cookies and milk (Short Story) - 3/27/2010 10:49:12 PM
thought provoking read
last night (Short Story) - 4/11/2008 10:28:19 AM
....yes...it expresses your grief and about a million other feelings very well..HOWEVER..live in the grace we call NOW.
That , at this point in time ,is the ONLY reality you have ..live it!
Well written..
V
God (Short Story) - 3/15/2008 5:01:01 PM
Pretty intense, very frighteningly true....
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
God (Short Story) - 3/15/2008 10:25:07 AM
moving write!!
Love Tinka
the lost kid (Short Story) - 9/22/2007 7:46:50 AM
I want pictures! I want pictures! This story was Kewl!
I would love to see this in animation Willy!
Your mind makes me smile!
Much love and Warmer hugs, Warrior Lady Sheeeoox
STay Positive! Happy and STrong!
the lost kid (Short Story) - 5/17/2007 9:54:54 AM
Most interesting story!!
Lov eTinka
the lost kid (Short Story) - 5/16/2007 8:39:35 AM
Interesting perspective from the viewpoint of a fly. Good story; enjoyed~
last night (Short Story) - 4/29/2007 7:00:07 AM
This is so very sad....melancholy striked me... the yearning inside to be like a sore toe...keep nagging at the heart's deepest cores!!
Love Tinka
last night (Short Story) - 4/28/2007 7:45:58 AM
I think that I remember reading this awhile back. If so, I'm glad that you reposted it! It draws you into itself, watching and wanting to help. Did that make sense? Anyway, I enjoy this story!
cookies and milk (Short Story) - 4/27/2007 11:48:14 AM
Oh my goodness...this got my attention....hope Helen will be okay!!
Looking forward to read more!!
Love Tinka
the crowd vanished (Short Story) - 3/29/2007 10:26:06 AM
Most interesting...now you see me now you don't!!
Love Tinka
a tangled web (Short Story) - 12/17/2006 8:25:31 PM
and...?
Perfection (Short Story) - 1/17/2006 5:58:23 PM
Hi, William. This is a provocative "thought piece," and so a success. :-) I enjoy your clean writing style. Thank you for your visits and reviews. I appreciate them. ~~Nordette
dark shadows (Short Story) - 12/19/2005 10:13:34 AM
The memories unfurled in my brain reading this piece. I used to race home after school in New Orleans to see Dark Shadows. It came on 3:30 pm CST. My cousins and I, we were all fans. Thank you for this. ~~Nordette
Testimony (Short Story) - 11/10/2005 12:42:45 PM
I am surprised you haven't sent this story out anywhere, you're pretty damn good at doing the Mythos kind of horror. Thanx for the review on O.W.I.F. You got a voice with this one, just need to flesh the story out even more.
dark shadows (Short Story) - 10/14/2005 5:12:31 PM
ahhhh... a blast from the past! wonderfully caustic!
Testimony (Short Story) - 6/9/2005 6:13:54 AM
enjoyed the read
dark shadows (Short Story) - 3/18/2005 7:46:24 PM
Such a wonderful tribute to this show. I love the last line here. Walking up to the home he no longer knows.
You really have a magnificent pen in hand and I love your www. Many interesting and things on there.
Thank You elliot
have a Super Duper Day Every day and don't wrok too hard.
groans were only a sigh barely heard. AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!! now that is heard.(C:)
Traceyxo
dark shadows (Short Story) - 3/18/2005 10:42:26 AM
Good write, William. I especially liked your last paragraph! I will visit your web site soon.
dark shadows (Short Story) - 3/16/2005 4:42:12 AM
Nice tribute. I'll have to catch the show sometime.
M.Rose
dark shadows (Short Story) - 3/14/2005 2:38:46 PM
enjoyed the read, enjoyed te show back in the 60s
dark shadows (Short Story) - 3/13/2005 5:26:10 PM
My mother used to watch this when I was a kid... Dark Shadows was a different kind of soap... still is.
Interesting write. :)
dark shadows (Short Story) - 3/12/2005 2:54:39 PM
Use to race home after school just to watch it, mom couldn't believe I was watching a soap opera... oh thanks for the memories...
dark shadows (Short Story) - 3/12/2005 12:50:16 PM
I used to watch this show on Sci-Fi Channel -- the inspiration for Among Shadows was Dark Shadows. This is a good way to tribute the gothic soap opera.
dark shadows (Short Story) - 3/12/2005 9:35:48 AM
i remember this show; it was a favorite of my oldest sister's for a long time. good nostalgic write; well done! :)
Review of Mesphisto's Seed by Susie Hawes (Article) - 12/15/2004 2:44:14 PM
Sounds really interesting and thrilling no putting it down. Thank You for this. I really appreciate your time for doing this.
have a really wonderful day every day
Tracey
What sayeth love? (Poetry) - 5/26/2011 6:59:30 AM
Love sucks, one reason I'll probably stay single fo the rest of my days, I won't have to worry about it, except for the love of my family and kids.
poem for a rainy day (Poetry) - 5/26/2011 6:57:12 AM
perfect poem, for the perfect rainy day. We've got so much rain here in Michigan, if I could sell it I would be rich,,lol
The colour of your eyes (Poetry) - 11/26/2010 1:25:09 PM
this piece of poetry has incredible depth William
masterful with emotion piercing the heart
Love's Bounty & Revealing Eyes
Vickie
poem for a rainy day (Poetry) - 4/1/2010 3:19:24 AM
BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
The colour of your eyes (Poetry) - 4/1/2010 3:11:49 AM
EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
an old man's spring (Poetry) - 4/1/2010 3:00:12 AM
VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
a sea chanty for m (Poetry) - 3/15/2010 11:05:55 AM
I can hear this "old salt" song in my head.
