Twin Tales - The Skate Park (Short Story) - 3/23/2003 1:33:44 PM
cute write! love this story from the mind of a child! i write a lot about children, and i do a lot of them in first person, like the child is telling the story, like for example, the ones i do about johnny and ronee', who are two of my characters. they are both 10, and i have written a lot of stories about them both. check them out! love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :) johnny and ronee' are probably my two favorite characters; but i have a whole bunch! :)
Fulfilled (Short Story) - 3/17/2003 12:14:33 PM
oh my word!!! whew.....steamy an romantic all i hope for....
Fulfilled (Short Story) - 3/17/2003 10:25:22 AM
Very nice, well written, and had me from start to finish! Cant wait for the next chapter.
Fulfilled (Short Story) - 3/17/2003 8:54:07 AM
ohh myyyy.... very nice... and yes I can relate to it!!
Fulfilled (Short Story) - 3/17/2003 8:23:53 AM
I thought this was a very sensual story...and one we housewives can certainly relate to
The Fine Art of Massage (Short Story) - 11/19/2002 2:20:28 AM
Congratualtions Elizabeth Galvez.
You are a doer!
DON’T REST YOUR PEN; NEVER LET YOUR QUILLS DRY.
The Fine Art of Massage (Short Story) - 10/29/2002 5:45:20 PM
This is good. Could you do a re-write and tell us the rest of the story?
The Fine Art of Massage (Short Story) - 10/18/2002 2:55:09 PM
True to life; interesting; suspenseful, well done.
The Fine Art of Massage (Short Story) - 10/1/2002 1:15:42 PM
Very well done! haven't read ahy of Rita's stuff but sounds like she's jealous! You are very god at setting the mood, nice use of adjectives to describe the delights of the art of massage.
The Fine Art of Massage (Short Story) - 9/11/2002 4:40:19 AM
WooHoo!!! I really enjoyed this massage, Liz... I feel so refreshed now...Thank you... also fr reading my work..
Jenni
The Fine Art of Massage (Short Story) - 9/8/2002 10:02:40 AM
all i can say is WOW WOW WOW! i can see that you can escape into the parts of your imagination and connect with the fantasies that are lying dorment there want to become realities. :-P
The Fine Art of Massage (Short Story) - 8/27/2002 8:20:43 PM
Well I hate to toot my own horn, but I truly enjoyed writing it as well as reading it...No Rita I don't call it romance, I call it lust, but there is no lust category...so this is as good as it gets
The Fine Art of Massage (Short Story) - 8/25/2002 9:52:02 AM
Stealthily seductive. That hour passed very quickly.
The Fine Art of Massage (Short Story) - 8/25/2002 6:55:22 AM
i haven't read anything sillier than this--you call this romance?
All Too Real (Poetry) - 5/13/2013 8:30:20 PM
I have to wonder...how romance is possible without love...although I know love is very possible...without romance. It is a shame you stopped writing or posting with such talent.
Desert Magic (Poetry) - 8/5/2009 3:12:06 AM
I love reading this poem,great piece you have written
EDWIN
Dust Devils (Poetry) - 8/5/2009 3:11:06 AM
Magnificent poem :-)
Desert Wanderer (Poetry) - 8/5/2009 3:10:05 AM
I enjoy reading them,great work
EDWIN
Yearning (Poetry) - 8/5/2009 3:08:59 AM
Absolutely beautiful,take care
EDWIN
What Need Have I? (Poetry) - 9/26/2007 12:31:58 PM
well as a dark Knight I found this poem and I must say I loved how you wrote this-well done!
Desert Wanderer (Poetry) - 10/4/2006 4:42:56 PM
excellent imagery to this ku montage ...
Desert Wanderer (Poetry) - 10/3/2006 6:06:38 PM
A pleasure to read. You have captured a kinda unique loneliness to each. And vivid pictures..
Desert Wanderer (Poetry) - 10/3/2006 2:42:17 PM
this is an extraordinary series of 'ku...exceptional
Susan
This Winter (Poetry) - 8/10/2004 7:08:54 PM
"This Winter" is beautiful, touching and inspiring. Outstanding closing line.
