excerpt from The Teacher (Short Story) - 2/23/2005 8:02:39 AM
Beautiful - a message of hope mixed with reality in physical form. A truly special rendition and reflection of all of humankind's creation mythology. Thanks for sharing this.
Monette
excerpt from Duped into Submitting: A Writer's Guide to Charlatanism (Short Story) - 1/28/2005 3:54:02 PM
I like this and learned a lot from it and you are right about fiction. I do it all the time because the real facts would be disastrous to me and some others if I did not put it into fiction.
A Tale of Deceit (Short Story) - 6/4/2003 2:24:05 AM
Very eerie tal that is well written. It definate reminds me from when I used to be in boy scouts and where they tried to scare the crap out of the younger scouts. Very strong twists and turns with solid description.
excerpt from The Teacher (Short Story) - 9/27/2002 5:44:14 AM
My Lady:
What desire spent could chase our fears away?
What promise stolen shows that dreams come true?
I bring none, but a humble 10 for you, to make this right. Great chapter for a book...
Yours,
E Culo
The Politically Correct Christmas (Short Story) - 7/18/2002 11:02:35 PM
One question Sonya...How did you manage not to pick up your computer and break it over that Chamber person's head? Believe me, it had to take every ounce of your courage not to do so!
She is the reason I don't belong to entities like that. I wonder if she wanted them out because it reminded her too much of her own parents????
excerpt from: Of Indians and Aliens (Short Story) - 7/15/2002 3:53:16 PM
This was great! It made me want to read more! gimme...gimme...gimme!
excerpt from The Teacher (Short Story) - 7/15/2002 3:51:24 PM
so when is this to turn into a book? you got a good start here...
excerpt from The Teacher (Short Story) - 7/14/2002 10:36:14 AM
gripping read and deft narration that kept me riveted to the text. I am all poet, but I enjoy well written prose...pleasure to read. **Mari**
A Tale of Deceit (Short Story) - 4/21/2002 5:08:59 AM
Nude reality has been effectively portrayed.Very formal style has been adopted by you which seems to be affordable.
The Politically Correct Christmas (Short Story) - 4/21/2002 5:01:30 AM
story induldged in a valid suggestion.It goes on correcting the notion of the days.it has great validity of the time when no one bother to make a que of the questions concerned.
excerpt from: Of Indians and Aliens (Short Story) - 4/14/2002 5:09:27 AM
This community desperatly deserve your appreciation.you have truly come upon the SOS call of the community.
excerpt from Duped into Submitting: A Writer's Guide to Charlatanism (Short Story) - 4/14/2002 4:53:56 AM
Piece is wonder ful.This will generate lot of enthusiaism in young aspiring writers.Guidence is going good through the excerpt.you have treated the issue like a wise master/guide.
excerpt from The Teacher (Short Story) - 4/14/2002 4:20:23 AM
How a gently knitted/crafted story u have presented.The characters are well driven through the content.They are implied with great authority & command,such a skilled writer like u could only do so.Narration of the story is very communicative & wel connected to the central idea.This is complement to read this excerpt.
A Tale of Deceit (Short Story) - 3/29/2002 3:52:02 PM
A wonderful story...well done
A Tale of Deceit (Short Story) - 3/15/2002 11:48:02 AM
Good work!!!!
A Tale of Deceit (Short Story) - 1/10/2002 8:42:32 PM
WOW!
Great story. Starts a bit slow and tiny bit formal and that perplexed me at first, but when it kicked in, it blazed with a good twist at the end. As Clint said the rest is easy fixes.