The colour of your eyes (Poetry) - 4/24/2009 5:16:27 AM
WOW! What a sad state of mind Bill, but a reflection of what is TRUE to your heart and the memories that bring YOU FORWARD,
OUT OF THE EMOTIONAL DARK!
as you sit peacefully (knowing) drinking your coffee
and smoking your cigarette.
What a vision of solitude, for a heart that really KNEW!
This healing and cleansing should strengthen!
LOVE this clever Poem of sadness and sweet memories, that will sustain thee, FOREVER!
WRITE ON! My friend and may "I" also say, Thank you for blessing my pages/corner in your special loving, honest, caring ways!
Warmest Blessings of Love, Light, Peace, Hugs and Inspirations, Warrior Purple Lady SHEExooo
a sea chanty for m (Poetry) - 4/7/2009 11:11:48 PM
Bringing out the lure of the Gods of the past and intertwining them with the present, well said...
Be always safe,
Karen
What sayeth love? (Poetry) - 4/6/2009 4:03:54 PM
So solemn, yet breathes life onto itself through words that pearce the heart, beautiful...
Be always safe,
Karen
What sayeth love? (Poetry) - 4/6/2009 10:10:41 AM
Transcendent beautiful words that instantly bring to mind a lost love and heart-wrenching regret. Well done!
What sayeth love? (Poetry) - 4/6/2009 8:35:30 AM
William,
Your beautiful words tell a beautiful love story.
Mary
Once there were trains (Poetry) - 4/2/2009 10:07:52 AM
William,
What a sorrowful tale of the homeless and forgotten. You've written of that pain so well.
Mary
poem for a rainy day (Poetry) - 3/15/2009 2:56:30 AM
This is a very thoughtout and well written poem,take care
EDWIN
poem for a rainy day (Poetry) - 3/14/2009 8:11:23 PM
Wonderful, whimsical, irredescent. This poem is like unwrapping a beautiful gift.
Funny how things end (Poetry) - 3/12/2009 5:19:19 AM
Oh My, this hit my mind like a brick well aimed. Brilliantly penned.
Funny how things end (Poetry) - 3/9/2009 2:33:37 PM
And life does go on, doesn't it and along the way we carry our baggage sad as it may be...
Be always safe,
Karen
Funny how things end (Poetry) - 3/9/2009 7:02:53 AM
Hi William,
"Funny how things end
Pieces of life, friendships
become shadows"
You write like you are in my space, how real! Thank you for sharing this short, but deep write.
In Spirit,
Bear
faces like dancing angels in the winds (Poetry) - 2/1/2009 10:55:21 AM
I like this, Bill, its ethereal quality and its truth. Sometimes we don't realize how much we miss an old love until we catch a glimpse of them again whether in real life, dreams, or shifting memory.
faces like dancing angels in the winds (Poetry) - 11/2/2008 1:26:08 AM
A powerful and loving tribute to your loved one.
I have lost a wife and it took 20 yrs. to write a story about her.
It is on my website titled - "A Slice of A Short Life"
Blessings,
JMD
such a silly girl (Poetry) - 8/5/2008 8:17:42 AM
Beautiful image of a struggle to hold onto memories of someone loved. I like the idea of using music to hold onto that image. I sense loss here and hope that it is because of the same loss I see coming. We have a sixteen year old daughter and I still remember when she was a silly girl. But she's growing out of those earlier years and those days are becoming memories. I hope music will one day help me remember those silly days.
endgames (Poetry) - 8/5/2008 8:14:21 AM
Placing memoires into glass jars where they can dream on their own is a great line that anchors this poem.
faces like dancing angels in the winds (Poetry) - 5/24/2008 2:01:46 PM
A touch of rain on flesh, warm and soothing
You whisper her name
..poignant lines..
Vesna
faces like dancing angels in the winds (Poetry) - 5/18/2008 9:59:59 AM
Such a longinggggg peaceful poem, I believe she helps you to write! She is your inspiration and motivation and will never leave your spirit!
This poems reminds me of Death Wrapped In Sweetness
Write On!
Warm hugs and Peaceful Blessings, Warrior Purple Lady Ladyoxoooo
STay Positive!
cycles of ten (Poetry) - 5/11/2008 4:51:12 PM
30's, 40',50's ok. but when you reach 60's, oh I don't like it and not looking forward to 70's. They say old age is the glorious life orsomething like that, but tell me about it. Not having the time of my life in my 60's Ill tell you. This poem makes you think, liked the mentioning of a rose, and warmth of the sun in last verse though. Conforting.
faces like dancing angels in the winds (Poetry) - 5/8/2008 12:42:52 PM
Her sprit is always with you, and I have lost my hubby in Aug and still grieve but know he is up with the angels and looking over me. I have proof he is with me in soul and spirit as good things happen to me that did not when he was alive always. Angels surround us always too, and God's work is great and this is a great universe.
Apart (Poetry) - 4/11/2008 8:19:32 AM
um..er..been there done that..have come to no valid conclusion..however miracles DO happen even at a distance.. :)
Blessings,
Vesna :)
faces like dancing angels in the winds (Poetry) - 3/26/2008 7:12:28 PM
so Zen...wrapped in reflections, awareness...I felt this way waiting for my man at the train stations...longing, in the waiting moments, until he was back in my arms once again
So enjoyed!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
faces like dancing angels in the winds (Poetry) - 3/20/2008 11:19:05 AM
Been there done that..just in a different person!!
Deep longing in this write!!