I salute You, Sublime Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
What Need Have I? (Poetry) - 7/2/2004 5:47:42 PM
very nice. The need of Love embraces us all. You write it so well
Remnants (Poetry) - 4/3/2004 8:47:11 PM
Elizabeth, after reading your poem, I became curious and read your bio; which broght a song to mind: "First you say you do and then you don't, You're undecided now, What are you gonna' do." Is life that way for you? Probably not, I guess I am just a lonely man blowing his soul. Bill
Remnants (Poetry) - 4/3/2004 8:29:05 PM
simple actions unveiling
pieces of you that still remain
like shotgun shells
dropped carelessly after the blast
very interesting image
What Need Have I? (Poetry) - 3/27/2004 2:37:28 PM
This had a real nice flow to it Elizabeth..
liked it a lot..floria
Heaven's Gate (Poetry) - 3/20/2004 3:01:58 PM
If you could get an answer, I don't think you'd have a need to ask for anything ever again.
Heaven's Gate (Poetry) - 3/20/2004 1:58:34 PM
Warm words of romantic poetry. Well done.
Best regards,
Leland
Will You Be Mine (Poetry) - 9/8/2003 7:37:55 AM
This is very lovely and longing.
Will You Be Mine (Poetry) - 9/6/2003 10:30:17 PM
I enjoyed the pacing and rhythm of this ... it flowed well. I liked its sultry seductive feel. Well done.
Will You Be Mine (Poetry) - 9/6/2003 7:41:58 PM
very lovely poem...
Will You Be Mine (Poetry) - 9/6/2003 1:48:30 PM
beautiful..Floreann
Will You Be Mine (Poetry) - 9/6/2003 1:09:50 PM
Very beautiful poem, Elizabeth. The expression of love is intense and genuine.
Amor
Will You Be Mine (Poetry) - 9/6/2003 12:15:47 PM
Beautiful pic and beautiful write.
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Will You Be Mine (Poetry) - 9/6/2003 12:08:47 PM
I like this Elizabeth!!!! A question so many ask... great write...
In Spirit,
Bear
Nighttime's Light (Poetry) - 8/15/2003 6:09:02 PM
The night time is always the right time for amour. Sensually stunning romantic piece -- nicely done.
Nighttime's Light (Poetry) - 8/15/2003 12:50:13 AM
Beautiful verse, to go with this magnificent writing. I also like the hot picture.:)
Kudos!
tony:)
Forbidden (Poetry) - 8/2/2003 5:51:28 PM
Very beautifully written!! You definitely bring words to life!
Forbidden (Poetry) - 7/31/2003 9:54:16 PM
Very Cool Elizabeth, I always enjoy reading you work. Thanks.....
Jeff
Forbidden (Poetry) - 7/31/2003 9:06:37 PM
Wow Elizabeth, you are very talented. Keep up the good work girly!!
Forbidden (Poetry) - 7/31/2003 5:37:56 PM
wow great as always keep writing ever need a sponser please let me know . i think you should be publish all your poems.
Forbidden (Poetry) - 7/31/2003 5:10:54 PM
Very detailed. Any poem is great if you can actually "feel" or allow yourself to "imagine" that it can happen or has happened and takes you back to a special someone. Thanks for taking me to a wonderful place.~BRAVO~ Elizabeth !
Forbidden (Poetry) - 7/31/2003 5:09:43 PM
Drivel----no offense but go back to the drawing board--its been done and done better
Forbidden (Poetry) - 7/31/2003 4:50:36 PM
Loved every word.......romance, beauty and love are seen through each individuals eyes, you expressed yourself gracefully and honestly.
Caroline
Forbidden (Poetry) - 7/24/2003 5:49:20 PM
This is definitely romantic. It's very sensual and seductive. You have captured a pleasure filled moment of amour in your verses.
Forbidden (Poetry) - 7/24/2003 7:37:23 AM
This is BEAUTIFUL and VERY ROMANTIC Elizabeth! There is nothing wrong with this piece or it's content and I sincerely hope to see more good reviews of it!
