My Every Wish (Poetry) - 5/24/2008 3:21:43 PM
This is a beautiful poem,it's like telling a story strait from the heart of love! I believe that every one has a story to tell aboout his or her every wish... but I do appreciate your work.
My World of Make Believe (Poetry) - 8/15/2007 9:35:53 AM
I can completely relate to the sentiments that you express via your verses here, Liana Marie. Oddly, I am currently in the process of writing a "poem" about the walls of the world. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
Regis (Reg)
Building a Sand Castle (Poetry) - 8/15/2007 9:33:41 AM
Symbolically powerful in meaning, Liana Marie. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,
Regis
My Every Wish (Poetry) - 8/15/2007 9:32:30 AM
But all that I want
And all that I see
Is you and the love that can not be…
How most appropriate and apt these words are to my life, Liana Marie. Thank you for sharing them. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
My Every Wish (Poetry) - 8/15/2007 4:43:11 AM
Beautiful work, though so very sad. I am sorry you are going through it. I can tell you this for a fact- it did not work out for a REASON. You do not get a vote, and you may not like it- but things go just like they are supposed to. I wish you healing, peace and love.
My Every Wish (Poetry) - 8/14/2007 9:19:18 PM
Intense questions for they have been thought of by so many since Adam first laid with Eve but your lovely way of asking though filled with sadness is also somthing beutiful in the way you have presented it...close to home for all.
Fee
Building a Sand Castle (Poetry) - 8/14/2007 9:17:06 PM
This poem has so much to offer that it glows with warmth as the writer's heart builds the walls to protect the soft tissues so easily hurt or washed away like the grains of sand when hit by a wave. Sweet.
Fee
My Every Wish (Poetry) - 8/7/2007 9:31:24 AM
An insane pain.... He's prolly not man enuff...
My Every Wish (Poetry) - 8/7/2007 2:57:07 AM
Liana,
Such a beautiful name. Knowing and wanting what's right in our hearts is the fulfillment of those dreams. Always persue your dreams. There isn't a goal that we can set that is unattainable. Bless You Always, Paul.
My Every Wish (Poetry) - 8/6/2007 8:26:42 PM
A nice poem...I am sure there are many who either have or are going through this same thought...
nicely written poem...
Art Sun...
My World of Make Believe (Poetry) - 6/12/2007 4:11:11 PM
Well, indeed we are what we think, so if you want to believe in your paradigm, so be it. Rather like Bastian in the Never ending story...
My World of Make Believe (Poetry) - 5/27/2007 5:03:15 PM
This is nice...I like the expressions and views of this thought...very nice poem...
enjoyed...
Art Sun.....
Building a Sand Castle (Poetry) - 5/16/2007 4:07:58 AM
Liana,
Metaphorically speaking, everyone builds walls or castles to safeguard our vulnerabilities least our whole world come tumbling down. Outstanding write. I must look into that book.
Building a Sand Castle (Poetry) - 5/15/2007 9:46:46 PM
How sweet and endearing a piece this is. Built many a sand castle, always including a moat, but alas....when the tide came rolling in......it was gone. Good write.
Be safe,
Karen
Building a Sand Castle (Poetry) - 5/15/2007 5:20:13 PM
THANKS FOR SHARING YOUR UNIQUE REATIVE TALENT.
Building a Sand Castle (Poetry) - 5/15/2007 4:24:36 PM
Great metaphor, so many of us build our hopes and dreams, only to find they were just castles in the sand, awaiting the tide to turn..
Building a Sand Castle (Poetry) - 5/15/2007 2:50:19 PM
I used to love building sand castles as a child.
Building a Sand Castle (Poetry) - 5/15/2007 1:22:41 PM
and your own words...great imagery