Love Tinka
faces like dancing angels in the winds (Poetry) - 3/19/2008 11:13:03 AM
A wonderfully embrace and blending of the inner thoughts and the world outside the perimeters....
Be always safe,
Karen
faces like dancing angels in the winds (Poetry) - 3/18/2008 3:46:52 PM
.....resonant and fabled, like a modern faerie tale, awaitng its ending. .. . i love the continuity format. ..brings us right into your train of thought.....and all the palces oyu go and intangibles you feel, hope, see...write...
well done.
ness
faces like dancing angels in the winds (Poetry) - 3/18/2008 3:21:17 PM
Very nice,William, I can feel the movements as you walk and long for her to respond...
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
faces like dancing angels in the winds (Poetry) - 3/18/2008 12:44:17 PM
What a fantastic write. The last line grabs you like a vice. I read the poem three times and enjoyed it more each time. BRAVO poet. Well done. Well done indeed.
Marcia
endgames (Poetry) - 3/15/2008 5:03:23 PM
William, this is such a deeply moving poem..I have felt this way also, but lonely does not equate to alone. I am alone, but not lonely..It is all about healing and loving yourself.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Apart (Poetry) - 3/9/2008 7:22:37 AM
All I can say is: "LISTEN TO YOUR HEART" your heart KNOWS!
I was here and it was believable and intense and being friends gave it strength!
Going on 6 yrs. but we are together now! with 3 growing kids, on his side too- and he is a muscian, builds tube Amps, and his passion Computers and Harley, and I'm there sTrongly! :)
Believe William, it can BE!
I want you happy! and when you are ready in your life/heart - It will be!
As both will make it a reality!
If ready...
STay Positive!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace,Warrior Purple Lady Sheoxooo
Write On!Good therapy for growth!
endgames (Poetry) - 3/9/2008 7:18:21 AM
I know the William NOw!
Your Bio is interesting!
Sad lingering feeling poem, I enjoyed!
Please don't feel l o n e l y, is what I feel you reaching out to say/etc.
Sometimes... Alone is serenity within, to listen to your soul whisper...
Is my feeling! :)
STay Positive!
Memories will suffice!
and keep you inspired!
Warmest Blesssings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady Sheoxoo
STay Positive!
STay STrong!
Enjoy! Your day Will!
endgames (Poetry) - 2/28/2008 11:42:04 AM
Very perceptive insight......
Be always safe,
Karen
endgames (Poetry) - 2/28/2008 9:07:50 AM
Maybe that why women years ago used to make quilts from the remnants of ancestors past...Memories and warmth all in one!
Smiles to you...I really enjoyed this!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
endgames (Poetry) - 2/27/2008 10:32:10 AM
Insightful heartfelt offering!!
SO much more to read in this one!!
Love Tinka
the ripen fruit of dream (Poetry) - 2/7/2008 10:44:45 AM
To dream is "the means of all you crave" - I love this. My interpretation leads me to the notion that we can attract to our world all of which we dare dream, so long as those dreams come from a centered, genuine place. Very interesting write. Interesting how a writer writes with a meaning in mind, yet readers glean what they will!
jeu de mots sur turnstile (Poetry) - 1/26/2008 3:17:31 PM
L'ami remarquable de poème j'ai apprécié ma visite ici.
the ripen fruit of dream (Poetry) - 12/14/2007 6:26:47 AM
OMG- I Love THIS! Poem...
Sexy, Exhillerationg! Mind bending and more!
I want to STAY HERE! in this poem1
Reminds me, of my Come With Me and a few others, where I invite you in...
Now, I've got My spider on my brain! This is a keeper! I will simply treasure!
I think you inspired my muse you playful fool! :)
Warm hugs and Warmer Blessings, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Sheooxoxo Stay Positive!
Write On!
Of Dark Places, and Whips and Chains, Leather and Dark Corridors, YOU can do it William,... YOu can do anything!
jeu de mots sur turnstile (Poetry) - 12/14/2007 6:22:05 AM
I want to KNOW what this says, it looks precious!
Happy Holidays William! Common, take the time and re-write it to share with us all, or is a SECRET! LOL
Warm hugs and Warmer Blessings, Warrior Lady Sweet Sheooxoxo STay Positive!
It sounds sexy, am I close!??
Apart (Poetry) - 12/5/2007 6:22:48 AM
In order for love or friendships to exist, I think, that's where our senses, first must come into play... monitor to monitor, words can't do it alone.
A part ...no, it's a very little one, in cyberspace.
A very smart poem, indeed!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
jeu de mots sur turnstile (Poetry) - 12/5/2007 6:03:17 AM
Gosh, I wish I could understand this...What's it say? :)
I tried to pronounce, but I just can get over how pretty all the accent marks look! LOL!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
the ripen fruit of dream (Poetry) - 11/26/2007 9:56:38 AM
very sensual, in its own right
"you have only to sleep..."
Gosh, in here, I'd rather never wake!
Excellent!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
Apart (Poetry) - 11/22/2007 10:30:12 AM
This gives one pause for thought, William. Best wishes to you with love and peace,
Regis
shall we dance (Poetry) - 11/15/2007 2:17:53 PM
well done
Apart (Poetry) - 11/15/2007 7:46:49 AM
A very smart poem.
Apart (Poetry) - 11/15/2007 7:28:03 AM
Oh the cyber world of love, yes I know this all too well!!! First thought, no, you cannot believe the promises, because if they are doing this with you, then the likely hood is that they are doing it with many others. Just a rule of thought, not necessarily in your particular case, but just be careful out there..