Gods and Goddesses Bless
~Nikki~
That Is My Love (Poetry) - 7/5/2003 10:43:35 PM
Your words are like music to my ears. Very touching write.
That Is My Love (Poetry) - 7/5/2003 7:17:48 PM
This is a beautiful, wispy soft touching and romanic piece!!!! I really enjoyed it and into my library it goes! :O)
~Nikki~
That Is My Love (Poetry) - 7/5/2003 9:35:31 AM
Elizabth,
This is so beautiful
love the art also.
PJ
That Is My Love (Poetry) - 7/5/2003 4:12:09 AM
Stunning picture and soothing write of love...BHUWAN
One Ring (Poetry) - 6/25/2003 11:24:13 AM
What a refreshing piece...the title lures you in, then once in what a most pleasant suprise!!!!
~Nikki~
One Ring (Poetry) - 6/25/2003 1:03:07 AM
Feelings are difficult to express in words.Imagine touch.
One Ring (Poetry) - 6/24/2003 11:29:06 PM
That must have been some phone call, pretty lady. Well done.
Peace,
Cherokee
One Ring (Poetry) - 6/24/2003 11:27:26 PM
well done!
One Ring (Poetry) - 6/24/2003 6:37:35 PM
Whoa, That picture is spellbinding!! Excellent Writing too!
tn
One Ring (Poetry) - 6/24/2003 5:05:09 PM
I expected something else from this poem and got something much better. Captivating verses.
One Ring (Poetry) - 6/24/2003 4:50:20 PM
This was cleansing! Thought I was the only one that felt this way...ha ha! Very butterflyish feelings going on here :)
Thanks,
Teresa
One Ring (Poetry) - 6/24/2003 4:31:43 PM
Sweet one.
Did You? (Poetry) - 6/19/2003 5:34:48 AM
This is lovely work, sensual and tenderly romantic.
Did You? (Poetry) - 6/19/2003 12:26:09 AM
Lovely work...
Santa Fe (Poetry) - 6/18/2003 10:03:36 PM
What a lovely quality this has...very lyrical and would do well combined with the right music.
Santa Fe is a nice place...My wife and I were their not long ago, but our favorite areas are up by Taos and Angel Fire.
Did You? (Poetry) - 6/18/2003 9:57:53 PM
Excellent work...tender passions here mixed with a trace of insecurity...
Did You? (Poetry) - 6/18/2003 8:05:03 PM
Intense passion that capture the innocence and true beauty of love. Very nice.
Did You? (Poetry) - 6/18/2003 6:15:37 PM
Beautiful crafted, emotionally fulfilling, a wonderful piece, Elizabeth! :)
Did You? (Poetry) - 6/18/2003 5:32:17 PM
Awesome work!!!!!
Did You? (Poetry) - 6/18/2003 4:50:32 PM
This is tender and beautiful.
Peg
Hands (Poetry) - 6/17/2003 12:09:44 PM
Beautiful, and so touching,
Reindeer
Hands (Poetry) - 6/16/2003 8:22:08 PM
Lingering touch of a goodbye....beautiful and sad
Hands (Poetry) - 6/16/2003 5:35:18 PM
This really moved me. Charming from beginning to end. Lovely piece.
Hands (Poetry) - 6/16/2003 5:32:57 PM
Great job, i love it
Hands (Poetry) - 6/16/2003 5:08:04 PM
Wonderful!...
Sandie Angel / May Lu :o)
Hands (Poetry) - 6/16/2003 5:02:08 PM
Nice twist. I love the character in old hands, don't you?
Never Fly Away (Poetry) - 6/13/2003 1:46:20 PM
I am overwhelmed,,I bow to the Princess of Keys and offer a smile while tipping my Hat :O)
Secrets (Poetry) - 6/13/2003 1:39:42 PM
its nice to find people who speak truth from the heart,,thank you,its a part of life we see,,but words we feel :O)
Santa Fe (Poetry) - 6/13/2003 1:35:53 PM
that was great,,i started singing it,sounds like a hit,but who do you think should sing it?
