INCOMPLETE (Poetry) - 9/5/2007 5:33:30 PM
Nice dedication to your soulmate.
She Dances (Poetry) - 6/4/2007 3:07:55 AM
This one is so real as I can see her before me as I read. Thank you for sharing, you have real talent and I hope to see more of your writes.
Rose
INCOMPLETE (Poetry) - 6/4/2007 3:03:59 AM
beautiful verses which truly touched my heart as well as anyone who would read your words. You are a very strong person and you are in my thoughts and prayers. Thank you.
Rose
INCOMPLETE (Poetry) - 6/1/2007 10:54:00 AM
I know these feelings intimately and I'm sure I'm not the only one you have touched with your verses. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Regis
She Dances (Poetry) - 6/1/2007 10:34:44 AM
How beautiful, I could picture her there in the garden. Lovely work Lady D.
Forbidden (Poetry) - 5/30/2007 1:01:03 PM
This is exquisite Lady D. I would like to live in that place of serenity, not just enjoy fleeting forbidden moments.
INCOMPLETE (Poetry) - 5/29/2007 10:31:20 AM
It seems you truly know about Twin Souls..splendid verse..love it!
saved this one..
Vesna:)
She Dances (Poetry) - 5/27/2007 8:57:12 AM
lovely....love the art of motion
expressed well here
INCOMPLETE (Poetry) - 5/27/2007 8:55:01 AM
sheer pain felt through each and every line
pain will reside
can tell he's well miss
"my roots, lie open and bare" devastating!!!
She Dances (Poetry) - 5/26/2007 7:08:31 PM
Beautiful poem with graceful performance of dance. Awesome write L. Desdinova. I could not resist to stop and leave my prints on your Amazing write. It is glorious poem! ~ Zuzanna
She Dances (Poetry) - 5/25/2007 5:22:17 AM
Very touching and beautiful. You captured the movement of her dance in that it just about jumped out of the page! And the winding down of the dance at the end completed a lovely and poignant poem. Well done! ~ Helena ~
INCOMPLETE (Poetry) - 5/24/2007 3:44:16 AM
o.L.D.,
Your pain is heartfelt in each line and verse. Losing someone so close is truely tragic. I pray closure and life see you through again to completeness. May God Bless You and Shelter You Under His Wing, Always Paul.
INCOMPLETE (Poetry) - 5/24/2007 2:24:41 AM
Oh Samantha, this is so heartbreakingly tragic and your journey through grieving is so very palpable. You penned your thoughts so eloquently and beautifully in this precious poem. Thank you for sharing your heart with us. Love and Blessings, Helena
INCOMPLETE (Poetry) - 5/23/2007 11:47:46 PM
Sam, truly heartwrenching! My deepest respects extend to your loss.
I am so sorry to hear that you have lost someone so dear to you,
God Bless you, this poem touched my heart, always, mike,
She Dances (Poetry) - 5/23/2007 11:37:49 PM
sammy, this is truly masterfully rendered, ethereal vision, wow! your passion took my breath away!"she dances"... so very sad, heartbreaking.. loved this..mike
She Dances (Poetry) - 5/23/2007 8:43:16 PM
JUST TOO BEAUTIFUL, for mere words, so I shall just SIGH in it's honor! Your awesome talent and vivid imagery brought this write to life for me and it danced before my dazzled eyes! LOVE YOU! SC
INCOMPLETE (Poetry) - 5/23/2007 8:38:19 PM
The beauty of this Love Offering for your beloved, touched my heart and brought me to tears! Sending you MY LOVE and a HUG! SC
Forbidden (Poetry) - 5/23/2007 8:33:47 PM
So beautifully worded and expressed, My Beautiful Wounded Dove! You have the face of an Angel and the heart as well! LOVE YOU! SC
Forbidden (Poetry) - 5/22/2007 6:15:54 PM
Bravo! A wonderful collab of blended ink and seamless stanzas flowing into one amazing poem!
