
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Baptized a Baptist (Poetry) - 6/21/2005 11:53:23 AM
A historic touching on the wounds of the soul.
"Baptized a Baptist" is a prose-poem par excelence; a voice of the
reality showing the pictures of the past that are reproduced by
new serfs´production machine in our Christian Society.
Keep on posting, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Black Superman Blues - song (Poetry) - 6/10/2005 5:48:45 AM
Oh I LOVED IT I LOVED IT I LOVED!!!!
would love to hear it to music
this here is a winner
Black Superman Blues - song (Poetry) - 6/9/2005 12:06:04 AM
Jimmy...such a wonderful song my friend....cheers...love n luck....BHUWAN!!!
Black Superman Blues - song (Poetry) - 6/4/2005 12:30:54 PM
Great song, Jimmy. Fits my mood. Love and peace. Regis
Black Superman Blues - song (Poetry) - 6/4/2005 8:54:26 AM
excellent write, jimmy! well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D
Black Superman Blues - song (Poetry) - 6/3/2005 7:07:08 PM
As a blues fan, I'll say this is righteous, my man.
Black Superman Blues - song (Poetry) - 6/3/2005 4:47:22 PM
This was the blues. You've got it! Well-done!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Black Superman Blues - song (Poetry) - 6/3/2005 2:35:28 PM
Shy,
You got 'em, bad. Wow, what a song! Well done!
You need to be in a smoke filled bar, wailing this one--
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(
Black Superman Blues - song (Poetry) - 6/3/2005 8:28:24 AM
Jimmy...I LOVE the blues...and this song is great!
Cheers to you.
Highway Waltz A Different Side of Paradise (Poetry) - 5/16/2005 3:13:34 PM
Shy,
It's been a while--too long a while. Welcome back!
An excellently penned, richly imaged poem; love the rhyme!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
Silent Predator (Poetry) - 3/30/2005 7:38:25 AM
Hey, nobody bother you! Nobody bother me either. ;-) Where have you been and where are you? Intriguing and chilling, Shy. ~~Nordette
Silent Predator (Poetry) - 3/21/2005 10:16:19 AM
Outstanding Shy, this touches the core of my being, so powerful,
Reindeer
Silent Predator (Poetry) - 3/5/2005 12:29:44 PM
A meaningful and chilling message. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis
Silent Predator (Poetry) - 3/3/2005 8:32:19 AM
Deep and powerful write as usual from you...love n luck...BHUWAN!!!
Silent Predator (Poetry) - 2/14/2005 8:38:12 PM
seems like someone has been a tad testy ...
well witten in both content and form ...
Silent Predator (Poetry) - 2/14/2005 5:55:49 PM
miss you much....
full of great images
twisted....i agree with Judy
it's a new day baby.....
lol
Silent Predator (Poetry) - 2/14/2005 5:13:55 PM
Great write....great lines 'his saxaphone sermon is keen'...What is the 'long finger' that wrote the song and cooked the meal?
EDL
Silent Predator (Poetry) - 2/14/2005 1:48:16 PM
Fraid not in this case he had best not follow old Judy these days. I know this type of person though and lived through it. Now it is pay back time and he won't need crackers. Excellent thoughts here and powerful message that you bring out.
A Poem for Dreamers (REPOST) (Poetry) - 1/21/2005 6:59:24 PM
I look into your eyes and see a race of kings and elders, deep and wise and proud. I look into your past and see the blood and sweat that built a nation, and a legacy that gave us our our American music and our very soul...a most beautiful poem!
I Danced with the Devil Ha! Ha! Ha! (Poetry) - 1/7/2005 3:31:57 PM
(((shy)))
bold. empowering. inspirational. a YES!!!!!!!!!!! kinda write--thank you
(((HUGS))) and keep dancing and writing :), love, karla. :)
I Danced with the Devil Ha! Ha! Ha! (Poetry) - 1/7/2005 10:31:16 AM
still got the power!!!
Outstanding and congrats on defeat
like others said
inspirational!!! love your thoughts
how wonderful of you to share
I Danced with the Devil Ha! Ha! Ha! (Poetry) - 1/7/2005 8:46:52 AM
Well you hit upon a key truth in what you say that you prayed and yes God does want us to keep it that way. Your last lines says it all. It how you live or die. Well done.