Two Roses (Poetry) - 6/6/2003 5:59:07 PM
I love roses. They are the epitome of romance. Sweet poem.
Santa Fe (Poetry) - 6/6/2003 5:57:22 PM
I really loved the flow of this. It's sweet. I live in New Mexico in a small town and it seems like the big towns like Albuquerque and Santa Fe get all the attention. Matter of fact, folks who know nothing about New Mexico think every New Mexico city is either close to Santa Fe or Albuquerque. Personally I've never been to Santa Fe. It just rubs me the wrong way that everyone (maybe it's just New Mexicans) seems to think only the good things come from Santa Fe or Albuquerque -- Uh, I strongly disagree and dispute that notion. Neat poem though.
Santa Fe (Poetry) - 5/27/2003 7:37:05 PM
Oh Sweetie the imagery and flow this is cotton candy sighs
Peggy
Santa Fe (Poetry) - 5/27/2003 6:47:42 PM
Beautiful pic and wonderful poem!
Sandie Angel :o)
Santa Fe (Poetry) - 5/27/2003 6:38:28 PM
Lovely work, Elizabeth. I love Sante Fe. So beautiful.
Secrets (Poetry) - 5/26/2003 5:37:00 PM
this is beautiful , beth
Secrets (Poetry) - 5/26/2003 5:15:59 PM
A very good emotional piece...what a great listener and friend you must be!
~Nikki~
Secrets (Poetry) - 5/26/2003 1:42:42 PM
5-26-03
But, Now You Share His Dark Secrets!
TRASK
Secrets (Poetry) - 5/26/2003 10:40:24 AM
What a friend you are to someone. This is so true and comes through clearly. Few have a friend like you. Someone is so lucky. Bill
Secrets (Poetry) - 5/26/2003 5:43:23 AM
You can feel the emotion in that writing. Thank you so much for sharing that with me.
You are very talented.
*smiles*
~ Tina
Secrets (Poetry) - 5/25/2003 10:49:24 PM
What a lovely friend you must be. This is a very very emotive piece. Thnk you so much!
Candy
Secrets (Poetry) - 5/25/2003 8:43:06 PM
Hi Sweetie,
It's been a long time and you are still a great poet. I do wish you every good thing in this life.
Love, Janet xoxoxo
Secrets (Poetry) - 5/25/2003 8:11:40 PM
Ekizabeth ,
this one is so heartfelt
and excellent
Peggy
Secrets (Poetry) - 5/25/2003 8:04:49 PM
good friends are hard to come by... well done...
Secrets (Poetry) - 5/25/2003 7:35:44 PM
Awww! I know it's a good thing to be like that, but sometimes the listener needs to be listened to, too. I know, because I am that listener, like you Elizabeth. Great work of portrayl.
Warm Love
*-Brittany-*
Secrets (Poetry) - 5/25/2003 7:07:52 PM
Ah, nice. You are a good friend.
Forever Grateful (Poetry) - 5/22/2003 9:25:33 PM
Times are tough but hang in there.
I don't believe in saying goodbye.
I also hate to see good writers silenced. Regardless of whether you are here at AD or not, don't stop writing -- ever. Writing has given me hours of great joy.
Oh by the way in the words of the song before Disney commericals, etc: If you wish upon the star, it don't matter who you are, if you believe what's in your heart, your dreams will come true.
Merry Christmas!
Marie
Forever Grateful (Poetry) - 5/22/2003 4:36:04 PM
Elizabeth even tho this speaks of your leaving the den family it is such a tender touching write...Oh I hate to see us lose a fellow poetess and sister of love and light! <tears tears tears>
~Nikki~
Forever Grateful (Poetry) - 5/21/2003 11:14:42 PM
Screeeeeech ! I hate to see you go. You write wonderful poems.