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"
I am the tears of the last generation (Poetry) - 10/29/2007 11:30:02 AM
excellent portrayal of the emotional rollercoaster many took...
Thanks for sharing, William~
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
Blind men (Poetry) - 10/8/2007 10:41:53 PM
A wonderful piece that strikes at the heart of many. Very creatively written....
Be safe,
Karen
Blind men (Poetry) - 10/8/2007 8:53:08 AM
William,
I say bravo to this poem..I have been so involved with getting the word out, thank you for these wise words of advice and sending a reality check to all who read it..
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"
Blind men (Poetry) - 10/8/2007 8:41:41 AM
Amen to your pen!
Open your ears and see
Listen and you shall taste
The feelings, the Lord has in sight
and all the fragrances of heaven...inhale!
Such an inspiring write!
Loved it!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
shall we dance (Poetry) - 9/16/2007 9:15:34 AM
Glimmering words of dancing verse, enjoyed.
shall we dance (Poetry) - 9/16/2007 8:27:16 AM
Bill,
What a beautiful poem. Brought tears to my eyes..I believe that dancing is movement from the soul...Much peace, love, and light to you,
Amber "V" Moonstone
shall we dance (Poetry) - 8/12/2007 8:16:37 AM
This is stunningly poetic William~!
A lovely beauty/dance!
Warmed in Hugs, Peace, LOVE, Inner light and Wisdom!Warrior Purple Lady Sheeeoox
STay Positive!
STay SAFE!
Write On!
shall we dance (Poetry) - 8/9/2007 4:43:08 AM
Absolutely beautiful!
shall we dance (Poetry) - 8/8/2007 5:37:51 AM
A beautiful dance and yes...we shall!
The images were dangling, and glimmering, splashing and reflecting your tune that we all must learn to dance to!
Loved it!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
shall we dance (Poetry) - 8/6/2007 1:01:56 PM
Yes lets dance....and enjoy some kinda Poetic fun!!
Love Tinka
shall we dance (Poetry) - 8/6/2007 11:16:34 AM
o please do dance! this is a lightly brushed dream of memory and romance and love; time and space could add nothing better to your dripping lush words.
.nessa. ..
shall we dance (Poetry) - 8/6/2007 8:02:06 AM
An outstanding write Bill
The Good Book say " Everybody should dance"
enjoyed reading
Peace be with you
William
kate's poem (Poetry) - 8/3/2007 4:35:16 PM
A beautiful concert of words, tones, and images. Thank you, DL
let fall the heaven gate (Poetry) - 8/2/2007 12:49:57 PM
How cruel the fates that might have been
I hear ya! Boy do I hear ya!!!
Exceptional work..indeed I'd love to hear the lyrics blessed by an appropriate score..
Vesna :)
let fall the heaven gate (Poetry) - 7/31/2007 9:50:21 PM
I love this beautiful shining treasure Will~
GREAt feelings emit graciously from this song!
Warm hugs and love, Warrior Purple Lady Sheeeoox
STay Positive!
STay SAFE!
BE Happy!
Dwana (Poetry) - 7/27/2007 6:19:26 PM
This poem spoke to my heart. I wonder who your Dwana is. I will read more of your writings.
another...Dwana
let fall the heaven gate (Poetry) - 6/28/2007 12:13:02 PM
I enjoyed these lyrics. Your rhythm is strong enough that I almost heard it in my head, but I'm sure your music is different. Perhaps you'll add an mp3. :-)
Thank you, Bill for dropping by my story. It's always good to see a comment from you.
Nordette
let fall the heaven gate (Poetry) - 6/26/2007 7:30:17 PM
Very well done! So light and upbeat, enjoyed this much.
Be safe,
Karen
Montauk (Poetry) - 6/22/2007 10:47:36 AM
A JOURNEY Back in time, how sublime!
Love this dark write of life - once yours -
WArmly, WArrior Spirit Lady Sheeeoox
BE SAFE!
STay Positive~!
Amen!
who's there (Poetry) - 6/22/2007 10:45:39 AM
This is tender and sweet!
like your heart is to so many William~
Would this be the statistics? I see them myself, entering and leaving and not knowing who- but, were touched and that says alot~
Miss you!
STay SAFE!
BE INspired!
God Bless!
Amen!
kate's poem (Poetry) - 6/22/2007 10:39:41 AM
PURE refinement I feel here!
With every word you grace our hearts
and souls!
A mixed emotion but, a treasured gem!
Wonderful tribute to a sweet Kate!
WArmly, WArrior Spirit Lady Sheeeoox
BE SAFE!
STay POsitive!
God Bless!
Amen!
kate's poem (Poetry) - 6/18/2007 10:58:06 AM
bittersweet...in excellent taste! Well done!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
kate's poem (Poetry) - 6/17/2007 3:09:41 PM
A lovely offering, William. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you,
Regis
I loved you once (Poetry) - 6/17/2007 7:15:31 AM
I loved you once
but memories can't
keep love alive
when the flame burns out and the feelings die
I loved you once
I loved you once
..indeed feelings die..yet, I'd say that they just evolved into those that need no physical expression..so the love that once was still is--
Thank you for this insightful piece..I like your mind..
Vesna*
kate's poem (Poetry) - 6/6/2007 10:00:18 PM
Dreams of the future, so wonderful. To blossom and grow so amazing to see.....
Be safe,
Karen
kate's poem (Poetry) - 6/6/2007 11:54:57 AM
Fresh and delicate youth........sigh....thanks poet of the old sharing it :) !!
Love Tinka
who's there (Poetry) - 6/1/2007 9:04:02 PM
Interesting! You question, yet no answers are devulged.....