I will be gone for a few days. (Poetry) - 12/31/2004 7:30:19 AM
Welcome to the club of those that do not like Capital One and I must say that they accepted our personal check as I do not give carte blance on credit cards. I posted an item on uk about Crapital One a while back. My bank was BankAmerica and you might want to try BidPay just a suggestion. They have to accept BidPay through online banking. Okay and keep posting.
A Poem for Dreamers (Original) (Poetry) - 12/30/2004 12:11:46 AM
This was so outstanding Shy, absolutely loved this:
Now I talk to rivers
And the rivers talk back to me
They linger like dreams
And spread their life to everywhere
Like my 'peoples'
Even on the shores of a defeatist society ...
so insightful and wise,
Reindeer
A Poem for Dreamers (Original) (Poetry) - 12/25/2004 12:05:53 PM
Well expressed and replete with wisdom. Thank you for sharing this offering. Best wishes of love and peace. Regis
A Poet’s Heart Opens Doors (Poetry) - 12/22/2004 10:50:01 AM
`This was so exceptionally done~*
~HAPPY HOLIDAYS`*
A Poet’s Heart Opens Doors (Poetry) - 12/20/2004 4:03:49 PM
Simply amazing write! Thank you for sharing!
Have a Wonderful Christmas and a Happy New Year!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Man Not Boy 24/7 (Poetry) - 12/16/2004 10:21:21 AM
unbelievable!!
HAIKU: utterly profane (Poetry) - 12/16/2004 10:19:11 AM
much enjoyed, especially #2 point well made
A Poet’s Heart Opens Doors (Poetry) - 12/16/2004 10:17:57 AM
the doors we open
are not always welcome
when the day is done
they do not always summon
people of a kindred spirit
people of sadness reign
sometimes they do not get
that we are all simply insane
poets open doors
while others often close them
many times keeping score
up til the very end
I enjoyed your writings very much
thank you for stopping by to read mine
read on I say... I shall do the same
A Poet’s Heart Opens Doors (Poetry) - 12/13/2004 10:20:58 AM
Powerfully expressed. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis
Misunderstood, All She Wanted Was a Sweet Prince (Poetry) - 11/1/2004 4:54:15 PM
Okay, so you used to date Lil Kim right? ;-) Just kidding.
Enjoyed this piece, Shy, especially the fourth stanza.
What Must We Do? (Poetry) - 10/2/2004 10:32:54 PM
People say that my poetry is dark. I can relate to these verses. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis
What Must We Do? (Poetry) - 9/23/2004 5:13:39 AM
I agree with Mitzi.
What Must We Do? (Poetry) - 9/14/2004 1:06:00 PM
Dang Shy...you do darkness so well
actually it isn't dark to me but reality!!!!
it's raw and the thoughts you give with this is almost over-whelming
gives one much to think about!!!
What Must We Do? (Poetry) - 9/14/2004 7:50:09 AM
Powerful write....BHUWAN!!
What Must We Do? (Poetry) - 9/13/2004 12:51:47 PM
ShyPoet,
This is an excellent expression of thoughts and questions many of us swirl around in our minds and never manage to exteriorize. It is also a very courageous look at the innermost self, that which most of us are not brave enough to face... as in fact, most of us find it easier to accuse outer "dragons" than to admit that the worst of all may live within ourselves. Thank you for this powerful poem (including the marvelous 2nd stanza), and my wishes of all
Love&Light
Alexandra*
What Must We Do? (Poetry) - 9/12/2004 2:36:35 PM
(((shy)))
i hope you are feeling better soon. keep rising above the circumstance...i do, every day. if you need to talk, message board me (PRIVATE), i'll answer
powerfully imaged write--well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(
What Must We Do? (Poetry) - 9/12/2004 1:20:50 PM
Glad I dropped into today to read this feast of words/thoughts/emotions. Sorry to hear you are down but I do believe, as do you, that you will feel better soon. Excellent insight and thanks for sharing with us the extra stanza.
What Must We Do? (Poetry) - 9/12/2004 10:34:10 AM
Excellent poem indeed, shypoet.
What Must We Do? (Poetry) - 9/12/2004 9:05:08 AM
Excellent Shy, I liked the verse you dropped also, very powerful!