Never Fly Away (Poetry) - 5/20/2003 1:45:38 PM
perfectly penned
i bow in admiration really i do
wonderful
Never Fly Away (Poetry) - 5/20/2003 1:12:19 AM
So beautiful Elizabeth!! It makes me want to grab the phone just to hear his voice again. ::sigh::
Never Fly Away (Poetry) - 5/19/2003 9:07:29 PM
So beautiful!
Never Fly Away (Poetry) - 5/19/2003 8:02:07 PM
WOW I really like that and so doe my KNIGHT.
TY for sharing
Never Fly Away (Poetry) - 5/19/2003 7:33:19 PM
Beautiful. Where did you find a knight ??? Thought they were all dead. [smiles]
I Want (Poetry) - 4/26/2003 2:47:05 AM
Great write
I Want (Poetry) - 4/19/2003 10:35:22 PM
4-19-03
Need Will Overcome All Want!
TRASK
I Want (Poetry) - 4/19/2003 10:01:41 PM
how simply sweet and piercing..i love it...
I Want (Poetry) - 4/19/2003 8:50:52 PM
Beautiful !
I Want (Poetry) - 4/19/2003 6:00:47 PM
Beautifully written as usual Elizabeth! You've captured those feelings that we all have for our "special someone" and you can bet that i'll be forwarding this to mine!! :0)
I Want (Poetry) - 4/19/2003 5:44:38 PM
elizabeth...its beautiful..as always i love your work :-) reminded me of me n my baby char ..ty for shareing
I Want (Poetry) - 4/19/2003 5:34:53 PM
Excellently written Elizabeth, I loved it keep up the extraordinary work my friend..
Thanks
Jeff
Two Roses (Poetry) - 4/12/2003 7:59:03 AM
Liz...as always, you've written a beautiful poem! Thanks so much for sharing your work.
Love ya!
Kimmy
Two Roses (Poetry) - 4/11/2003 10:04:26 PM
Elizabeth: Just red your poem Two Red Roses and wanted to say how much I liked it. It is written so well, it was just a pleasure to read it. I hope to see more of your work soon.
Thanks
Jeff
Two Roses (Poetry) - 4/11/2003 9:39:32 PM
Absolutely gorgeous.
thanks so much for sharing!
Two Roses (Poetry) - 4/11/2003 6:19:19 PM
Oh this is touching and beautiful
Peggy
Two Roses (Poetry) - 4/11/2003 6:04:29 PM
Nice, Elizabeth.
Your Spirit (Poetry) - 3/20/2003 6:28:45 AM
elizabeth.....you never cease to amaze me....i loved this
Your Spirit (Poetry) - 3/19/2003 6:48:33 PM
a romantic gem...
Your Spirit (Poetry) - 3/19/2003 3:01:58 PM
This is truly romantic, your knight is very lucky!
Maria
Your Spirit (Poetry) - 3/19/2003 11:23:26 AM
"Your Spirit" is poetry flowing from the seas of dreams to the port of imagination to strike the emotions of the readers. It is magic!
I have enjoyed reading "Your Spirit". Thank you.
I Salute the Author of "Your Spirit".
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Your Spirit (Poetry) - 3/19/2003 10:49:53 AM
Oh how romantic. I love it!
For a Friend (Poetry) - 3/13/2003 10:00:37 AM
Elizabeth, your words touch my heart. Thank you. Outstanding work!!
For a Friend (Poetry) - 3/11/2003 5:45:25 PM
a rare gem....yes you are my dear friend....im glad ill never have to miss you!! love ya.....pam~
For a Friend (Poetry) - 3/11/2003 5:30:46 PM
wow...beautifully penned...BHUWAN
For a Friend (Poetry) - 3/11/2003 4:31:56 PM
Touching.
~E
For a Friend (Poetry) - 3/11/2003 4:06:00 PM
awwww very nice :) you are so creative :)
For a Friend (Poetry) - 3/11/2003 2:45:35 PM
A BEAUTIFUL WRITE FOR A FRIEND,
WILLIAM
For a Friend (Poetry) - 3/11/2003 1:05:59 PM
Elizabeth, beautiful poem and wonderful tribute to a friend.
