Final Take (Short Story) - 5/24/2007 10:01:40 AM
Jess gives good advice. Do keep writing and sharing. Thank you, Andrea. Love and peace,
Regis
Final Take (Short Story) - 5/24/2007 8:59:34 AM
Intriguing, I have to know what happens now;-)
You do need to keep an eye on your punctuation though, especially the use of capital letters during dialogue.
I enjoyed this. Keep writing.
Jessica.
Make you mine (Poetry) - 5/13/2008 10:17:15 AM
Welcome to the den. You will love it. Nice poem you wrote too. So simply said with understanding words of love. You will do alright cause you will try to expand your knowledge here too.
Make you mine (Poetry) - 5/24/2007 9:59:38 AM
I will simply echo Jess's thoughts because they're right. Love and peace,
Regis
Make you mine (Poetry) - 5/24/2007 8:49:04 AM
A touching write.
Welcome to the den, keep writing.
Best wishes,
Jessica.
