Rain Forest (Poetry) - 5/6/2007 3:21:18 PM
wow martha! that was a good poem.
Rain Forest (Poetry) - 4/10/2007 6:07:45 AM
The rain forest is a marvelous place, and you've penned a marvelous poem here, Martha. We all truly need to do as much as we can to save them, even here in America. We have some magnificent rainforests, too, but they are being destroyed far too quickly now.
Rain Forest (Poetry) - 4/9/2007 5:03:59 PM
This is a very nice poem. Some of the rhyming is easy word rhyming but kida catchy though. I love how you have it soundign so serine and peaceful than all of a sudden have a major dissruption and bring the point at the end about how it its mankinds fault in a easy way at the end. I think you could expand on it though. Have more on how beautiful and majestic the land and creatures are than have a brutle stop and end a distrection of thier homes. Anywase I like it it is very good. Keep working hard to spread the message.
alex