My Solace (Poetry) - 3/6/2003 6:52:51 AM
best read Ive seen since I've been overseas!
My Solace (Poetry) - 3/3/2003 12:01:53 PM
All I can say is WOW. I love all of your poetry, and this is just yet another added to my list.
My Solace (Poetry) - 3/3/2003 8:25:22 AM
great poem. nice sense of longing.
My Solace (Poetry) - 3/3/2003 6:48:33 AM
Elizabeth, your solace is so powerful and worth seeking. Bill Murray
My Solace (Poetry) - 3/2/2003 10:07:54 PM
such simple lines, and so well done.
Enjoyed it.
~E
My Solace (Poetry) - 3/2/2003 9:04:18 PM
I really enjoyed your piece!! Beautiful!
My Solace (Poetry) - 3/2/2003 8:08:08 PM
bEAUTIFUL PIECE.
"A kiss, if only a soft brush
of your lips against mine
alights my passion "
PEG
Everyday (Poetry) - 2/24/2003 4:38:57 PM
So touching it's amazing, a bit sad though... why is the questions isn't it? I always seem to long for "him"... how beautiful though.
Everyday (Poetry) - 2/24/2003 4:23:21 PM
Elizabeth,
one the photo is beautiful
And this is so longing
Sweetie.
love Peg
Here With You (Poetry) - 1/6/2003 6:04:28 PM
from your heart to his......you can feel it....loved it....pam
Here With You (Poetry) - 1/4/2003 3:24:27 PM
I'm guessin this is from personal experience?
LOL!
Very well writen, Pretti!
DeWayne
Here With You (Poetry) - 1/4/2003 2:48:52 PM
Really sensual and filled with deep longing. I loved it too. Bill Murray
Here With You (Poetry) - 1/4/2003 12:42:04 PM
awwwwwwwie!!!!! i love it!!!!!! so happy u found your knight!
Here With You (Poetry) - 1/4/2003 11:15:06 AM
OHHHHHHHH Very Nice :) I love it!!
Treasures of Love (Poetry) - 12/19/2002 1:57:00 PM
Hi Elizabeth...
Beautiful as always...
Happy Holidays
Trixie :)
Treasures of Love (Poetry) - 12/19/2002 1:28:41 PM
This in itself is a treasure of a write, Elizabeth. Such is the intensity of love.
Amor
Treasures of Love (Poetry) - 12/19/2002 3:16:13 AM
"for treasures of love"
this is a treasure in verse and meaning.
Beautiful.
Treasures of Love (Poetry) - 12/19/2002 12:10:18 AM
yes what ever u said in this poem...it happens if we go in to in depth of love...this only make us uniteness-oneness....nice written
How Deeply (Poetry) - 12/17/2002 6:51:47 AM
Beautiful piece...
How Deeply (Poetry) - 12/17/2002 6:46:00 AM
very nice write
Winter Moon (Poetry) - 12/9/2002 8:35:21 PM
this is a beauty of a poem, and pic to match
Winter Moon (Poetry) - 12/9/2002 8:17:27 PM
That was beautifull Pretti gf..you go girl!..:-)
Winter Moon (Poetry) - 12/9/2002 7:10:12 PM
Oh this was beautiful~*
Book of Love (Poetry) - 12/4/2002 10:34:03 PM
Yes soothing and peaceful like an exotic evening before a fireplace with your amor. How tempting you have made this. Makes me want to slip in and be a part of the poem. Bill Murray
Book of Love (Poetry) - 12/4/2002 2:42:28 PM
Beautiful!!!!!,Elizabeth
Book of Love (Poetry) - 12/4/2002 1:12:11 PM
soothing, peaceful write...ahhhhhh, needed that on this cold, blustery day...thank you! beautifully written! (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :) (if i were a cat, i'd purr...this is "purr"fect!)
Phantoms (Poetry) - 12/4/2002 12:48:07 AM
Love the spectre part
cheers
Allain
Phantoms (Poetry) - 12/3/2002 9:52:03 PM
Excellent Elizabeth
Phantoms (Poetry) - 12/3/2002 8:33:32 PM
That was really nice...the words flowed so smoothly.