Be safe,
Karen
who's there (Poetry) - 6/1/2007 12:54:57 PM
Well expressed William!!
Love Tinka
who's there (Poetry) - 6/1/2007 10:20:26 AM
Hi William, This writing brings out a reality that some will not accept. Everything and nothing, at once. Thank you for sharing...
In Spirit,
Bear
Montauk (Poetry) - 5/22/2007 7:38:29 AM
Walking back in our minds eye...back to where our roots still thrive...we can always feel a connection, no matter where we flourish, flower, fruit...or even die...Montauk is a part of you~
Cool poem...
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
Montauk (Poetry) - 5/17/2007 7:43:23 AM
Enjoyed very much...Hugssssss
Montauk (Poetry) - 5/16/2007 10:41:49 PM
Alas Yoruk, I found thee. We must be on the same wave length? You think??? So sad, but I know the feeling. It's calling you back, isn't it???? She is in your blood, you know you must return........
Be safe,
Karen
Montauk (Poetry) - 5/16/2007 4:27:59 PM
Montauk is one of my favorite places ... i can empathize with your sadness ... you poem captures the remorse of leaving it ... it appears that for you, Montauk is literally the end ...
Montauk (Poetry) - 5/16/2007 12:18:23 PM
SOunds good!!
Love Tinka
Montauk (Poetry) - 5/16/2007 11:31:26 AM
THIS MAKES ME GLAD FOR YOU.
Pies (Poetry) - 5/3/2007 7:36:01 AM
Checking a few of your oldies, I love them too, the mind is different
at different levels!
Lovely memory!
Lovely poem!
Waht kind of pie is/was your favorite!
Did you see the movie "American pie" ??? :)
WArmly, WArrior Lady Sheeeoox
One last performance (Poetry) - 5/3/2007 7:33:17 AM
Ahhh, I'm thinking a Comedian! A Singer! a Poet reader/sharer!
I Loved the feelings you emit here Bill!
So, what exactly (perform) was in your thoughts!?
Alot of wonderful imagery here!
I loved it!
Warmly, WArrior Lady Sheeeoox
BE SAFE!
Stay POsitive!
sometimes someone remembers (Poetry) - 5/3/2007 7:31:12 AM
Wow! Intense! My heart stopped!
I've never been apart of it!
I feel for those who have!
YOu wrote with fury - I could feel!
WArmly, WArrior Lady Sheeeoox
sometimes someone remembers (Poetry) - 5/2/2007 10:03:08 PM
Rain is cleansing to mother earth. Thank you for this write.
Be safe,
Karen
sometimes someone remembers (Poetry) - 5/2/2007 7:45:17 PM
soothing to the furied soul
the rejuvenation after the storm
starting afresh once more
Excellent~
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
One last performance (Poetry) - 5/2/2007 10:37:42 AM
A bittersweet offering William!!
I could feel the nostalgia in this one!!
Love Tinka
One last performance (Poetry) - 5/1/2007 9:50:44 PM
A performer nearing the end of a very long journey. So bittersweet!
Be safe,
Karen
One last performance (Poetry) - 5/1/2007 12:13:16 PM
Great lines on the thoughts of one filled with the fear of returning to a task once enjoyed.
such a silly girl (Poetry) - 5/1/2007 10:14:32 AM
This is so touching William...we never know when we will be called home...so be as silly as you can while we have the chance...
Thanks for sharing your heart with this one...
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
One last performance (Poetry) - 5/1/2007 8:25:14 AM
Been here before...at 44 wondering if I could still carry through and birth #11! HA!
Yeah I was nervous and thinking...what everyone else might be thinking...and, if I still had it in me...if my baby would be well, etc...
I think alot of our comebacks are just mere pauses, because if you love something enough...you never really leave!
But now, I'll probably adopt! :)
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
Ice Storms2 (Poetry) - 4/29/2007 10:11:27 PM
Outside looking in, a refreshing perspective indeed. Look into your heart and soul for answers, God is waiting.......
Be safe,
Karen
Ice Storms2 (Poetry) - 4/29/2007 7:53:59 AM
Pretty cool! Whats it like to be a reflection of your former self?
Ice Storms2 (Poetry) - 4/29/2007 7:39:41 AM
Cold as Ice.....the words from a heart stept upon once to often!!
Dear Lord I know the feeling all too well!!
Love Tinka
Ice Storms2 (Poetry) - 4/29/2007 6:37:03 AM
YIKkKes! That's DEEP Bill~
and a defeating feeling!
I don't EVER want to believe!
And.. I hope you won't either!
YOu NEED to listen to some Uplifting Neil YOUNG!!! :)
Seriously, Do you know what he went through with his Family-
He's son had Autism and one son moret than the other :(
What a tough time all around
In his playing passion times!
Your poem speaks a deep provoking write and thought
of our minds~
Hang IN!
and STill Believe!
When we don't believe, we let HIM in... He takes over...
Sending you warm and Happy Energy today!
FEEl it, in warm purple golden rays smilind down on you!ETc.
WArmest Blessings! WArmly, WArrior Lady PURPLE Sheeeoox
sometimes (Poetry) - 4/28/2007 5:55:41 PM
Well crafted, Bill. Beautifully wrought and touching. ~~Nordette
sometimes (Poetry) - 4/28/2007 6:14:35 AM
This is Awesomely done and felt! Bill~
Don't knock it-- Poets Words from a man!
Is a God Send!
Ahhhh....
Your affection in a variety of ways, sounds utterly charming! :)
Loved this! Your honest heart and pen!