Reindeer
Man Not Boy 24/7 (Poetry) - 8/24/2004 6:42:04 AM
Wow..powerful and outstanding Shy! Excellently expressed!
Reindeer
Man Not Boy 24/7 (Poetry) - 8/21/2004 1:30:35 AM
A blessing is disguise is everyone's awareness, and these issues put behind. In this life time? Dunno.
Carmen :-)
Man Not Boy 24/7 (Poetry) - 8/20/2004 11:49:30 PM
Interesting write...
Man Not Boy 24/7 (Poetry) - 8/20/2004 8:43:41 PM
The shame of it is this should still be written of in the year 2004!
I hope and pray for that day it will be a fading memory Shy!
Man Not Boy 24/7 (Poetry) - 8/20/2004 2:19:29 PM
(((shy)))
this is powerful poetry; vividly illustrated, painfully rendered. BRAVO!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(
HAIKU: utterly profane (Poetry) - 8/15/2004 2:38:10 AM
I enjoy your work and this is yet another example of that...good to read your work finally...it's been a while...
One love
nigel
Magic Whispers (Poetry) - 8/3/2004 10:48:11 PM
so magical
the way you brought
feelings from deep down
beautiful tribute to poems and poetry!!!
Magic Whispers (Poetry) - 7/31/2004 10:33:09 PM
fantastic pace, my brotha.
blessin's
cynth'ya lewis reed
Magic Whispers (Poetry) - 7/31/2004 9:35:21 PM
Excellent tribute the poets.
Thanks for stopping by as well.
Magic Whispers (Poetry) - 7/29/2004 11:43:29 AM
Sweet write about writing. :-)
Magic Whispers (Poetry) - 7/26/2004 9:03:21 PM
A superb tribute to poetry and poets, Shy. Lovely work. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis
Magic Whispers (Poetry) - 7/12/2004 6:50:16 PM
This was so lovely Shy, absolutely beautiful poetry,
Reindeer
Magic Whispers (Poetry) - 7/12/2004 4:32:13 PM
"...by kissing melancholy souls with a smile."
What a beautiful way to put the power of poetic words, Jim!
I enjoyed this very much.
Magic Whispers (Poetry) - 7/12/2004 3:28:11 PM
Shy... awesome write!
Swollen rages weeping refrains
as twilight skies swell, seep and howl …
--- It is here, poets examine then lick itchy itches,
then, endure thorns, spilled ink, and stains ...
Magic Whispers (Poetry) - 7/12/2004 10:30:52 AM
(((shy)))
a beautiful write--profound and vividly captured, the art of poesy--well done, BRAVO!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
Magic Whispers (Poetry) - 7/12/2004 1:07:16 AM
Good to read you again, Jim. "Magic Whispers" is a wonderful poem. And poetry is like magic in a way that most literature isn't. It is personal, yet expressed in a universal way. It an ache, a joy, a revelation and as you so beautifully put it:
"Poems are but knotted thoughts,
gifts … finally unbound -
Poet’s tears heal many wounds,
abundant, frequent, salty, bizarre, dark,
alone -
by kissing melancholy souls with a smile …"
Love that stanza!
Carmen :-)
Magic Whispers (Poetry) - 7/11/2004 10:45:39 PM
Sounds like the yin and yang of poetry!
Where have you been Jim?;-)
Good to read your wondrous work again!
Magic Whispers (Poetry) - 7/11/2004 5:19:38 PM
You have defined poetry from yon to woe and tip to toe.
Magic Whispers (Poetry) - 7/11/2004 1:49:26 PM
"Let all poet’s lyrics surge for a while
though runners many, many -
pass on poetry’s edgy fiery blazing trail -
begrudge no muse his whims,
humanity needs so many.
Swollen rages weeping refrains
as twilight skies swell, seep and howl …
--- It is here, poets examine then lick itchy itches,
then, endure thorns, spilled ink, and stains ...
When poets explore untried trails -- delight remains."
This is beautiful SHY!
Magic Whispers (Poetry) - 7/11/2004 12:44:55 PM
Interesting theme. The opening line is an attention getter. The thought that a poem’s own cadence can break its stride of rhythm creates an interesting image, revealing the tension that exists within the lines of certain poetry. The many similar contradictions here made this a joy to read.
