untitled (Poetry) - 9/15/2007 1:40:01 PM
Substance for thought, Carla; this "reads" like a song. Thank you. Love and peace,
Regis
I Only Want to Know The Sky (Poetry) - 9/15/2007 1:38:39 PM
Beautiful sentiments, lovely song, Carla. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you,
Regis
I Only Want to Know The Sky (Poetry) - 3/21/2007 7:19:24 AM
Such a beautiful poem. This touched my heart Carla.
I Only Want to Know The Sky (Poetry) - 3/19/2007 6:14:51 AM
The sky's the limit as they say but that's only the first layer in the stratosphere. Infinity is the limit, eh?
I only want to know the sky.
To drink the splendor of the sun.
And count the million stars I see within your eyes.
I only want to know the sky.
Also the splendour of a million suns!
The melody is clearly in the heart here.
Regards
Daibhidh
I Only Want to Know The Sky (Poetry) - 3/19/2007 1:54:56 AM
A beautiful write...flows smoothly and has a peaceful feeling. I'm sure it makes a beautiful song! Enjoyed! Glad I stopped by!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
I Only Want to Know The Sky (Poetry) - 3/18/2007 6:44:39 PM
Nice...very nice...
an enjoyable piece of poetry...
I am sure it sounds great as a song.....
Art Sun...
I Only Want to Know The Sky (Poetry) - 3/18/2007 6:04:12 AM
Ah, to take wings and fly beyond the confines of the ground.
untitled (Poetry) - 3/12/2007 12:53:20 PM
This is the kind of companion poem to be read like a psalm in times of emotional, spiritual and cerebral emptiness.
I often think about an adolescent friend, wondering what it is he is doing now, where he is, how he is. We both fell out in our late teens and never reconciled. Through dimly lit memories, I can see that the reasons for our parting were the stuff of juvenile discourse. Sadly, last I heard was that he was brain damaged and put in a home. The retrospective nature of your poem prompts me to ask myself if his voice is calling down the windswept empty streets of that memory wherein he occupies. Intriguing thought. How does one answer the voice though? Ethereal dimension intrudes.
Regards
Dai
untitled (Poetry) - 3/10/2007 6:33:14 AM
They say the answers blowing in the wind, but all i've ever heard is wooooosh.
Good poem about life's paradox....Cute pic too..
untitled (Poetry) - 3/10/2007 6:00:20 AM
A nice work, the view of reflection upon the memories of life and it's flow....like the wind you write of within this poem...
nice .....Art sun...