~ Your choice of words appealing ~
WArmly, WArrior Lady Sheeeeoox
sometimes (Poetry) - 4/27/2007 7:27:20 PM
You have expressed your feeling beautifully in this sad piece. Sometimes it's the memory that gives you the strength to move on.
Karen
sometimes (Poetry) - 4/27/2007 9:59:45 AM
Words of wisdom spoken!!
Thanks for sharing...sometimes we need to see what's missing through the eyes of another!!
Love Tinka
sometimes (Poetry) - 4/26/2007 10:21:02 PM
You sound so very sad, disappointed with life. Sometimes we need to move on to greener pastures. Enjouyed the write!
Be safe,
Karen
Dwana (Poetry) - 4/23/2007 10:32:26 PM
An interesting, yet sad write. So meloncholy as if you could have done more. Life is what it is. Enjoyed.
Be safe,
Karen
Dwana (Poetry) - 4/23/2007 3:33:22 PM
Interesting and well written... "dark dreamer...nightmares and roses...heal well and forget." Thought provoking write.
~Sharon
Dwana (Poetry) - 4/23/2007 2:18:42 PM
Interesting write!!
Love Tinka
for my Uncle Bill (Poetry) - 4/22/2007 8:20:55 AM
Time passes way too quickly and life has a way of smacking you when you realize how much you miss in the process.
I enjoyed this very much, William.
Love, Taylor
ole' world (Poetry) - 4/21/2007 8:35:04 PM
Looking back pondering, yet life marches on relentlessly. Good write.
Be safe,
Karen
ole' world (Poetry) - 4/21/2007 1:05:24 PM
Wonderful thought provoking write......like mother like ocean...eb and Flow..the one would be empty without the other there!!
Love Tinka
for my Uncle Bill (Poetry) - 4/21/2007 12:33:31 PM
Funny how time can rob you!!
Great offering William!!
Love Tinka
Freddie Mercury (Poetry) - 4/20/2007 8:49:56 PM
He was good, I sort of like Queen. He lives on in his music, expecially "We are the champions" which is played at every winning Yankees game. Good write.
Be safe,
Karen
Freddie Mercury (Poetry) - 4/20/2007 5:31:09 PM
Ahh
he knew, he knew........
Your words bring the image from the screen to the eye ........
excellent image
an opera of sight for the heart
pax A
Freddie Mercury (Poetry) - 4/20/2007 12:03:07 PM
Oh I can remember his song very well.....had a crush on him until I found out he was gay......and shattered my dream......lol!!
No jokes...I thought he was a very sexy hunk!!
Love Tinka
Nicole Richards dreams (Poetry) - 4/20/2007 11:54:38 AM
Thought provoking write!!
Love Tinka
The shores of Long Beach (Poetry) - 4/19/2007 9:43:13 PM
William, a very romantic write this is. Now the shores of Long Beach, is that Long Beach California, Long Beach Long Island New York, or Long Beach somewhere else, just curious???
Be safe,
Karen
The shores of Long Beach (Poetry) - 4/19/2007 5:15:59 PM
once we lose what's dear to us the oceans lose their magnificence ...
deeply moving poem ...
The shores of Long Beach (Poetry) - 4/19/2007 11:33:47 AM
Love the poem. A lot of feeling went into it and it touches the senses. Is Long Beach in reference to Long Beach, California? I grew up there and am curious.
I have no poems (Poetry) - 4/19/2007 10:43:05 AM
Hi Bill~
Ahhhh... Your muse is resting and creating! for the Biggie!
Those trains sure to run rampant! Especially in the night1
Great deep poem inspite of your mischief muse!
Warmly,
The shores of Long Beach (Poetry) - 4/19/2007 9:06:16 AM
Enjoyed your pictuure of love's forever.
such a silly girl (Poetry) - 4/19/2007 8:04:45 AM
But... A Silly Beautiful heartfelt Poem!
That brings out memories to savor!
The flow was unending and sweet!
Warmly, Warrior PURPLE Lady Sheeeoox
The shores of Long Beach (Poetry) - 4/19/2007 8:02:19 AM
Love this! Love this! Love this!!!!!
I totally loved this!
A gem to savor!
William - you capture LOVE (and it's infinite power) and it's deepest questions so elequently!
Good Luck and ALWAYS believe!
WArmly, Warrior PURPLE Lady Sheeeoox
Thanks! for your sweet pure heartfelt words on my poem!
Visit anytime, I enjoy your inspirational mind!
The shores of Long Beach (Poetry) - 4/19/2007 7:48:50 AM
Very nice write, I enjoyed reading so much.
Thanks,
Dan
The shores of Long Beach (Poetry) - 4/19/2007 7:00:17 AM
Such a real and beautiful poem, it touched my heart.
a pellucid pond (Poetry) - 4/16/2007 2:31:04 AM
PURPLISH Pallor Pushing past...'
Great thoughts throughout!
I love your "P" Passionate writing!
Glad I'm not the only one who thinks this way...
I use an ing, in my poem all the way down-
I think it's like #16 or so down, if you have time for reading my dear new friend~
I like your heart- I started TRACKING/Following your ever move LOL
TODAY!
BE SAFE!
with the severe Winds/etc...
WArmly, Lady Sheeeoox
forever dawn (Poetry) - 4/16/2007 2:27:27 AM
I feel a sense of Melchololy here!
Your imagery stands out perfectly! William P
WArmly, WArrior Lady Sheeeoox
cycles of ten (Poetry) - 4/16/2007 2:25:03 AM
Cycles, I think of em' never thought of writing them!
GReat offering!
Cycles~! KEEP Growing and Knowing! and REMEMBERING!!!
I like your Bio page and Congrat.s on your many intriguing books!