Shy’s Ode to Poetic Souls (Poetry) - 7/8/2004 5:39:02 PM
Hi Sweets, you are such a fine talent/word-smith! Wishing you everything that is good.
Love, JC xoxoxo
Shy’s Ode to Poetic Souls (Poetry) - 7/8/2004 5:06:05 PM
Wise message. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace. Regis
Shy’s Ode to Poetic Souls (Poetry) - 7/2/2004 7:20:55 AM
very beautiful the poem and the thoughts that follow it is like reading an what-do-you-call-it book(LOL) you know you read a page each day mind gone for the moment but you should think about publishing one of those books there are people out there who needs thing like that, surely people in the churches,you know
enjoyed
Shy’s Ode to Poetic Souls (Poetry) - 6/25/2004 5:36:39 PM
the soul of this poem is inflamed with wisdom!
Shy’s Ode to Poetic Souls (Poetry) - 6/25/2004 3:37:45 PM
Your calling card is very beautiful shy poet....it has a shiny gold edge,very original...perfection!
Shy’s Ode to Poetic Souls (Poetry) - 6/25/2004 2:36:18 PM
"Flicker in brilliance, and ignite fires in poetic souls." For this is the purpose of poetry -- always to inspire. And this poem has inspired me. It has made me question the reasons behind verses. Why do we express them. Not enough that we do. If we have learned something through our journey as human beings and poets, then we must inspire.
Thank you for sharing this. Good to hear from you again.
Carmen :-)
Shy’s Ode to Poetic Souls (Poetry) - 6/25/2004 1:09:54 PM
Shy poet,
your potry is in a class of its own this is no exception...
Excellent poem.
Shy’s Ode to Poetic Souls (Poetry) - 6/25/2004 10:56:44 AM
(((shy)))
powerful, heartfelt, beautiful write--well done, so glad to see you back where you belong :)
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
Shy’s Ode to Poetic Souls (Poetry) - 6/25/2004 7:16:35 AM
Excellent piece of poetry. Enjoyed reading from you again.
Shy’s Ode to Poetic Souls (Poetry) - 6/25/2004 6:32:38 AM
This was beautiful Shy, I loved that last stanza, excellent thoughts and poetry!
Reindeer
Shy’s Ode to Poetic Souls (Poetry) - 6/25/2004 5:56:53 AM
awesome write
"Anger rages with fury, but it is incredible laughter
That releases burdens that weigh heavy on souls."
outstanding!!
Shy’s Ode to Poetic Souls (Poetry) - 6/25/2004 5:23:52 AM
"...it is incredible laughter that releases burdens that weigh
heavy on souls."
I love this line the best, in this piece, which is also one of
your best.
This thought has been my "words to live by"...that laughter is
the soothing balm for our injured souls.
HAIKU: utterly profane (Poetry) - 5/30/2004 10:10:24 AM
sooo true
i enjoy and agree with Reed on this
in the words of Indie Arie
"what God gave me is just fine"
excellent!!!!
Feast on Celebration Day (Poetry) - 5/30/2004 10:06:09 AM
feel the truth and history behind these words
you put it in a very tasteful way
enjoyed the mystery here!!!!
HAIKU: utterly profane (Poetry) - 5/29/2004 6:49:17 PM
i must admitt my head is going round in circles on this one as it seems to make no semantic sense whatsoever but it has the superficial attraction of appearing to be a sophisticated perverse truism in a decadadent social context, perhaps it is... saludos robin sorry about et al perhaps they can explain if its neither is or when & why it should be shame & a reward
HAIKU: utterly profane (Poetry) - 5/29/2004 6:14:43 AM
Laughing.. so much said with so few words..and sooooooooo true!!!
HAIKU: utterly profane (Poetry) - 5/28/2004 3:03:02 PM
(((shy)))
nothin' shy about this one--hit 'em where it hurts!! good one you! dynamite haiku--thank you--enjoyed very much (the haiku, not the plastic...never mind LOL *blushing*)
(((HUGS))) and love, karla.
HAIKU: utterly profane (Poetry) - 5/28/2004 10:29:37 AM
Excellent and Powerful haiku!
