My Cherokee Butterfly (Short Story) - 4/22/2007 5:03:22 AM
I love the lines you use, Tiana Starr; such imagery! My favorite lines:
"...watching ponies prance
to the beat of the bunnies
thump-thump on the bongo drum...."
Well done! A lovely tribute.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
My Cherokee Butterfly (Short Story) - 4/22/2007 3:53:17 AM
Tiara Starr~
This is absolutely beautiful! Very well done! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your Texas friend, Karen Lynn. :D
Mommy (Article) - 7/17/2007 7:26:15 PM
Wonderful write. Just reading your bio made me smile. You ought to enter some pageants (Oh, you have). You have to be a fun person to be around. Thanks for using scripture in your bio. Life is hard but God is so good, so good!
And yes, you obviously love your mom! Keep up the good work!
sea worthy (Article) - 4/27/2007 11:47:28 AM
Nice muse; Lets imagine first that armpit inspired nirvanic moment, being sure to avoid those jellyfish. What is thy hearts desire? Don't let them steel your fire while holding the bellows of decorum. If we really love self then everybody else won't be able to resist!
Such opportunities await thee. Happy trails...
LOST (Poetry) - 8/7/2012 2:31:06 PM
where there is life...there is hope. so... one begins with one day at a time. thanks for share
asa
LOST (Poetry) - 8/7/2012 6:50:17 AM
A perfect description of depression. I have been there. All you have to do is keep working, writing each day, and before you know it, the sun will come out and you will see your way clearly.
Ron
saved (Poetry) - 4/8/2008 7:03:52 PM
It has a certain... 'magentism' -- Jeff
saved (Poetry) - 6/27/2007 7:11:12 PM
Wow this is beautiful!!
Love the spiritual reflections in this write
Your spirituality trully Shines in this piece!!
Love Peace and Happiness to you...Morning Star
saved (Poetry) - 6/25/2007 7:36:13 AM
I liked this and could relate to it on more than one level. I have a large magnetic message board on which are several sets of magnetic words, which my wife put together for me as a present. It has been the inspiration of many pieces over the years.
Excellent write here!
saved (Poetry) - 6/1/2007 4:37:39 PM
Your faith shines throughout your verses, Tiara. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Regis
saved (Poetry) - 4/22/2007 9:30:28 AM
Nice thoughts, and a nice gift to one who surely must deserve this poetic expression of love...
nicely penned....
Art Sun...
Flakes (Poetry) - 4/20/2007 8:58:58 PM
Snowflakes are so pretty and each unto their own. It is so difficult to think of snow when temperatures are reaching 70's and 80's, but I sure will try.
Be safe,
Karen
Flakes (Poetry) - 4/20/2007 6:37:54 PM
A very nice work of thoughts and expressions within the spiralling of imagery and this view you display through poetry...
nice.....
enjoyed.....Art Sun...
Flakes (Poetry) - 4/20/2007 2:42:52 PM
absolutely beautiful and vivid imagery....excellent rhythm and flow...one of the better seasonal pieces I have seen in a while.
Flakes (Poetry) - 4/20/2007 1:56:17 PM
Tiara,
The way winter was so mild this year I swear that our daffodils came up with snow on the ground. Your imagery is outstanding. Blessings Always, Paul.