WArmly, WArrior PURPLE Lady Sheeeoox
a poem for a rainy day (Poetry) - 4/16/2007 2:21:21 AM
And... YOu did and I enjoyed it!
I love the feeling you invoked here!
BE SAFE!
STay Warm!
WArmly, Warrior PURPLE Lady Sheeeoox
I've never been here - May stay awhile and browsee! YOu won't mind
I hope you come to visit my writings sometime~
Something may gravitate to you, my funny, erotic, love and Spiritual poems, could be what you heart could need.
BE SAFE!
cycles of ten (Poetry) - 3/29/2007 10:11:15 PM
Interesting way with words, cycle of life. Beginning, yet never ending, ending yet never really beginning. Beautiful!
Be safe,
Karen
cycles of ten (Poetry) - 3/29/2007 9:00:06 AM
A new beginning!!
Hopefully it would be a happy one!!
Love Tinka
cycles of ten (Poetry) - 3/29/2007 8:36:49 AM
very interesting piece of work! enjoyed!
forever dawn (Poetry) - 3/28/2007 6:44:55 AM
This was well penned.....in some way brought the song "Beautiful Dawn" to mind...playing in my head!!
Love Tinka
a pellucid pond (Poetry) - 2/14/2007 9:43:00 PM
an intriguing exercise in alliteration ...
a pellucid pond (Poetry) - 2/14/2007 10:39:33 AM
Perfect poetry Pal!!
Happy V-Day my friend!!
Love Tinka
Perdition's child (Poetry) - 2/14/2007 10:33:10 AM
Touching piece!!
Love Tinka
a pellucid pond (Poetry) - 2/13/2007 9:28:09 AM
Pellucidly Powerful!
such a silly girl (Poetry) - 1/17/2007 3:26:32 PM
Sad, to go so young..
Thanks for sharing William..
such a silly girl (Poetry) - 1/15/2007 1:55:13 PM
There's a lot of feeling and touching messages for every "silly girl" in this thought provoking prose. Thanks for sharing My best, Gloria
crickets (Poetry) - 1/3/2007 7:37:24 PM
ocean of heaven....
nice imagery. It leaves a peaceful feeling. Like water.
such a silly girl (Poetry) - 1/2/2007 12:50:06 PM
Heartfelt and compelling, William. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace to you,
Regis
crickets (Poetry) - 11/2/2006 4:49:45 PM
Such a three dimensional poem........
I felt beside you
He talks to angels (Poetry) - 10/23/2006 10:05:36 AM
I think there is a new age term for kids like this........
I think the term is "Crystal Children"
they are blessed, in thier "own" way and see things overs do not
thats one way of looking at it..........
you never know tho.........
maybe not all of us listen
pax A
such a silly girl (Poetry) - 7/24/2006 12:12:57 AM
Wish I had memories like this..alas my youth was a flat line..mmmm( strict parents)
This touched me deeply..
I saved this one..thankyou William!
Vesna:)
such a silly girl (Poetry) - 7/7/2006 8:18:18 AM
I've been that silly girl. Lovely poem, Bill. Very touching and bittersweet. ~~Nordette
such a silly girl (Poetry) - 7/5/2006 7:59:07 PM
This poem tells me to appreciate the present, we never know how long it is ours..........:(
ty for this reminder
pax A
such a silly girl (Poetry) - 7/1/2006 9:52:10 AM
Those are the precious memories that make us who we are!!
Love Tinka
such a silly girl (Poetry) - 7/1/2006 7:21:51 AM
...you make me think of all the little things that trigger memories so sweet, just when you thought you had them tucked into the safest place. How nice to remember and bring them out again when there is need.
Taylor~
such a silly girl (Poetry) - 7/1/2006 7:14:10 AM
what a lovely memory~
Susan
such a silly girl (Poetry) - 7/1/2006 7:10:03 AM
Your memories continue to bloom as a fresh flower. Beautiful verse.
Susan
the death thirst (Poetry) - 6/28/2006 8:59:50 AM
so you can do this as well..
well done Bill..well done!
Vesna
the death thirst (Poetry) - 6/27/2006 10:09:39 AM
Ahhhh, yes, you are a horror writer aren't you? :-) ~~Nordette
the death thirst (Poetry) - 6/27/2006 8:55:34 AM
aww the widow dracula strikes again....good poem
the death thirst (Poetry) - 6/27/2006 4:56:28 AM
Oh my goodness....this poem has alot in it....I can seven see myself in this one in some way!!
Excellent work!!
Love Tinka
her latest opus (Poetry) - 6/24/2006 1:33:15 AM
My heart ceased beating for a nanosecond whilst reading this..gasping still..
Exceptional write..
I saved this one..
Vesna:)
her latest opus (Poetry) - 6/21/2006 6:14:15 PM
I see so many levels in this and so much symbolism, from beginning to end......she and the cat had alot in common, huh
brilliant
pax A
her latest opus (Poetry) - 6/21/2006 1:18:44 PM
Powerful sentiments..
Xxx dove
seven words (Poetry) - 6/21/2006 12:24:57 PM
Well done!!
Love Tinka
her latest opus (Poetry) - 6/21/2006 9:45:44 AM
Sort of reminds me of Steely Dan's "Black Cow"
Like a gangster
On the run
You will stagger homeward
To your precious one
I'm the one
Who must make everything right
Talk it out till daylight
I don't care anymore
Why you run around
Break away
Just when it
Seems so clear
That it's
Over now
Drink your big black cow
And get out of here
Full lyrics and song...
