The Diabolical Mr. Ripper (Poetry) - 4/21/2008 10:15:21 PM
YOWZA!!! This could be an Iron Maiden song.
Great stuff...I just hope I haven't been too much of a macabre influence on you...let's both return to poems of Sheep and Lovely Days and 'Oh, Look At This Lovely Daisy'...
Nah, Sod that...METAL ONWARDS!!!
Love ya, K.K.
Dirty Harriet (Poetry) - 11/23/2007 5:15:12 AM
Good write! Dirty Harriet seems to resemble someone I know. Who was your model?
Time now for a sequel;how about a "Dirty Hillary"?
Dirty Harriet (Poetry) - 11/19/2007 7:39:51 PM
Well done, Lisa...This reminds me more of "Kill Bill" with its type of imagery.
Dirty Harriet (Poetry) - 11/16/2007 7:04:43 PM
Nice take on "Dirty Harry". Loved the originality......
Be safe,
Karen
Dirty Harriet (Poetry) - 11/16/2007 6:55:28 PM
Very good write!!!
Dirty Harriet (Poetry) - 11/16/2007 1:52:49 PM
I'll have to remember this one. Good write!
Dee
Stand Up (Poetry) - 11/10/2007 1:19:47 AM
This reads so easily. Excellent work.
What Sup Wit Dat? (Poetry) - 9/29/2007 2:29:36 PM
yes it does...
only wish the world would wake up...
What's up wit Dat???
nice work....
Art Sun...
The Perils of Marguerite (Poetry) - 9/29/2007 2:27:09 PM
A description of one who we don't wish to meet...
nice work....
Art Sun...
The Perils of Marguerite (Poetry) - 9/27/2007 3:39:30 AM
Lisa,
Wow! sure sounds like someone no one would care to know.
The Clown (Poetry) - 9/27/2007 12:45:10 AM
...honest write...perhaps of all mankind...in this life.
enjoyed...
John
The Perils of Marguerite (Poetry) - 9/27/2007 12:43:23 AM
...this one wears the stamp...return to sender...perhaps to be reborn in the next life...with happiness.
well done...
John
The Ghostly Galleon (Poetry) - 9/13/2007 12:26:07 PM
Deep, dark and delicious!
The Ghostly Galleon (Poetry) - 9/13/2007 3:30:33 AM
Lisa,
Very eerie tale. I shall never go a sail on All Hallows Eve.
The Ghostly Galleon (Poetry) - 9/12/2007 8:58:35 PM
"Quite spooky"I could feel the ocean swells as my entire desk rocked.Enjoyed
Soul Reflection (Poetry) - 8/17/2005 2:38:51 PM
This is beautiful and heartfelt, I loved it, thanks- Michelle
Soul Reflection (Poetry) - 8/17/2005 11:58:32 AM
Walking in his path. Can be difficult at times.
But it's well worth the reward. In this life too.
Excellent message..
Pax..
Little Boy Lost (Poetry) - 7/21/2004 7:18:59 PM
the little boy lost will become a man someday, hopelfully his soul won't be totally misplaced ...
very vivid images ...
Little Boy Lost (Poetry) - 7/21/2004 2:00:16 PM
Scary But True Comes Back To Haunt You To-Unique Different Wrtie!
TRASK
The Night (Poetry) - 7/16/2004 1:26:20 AM
Very nice, Lisa.
(K.K.)
Notorious Ned - Behind Enemy Eyes (Poetry) - 11/24/2003 5:38:59 PM
Very very good, your rhyming is really becoming expert...
Intriguing, too...how'd you find out about this guy?
The Unsinkable Anthony Brown (Poetry) - 6/26/2003 3:37:48 PM
An enjoyable read, dear lady. May he always look and be that well gifted to you. Well done.
Peace,
Cherokee
The Night (Poetry) - 12/27/2002 3:05:01 PM
Always loved the dark. Nice write.
Guinevere's Quest (Poetry) - 12/26/2002 6:15:18 PM
Hoo-rah!!! Good 'un Guinevere!!! Kind of like an Aerosmith "Kings And Queens" type o' riff, very classy & inspiring. Thanks for sharing. Best, K.K.
Guinevere's Quest (Poetry) - 12/26/2002 5:04:03 PM
I hope so too, Guinevere, I hope so too. Lovely write with brilliance embedded into it's very soul.
Happy New Year!!
*-Brittany-*
Guinevere's Quest (Poetry) - 12/26/2002 1:57:47 PM
Lisa, your quest is noble and so are you. Loved the poem. Bill Murray
Guinevere's Quest (Poetry) - 12/26/2002 11:00:24 AM
Wonderful write Lisa, I like the flow.
Once In A Lifetime (Poetry) - 11/12/2002 8:42:17 AM
NICE...I want to see the expanded version, though. Best, K.K.
Queen For A Day (Poetry) - 8/15/2002 11:13:51 AM
"The King prefers princes instead"---LOL!!!
Neat twist there. Keep 'em coming!
A Prayer For The World (Poetry) - 7/1/2002 12:07:01 PM
Jesus is surely smiling lovingly as He looks down at you; how proud He must be of you for writing this!! Great job!! love in Christ, karen lynn.
Queen For A Day (Poetry) - 4/8/2002 5:14:30 PM
And it's too real that head games are still played between people. I choose to be single for this reason.. Hugs
Queen For A Day (Poetry) - 4/8/2002 4:51:15 PM
Good one...;-)
Connecticut (Poetry) - 4/5/2002 6:16:03 PM
Yes, damnit, YES!!! NOW the truth can be told!!! Speaking as someone raised in that Purgatory, I can only AGREE. And if YOU get a chance to visit Connecticut (especially in the winter), change your mind and DON'T. (Thanks for including this one, Red)
Best, K.K.
Connecticut (Poetry) - 4/5/2002 1:00:21 PM
Hi Lisa,
LOL...sounds like
Murphys law...
*Trixie*
The Juggernaut (Poetry) - 3/22/2002 8:21:54 PM
WHOOOOOO-AH! YEAH! Now THAT'S WHAT I'M TALKIN' ABOUT!!! A neat departure from the ol' Flowers & Sunshine riffs...it'd make a decent Metal song, too.
The Juggernaut (Poetry) - 3/22/2002 1:38:02 PM
Hi Lisa,
Very well written....
Thanks
Trixie
The Lady of The Lake (Poetry) - 3/21/2002 9:51:13 AM
Guinevere strikes AGAIN!!! "She's the fire, Heavenly Hell, You can't resist, Under her spell..." Very classy & dreamy
Mind Games (Poetry) - 1/12/2002 1:28:06 PM
It's that 6th sense thing. I love this kind of poetry and life. Janet
Mind Games (Poetry) - 1/11/2002 5:30:31 PM
Nicely done, I like the effectof the "can't catch my breath" part and the paranormal feel to this.
Enjoyed, Joann Renee' Muszynski
The Lady of The Lake (Poetry) - 1/9/2002 8:47:18 PM
Oh yes Lisa, I know a bit of the 'Lady' resides here as well. Janet
The Eternal Damned (Poetry) - 12/5/2001 12:53:37 AM
Good for you. I am glad to hear you speak about this. If you look in my 'articles' you'll find one called 'Daddy's Magic Number' my own birth father committed murder and he did die in prison though not on death row. I do have to say one thing though, I think that he made his peace with God now if I could just make peace with him. Great poem. Janet
My Sir Lancelot (Poetry) - 11/26/2001 8:47:42 PM
Oh, Lisa! May you find your Lancelot and may he let you unlock his heart! You are not only eloquent, but beautifully determined. :)
Gina