Desert Magic (Poetry) - 11/30/2002 7:04:17 AM
So beautiful this piece is and I loved the notation excellent!
El Corazon Que Florece/ The Heart that Blooms (Poetry) - 11/21/2002 8:53:52 AM
Author-Poet Elizabeth Galvez, you have the magic pen! You write divinely, whether it is poetry or shot stories.
I have a feeling that from this to many feature generations you will receive accolades from the all corners of the planet.
YOU ARE JUST DIVINE!
Thank you
El Corazon Que Florece/ The Heart that Blooms (Poetry) - 11/19/2002 11:29:11 AM
How truly is Love expressed, for it is here within your words that its true meaning shows the Rose in full blossom
El Corazon Que Florece/ The Heart that Blooms (Poetry) - 11/19/2002 9:37:43 AM
so glad you put the english translation along with the spanish; i don't know much spanish (but i AM learning..slowly!)! beautiful write in both languages; i so enjoyed this! love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :)
El Corazon Que Florece/ The Heart that Blooms (Poetry) - 11/19/2002 3:07:56 AM
Yo soy el mar,
Mi color es azul,
Yo soy el barco
que tu levas
para partes desconocido
por rumbos extranos
en tu mente. Siento
pero yo soy Senor
Nadie. Bill o
mejor dicho
Guillermo
Your poem is excellent in both languges.
Perdoname, you soy chistoso!
El Corazon Que Florece/ The Heart that Blooms (Poetry) - 11/19/2002 1:27:31 AM
A true expression of art pictured with the film of beautiful cambo of words.
Congartulations Poet Elizabeth Galvez.
Awakenings (Poetry) - 10/24/2002 9:33:05 AM
very nice
josie
Awakenings (Poetry) - 10/24/2002 6:50:54 AM
Beautiful write.
Awakenings (Poetry) - 10/23/2002 11:42:32 PM
Readng this and looking at this gorgeous woman make me want to kiss the sky forever more. Bill
Awakenings (Poetry) - 10/23/2002 8:37:12 PM
You do it well. Beautiful and romantic.
Awakenings (Poetry) - 10/23/2002 8:21:06 PM
Very nice!!
Jack
Awakenings (Poetry) - 10/23/2002 8:15:04 PM
Simply Beautiful!
Audrey Cooper
Knight in My Dreams (Poetry) - 10/23/2002 5:14:34 AM
Love them cold castles.
Knight in My Dreams (Poetry) - 10/23/2002 1:52:30 AM
A beautiful dream. I hope you fulfill it. Bill
Knight in My Dreams (Poetry) - 10/23/2002 12:02:14 AM
Missed you. Very lovely poem. As always an excellent write. Did you get my message. Lost your addy in my IM AOL, write to me.
I wrote you with my new address in your message board.
Cheers
Allain
Knight in My Dreams (Poetry) - 10/22/2002 8:07:20 PM
Simple yet elegent! Wonderful.
The Voice
Knight in My Dreams (Poetry) - 10/22/2002 7:18:42 PM
Very romantic. Loved it.
Adrift (Poetry) - 10/2/2002 4:01:43 PM
I wrote a poem called adrift too..Yours is very beautiful!! Ty, Dani
Adrift (Poetry) - 10/2/2002 1:33:42 PM
Beautiful poem. Love the image of the lighthouse.
You (Poetry) - 10/1/2002 1:36:17 PM
Enjoyed ..... j
You (Poetry) - 10/1/2002 12:58:23 PM
Beautiful photo and poem!
You (Poetry) - 10/1/2002 6:09:57 AM
Lisa, beautiful poem. : )
You (Poetry) - 10/1/2002 5:10:30 AM
Beautiful photo to go with a very good write, Great Job,,,Lisa
Goth Love (Poetry) - 9/23/2002 4:18:06 AM
Outstanding! Makes me think of my days in school; I remember those in Black, and the blood tinted lips too! Different from your usual write, I like it!