Reindeer
HAIKU: utterly profane (Poetry) - 5/28/2004 12:55:08 AM
"plastic obscenity" -- that's a very interesting variation of two common occurences, but when put together, they describe what this poem does to me: People being so fake that it's unjustifiable by any measure of decency.
Very nice work "not-so-shy" Poet (smiles)
blessin's
cynth'ya lewis reed
HAIKU: utterly profane (Poetry) - 5/27/2004 9:08:46 PM
Shy...this is good!One of the better contemporary haiku/senryu I have read recently.
Here is my response to this sharp gem of yours...
Inflatable doll
Hangs limply in the window
Sale! $19.95!
HAIKU: utterly profane (Poetry) - 5/27/2004 4:53:29 PM
May sting, but wow, this is a fantastic Haiku, Shy!
So well written!
Love, Sheila
Feast on Celebration Day (Poetry) - 5/27/2004 4:48:05 PM
Wow...and i say wow rarely...but wow. The depth of this write is amazing. Your metaphors are so well done as to be imperceptible if one is not looking closely. At least...and i could be all wet here...i see this as a complete metaphor. Starting with the Southern reference...this reads to me as a piece on race relations. If i am wrong...well, just ignore me...lol...won't be the first time! And if it isn't intended in this manner...it doesn't matter...because to me, it speaks a strong, bold and clear message. I am very impressed!
HAIKU: utterly profane (Poetry) - 5/27/2004 4:37:20 PM
Yikes! What a strong message here. This is certainly a "modern" haiku. Much enjoyed! :)
Feast on Celebration Day (Poetry) - 5/27/2004 8:24:17 AM
Well written my friend....excellent!!!!
Feast on Celebration Day (Poetry) - 5/26/2004 7:13:19 PM
Oh Jim! this really is terribly dark,
but it rings true and you have a need
to express it! God bless you!
Feast on Celebration Day (Poetry) - 5/26/2004 5:10:50 PM
Wow..powerful and so chilling, excellent poem,
Reindeer
Feast on Celebration Day (Poetry) - 5/26/2004 5:08:31 PM
No matter what the subject, you're such a fine writer. Very well penned.....ty, Dani
Feast on Celebration Day (Poetry) - 5/26/2004 4:23:51 PM
(((shy)))
i think i know what's in it...yuck! salty, yes, distasteful, perhaps--but seasoned to perfection.
remind me not to join you at your bar-b-ques :), for i may not like what i find LOL
one scary, chilling write! well done! well, well done! LOL
(((HUGS))) and love, karla.
Sudan, Sun, Shadow, and Shade (Poetry) - 5/25/2004 11:56:40 AM
Yes, Jimmy, the world is indeed in a sad and desolute state.
Thank God it won't be that way too much longer.
Good to see you posting again!
Sudan, Sun, Shadow, and Shade (Poetry) - 5/24/2004 5:05:26 PM
Jim, I am happy that I had the few minutes to
be on here today just to read this. Your deep
feelings expressed with soul always touch me.
I feel the yearning of a soul that wants so much
for peace not only for himself but for the
entire world. One of your best here friend.
I am proud to call you friend.... hugs.....floria
Sudan, Sun, Shadow, and Shade (Poetry) - 5/24/2004 12:50:10 PM
powerful, powerful write, shy; one of your best--heartbreaking
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(
Sudan, Sun, Shadow, and Shade (Poetry) - 5/24/2004 12:32:47 PM
Sad, isn't it, to think Africa is the cradle of civilization and Africans are the most downtrodden of nations and subjected to such absolute horrors. They've lost so much and it goes on and on. Very well expressed, Jim. Good work as always, and thoughtful.
Sudan, Sun, Shadow, and Shade (Poetry) - 5/24/2004 10:42:17 AM
You have captured their plight with simple grace,
that shouts the need, that goes unheeded. One can
only wonder why and pray. I have given to their cause
but it's like a grain of sand. The need is beyond
comprehension!Thanks for this exceptional write Jim!
Welcome Back Josephine Lillie Mae Gann (Poetry) - 5/1/2004 9:03:02 PM
Shy,
Breakfast of champions… Poetry & Coffee. Excellent write. What’s for lunch?
