Apologia (Article) - 1/13/2012 8:36:54 PM
Thanks for encouraging me to read this, Melie. Time only permitted me to scan much of it on the first time round, and I slowed down long enough to affirm that I concur with your final conclusion. I will return to this again and give you more feedback at another time, but it is a powerful affirmation that you are a gifted writer. I would not let one person's view that your poem is "anachronistic" deter you from continuing to write poetry. Some of what I write might also fall into that catch-all category. The main thing is to stay true to your vision as long as it is consistent with helping others along the way. May Mercy, Peace, and Love be yours in abundance (Jude 2).
Roger
This Nameless Thing (Poetry) - 8/19/2013 8:28:20 PM
Wish I would have written this one, I like it.
Unalive (Poetry) - 8/19/2013 8:27:18 PM
I like this one.
Nature's Guest (Poetry) - 8/2/2013 11:05:41 AM
Melie this was so gentle and peaceful! I loved it darlin'...{tot}
This Nameless Thing (Poetry) - 3/5/2013 12:03:11 PM
The word eloquent fits this passage beautifully.
Ron
This Nameless Thing (Poetry) - 3/4/2013 12:59:49 PM
yOUR WORDS MAKE ONE'S HEART SIGH mELIE DARLIN'. XO
Southern Belle (Poetry) - 3/4/2013 12:36:55 PM
This is still one of my very favorites Melie! xo
As the Sun Set (Poetry) - 3/4/2013 12:35:35 PM
This is so very beautiful Melie as all your wonderful writes. xo
Unalive (Poetry) - 9/5/2012 9:01:06 AM
This is a thoroughly morbid piece if I ever read one!
Ron
In a Forest, Near a Stream (Poetry) - 8/15/2012 10:30:57 AM
Oh, such vivid descriptions, including the idiosyncrasy of a dream. Perhaps I had that one time or two myself. Very original and interesting to read.
Ron
Southern Belle (Poetry) - 8/3/2012 5:20:22 AM
I've always liked this poem Mellie, beautifully penned.
Southern Belle (Poetry) - 7/29/2012 9:38:24 AM
Melie~
A love poem sweet in essence to the Southern Beauty.
Lady Mary Ann
Southern Belle (Poetry) - 7/26/2012 12:04:29 PM
The spirit lives on, long after the body is gone.
Ron
My Continent (Poetry) - 6/27/2012 8:40:50 AM
Oh,such beauty in your words Melie' my sweet darlin'! I miss you so much darlin'! xo [tot]