Best wishes,
Thomas
Welcome Back Josephine Lillie Mae Gann (Poetry) - 5/1/2004 7:05:06 PM
Beautiful poem Shy poet,full os the sweetness and rapture of spring,fresh and lovely!
Love and best wishes
from
kay
Welcome Back Josephine Lillie Mae Gann (Poetry) - 4/29/2004 10:08:25 PM
Ron what a wonderful writing. Held on to each word and expression. I could feel inside of me the goings on of both persons in the poem. HOW WELL YOU WROTE THIS! Bill
....hope you are feeling better....
Welcome Back Josephine Lillie Mae Gann (Poetry) - 4/27/2004 12:34:17 AM
To a white British girl like me, Shy, this is an adorable portrayal of everything I love about your easy, rhythmic, lyrical and verbose Black ways!! It is honest, gentle and yet tinged with the sanguine heat and passion of the Black feel-good factor that so many of us (UK!!) bloodless whites miss out on! I also loved the reciprocity of feelings shared between the hero and heroine here: that she had been away, and yet still lonely, as indeed he was having stayed at home and waited...but what a springtime they will have now they are together! Uplifting and satisfying write, Shy... just like the Big Breakfast you missed out on in order to give us this food for thought to relish! Thank you. KB
Welcome Back Josephine Lillie Mae Gann (Poetry) - 4/25/2004 8:42:36 PM
I love this one SHY it is so well written and expressed....
Always love the notations notes....
Welcome Back Josephine Lillie Mae Gann (Poetry) - 4/25/2004 7:21:53 PM
Jim I thoroughly enjoyed this winsome wondrous write!
You are a gifted poet with much talent and flair!;-)
Welcome Back Josephine Lillie Mae Gann (Poetry) - 4/25/2004 1:50:53 PM
(((shy)))
delightful, delightful read--enjoyed the flavor of this one
well done
((((HUGS)))) and love, karla. :)
Welcome Back Josephine Lillie Mae Gann (Poetry) - 4/25/2004 12:09:35 PM
This was pure delight Shy...You have never
written like this before as far as I can
remember....it was fun..I love the play on
words...really enjoyed reading it...my tongue
got a bit twisted...LOL....good writing again..
floria
Welcome Back Josephine Lillie Mae Gann (Poetry) - 4/25/2004 11:59:32 AM
I loved the lilting phrasing in this, Jimmy!
Wonder what you will come up with for the next
two meals...hee hee.
Misunderstood, All She Wanted Was a Sweet Prince (Poetry) - 4/15/2004 7:05:55 PM
Shy,
So heart touching, your words are truly powerful
in thoughts and emotions.
This is such beautiful writing!
Love, Sheila
Misunderstood, All She Wanted Was a Sweet Prince (Poetry) - 4/15/2004 6:13:44 PM
Jim, my heart is sad for you and yours! I wish there
were justice in this world, but that will only come
when this phase of life is over...You are a superb poet
and I can only pray that one day you will be vindicated!
Here in this time!
Misunderstood, All She Wanted Was a Sweet Prince (Poetry) - 4/15/2004 11:25:54 AM
Jim this is wonderful writing from you...
some powerful lines here...I see sorrow..
great writing friend...floria
A Poet’s Heart Opens Doors (Poetry) - 3/31/2004 7:10:53 AM
"Brood not of things long gone past
In fall’s garden, even flowers and lovely dies …
Yet, come wake and come again my friends -
Flowers in the bag, shall bloom into fancy gardens."
this is awesome writing Jim....I love the above verse
and the entire poem..."Go ahead and mock my verse"
I cannot imagine anyone mocking your verse...
this is writing at it's best....Your "day" is coming...
Just hang on and believe in yourself and keep writing...
all the best to you friend...floria
A Poet’s Heart Opens Doors (Poetry) - 3/31/2004 6:39:05 AM
This was outstanding! excellent and deep poetry!
Reindeer
A Poet’s Heart Opens Doors (Poetry) - 3/30/2004 7:02:38 PM
Bravo Jim! You are always true to yourself and your readers!
A Poet’s Heart Opens Doors (Poetry) - 3/30/2004 5:49:42 PM
Jimmy, you always put either force or pizzazz in your
writing...nothing mediocre from you.
This is a good example of such.