I could really feel this one, Elliott. I always wonder about men who stand by women who are clearly in love with someone else, possibly because I’ve never been romantically involved with one who’d do this. And based on what I’ve read about the average man’s level of emotional commitment, it’s unusual to find one who will hold on to a lover despite her lack of devotion. The male’s usually the one who turns off the emotional faucet more easily, or so I’ve read. On some level it’s very romantic, the idea of the male who’ll wait for you to realize the error of your ways and understands you really need him in your life even if you don’t realize the same. But I know from being on the receiving end of unrequited love that it’s very painful to be the one unloved or not loved the same way. Poignant poetry. ~~Nordette
her latest opus (Poetry) - 6/21/2006 8:31:32 AM
The sheer pain of the memory, becomes an old friend...and a new dirge.
Thank God, you have the gift of writing, William!
prayers, rhonda
her latest opus (Poetry) - 6/21/2006 8:08:14 AM
wow, this is excellent, i felt every line
Sometime Someone Remembers (Poetry) - 6/20/2006 3:43:02 AM
how very true!!!!!!!!!
never thought of it that way
my daughter says the wind is the voice of god
:)
no wonder the green bows to the rain
pax A
Sometime Someone Remembers (Poetry) - 6/17/2006 3:39:16 AM
One very fine offering...thanks for sharing!!
Love Tinka
Sometime Someone Remembers (Poetry) - 6/16/2006 4:32:41 AM
And perhaps His voice is the thunder
But He only listens following the silence...
God waiting for us to echo back to him in like. That's what I got from this passage. What a moving piece and very well done.
Be well.
For Diane (Poetry) - 6/15/2006 5:51:16 PM
William, my heart breaks for the void left by the loss of your beloved. There is One, who sticks closer than a brother, who never leaves, and who even walks with us,every step of the way, as He leads us out of the void and back into the light! God bless you, dear man, God bless you...with healing love and comfort. ~ rhonda
Sometime Someone Remembers (Poetry) - 6/15/2006 5:13:59 PM
ITS ALWAYS A PLEAUSRE TO READ SUCH FINE AND ARTISTIC WORK.
a postcard from oblivion (Poetry) - 6/14/2006 5:05:23 AM
powerful might seem a strong word, but it describes this work for me. It leaves me wanting to know more...
Susan
I have no poems (Poetry) - 6/10/2006 7:38:04 AM
Waiting for that muse?
Give her your black roses
I am sure their scent is magic
This poem is about being uninspired, or shut off
yet I found it inspiring
be well
pax
A
I have no poems (Poetry) - 6/9/2006 7:06:27 PM
Hi, Bill. Like Richard, I am moved by this poem. Thank you for posting it. Hey, you show me your scars, I'll show you mine. LOL. ~~Nordette
I have no poems (Poetry) - 6/9/2006 8:38:52 AM
William . . .
I was moved by this piece.
There is a heartcry inside your words that is undeniable and I, too, agree that the words will come like trains in the night, unstoppable and full of power, and they will move upon the hearts and minds of those willing to be moved.
Kudos
Richard
a poem for a rainy day (Poetry) - 6/6/2006 8:39:06 PM
I love the ramble of this piece, how it surfs introspection then culminates into a smile. ~~Nordette
a poem for a rainy day (Poetry) - 6/4/2006 7:09:49 PM
This is a wonderful piece. It's been raining a lot here in WVa, so this poem is perfect for me right now.
And I also love the Diner line, as I also love Diners.
a poem for a rainy day (Poetry) - 6/4/2006 12:21:53 PM
"Maybe I need a Diner in my life and a highway to leave it near."
I love that line.
A thought provoking and satisfying read.
Kneeling by the angels (Poetry) - 5/31/2006 8:28:33 AM
It certainly sounds like lyrics. :-) Strikes me as light struggling not to be overcome by the dark. I like the flow and the phrase "kneeling by the angels." ~~Nordette
tomorrow's forgotten headline (Poetry) - 5/31/2006 8:26:18 AM
A stark vision of disillusionment, fear, and soul collapse. ~~Nordette Adams
tomorrow's forgotten headline (Poetry) - 5/28/2006 6:46:45 AM
Who said what Doctors see and deal with on a daily basis don't take a toll? Maybe he knew just how bad life really does stink at times and decided that he didn't want his children having to go through it?
Ofcourse we know that really wasn't his decision to make...but now he stands before His only true Judge.
May God have mercy on them all three.
Lisa
Forever's a lie (Poetry) - 5/24/2006 5:09:12 PM
You portray loss with such touching beauty. And it was HER forever.
WordFaery
For Diane (Poetry) - 5/24/2006 1:13:58 PM
i almost didn't read this piece - almost couldn't. i'm glad i did. sometimes silence speaks louder than words. that's what this deserves: the highest order of silence.
looking back (Poetry) - 5/24/2006 1:10:14 PM
you write with a voice that knows more than many, and questions beyond what can be answered. i appreciate this so much. thank you.
Forever's a lie (Poetry) - 5/24/2006 1:07:00 PM
it was HER forever.
i'm touched in so many ways by this piece, thank you.
Forever's a lie (Poetry) - 5/24/2006 10:05:05 AM
Physical forever is a lie . . . I agree!
Spiritual forever is coming!
"So many empty beaches in my life"
So true for all of us!
I am sorry for your loss.
Your poem was filled with the melancholy that has, and will, affect the human condition until He that defeated death in power and majesty returns.
Richard
Forever's a lie (Poetry) - 5/24/2006 9:48:52 AM
Death makes us realize that we only have now, but the love is forever in our hearts.
Forever's a lie (Poetry) - 5/24/2006 8:23:06 AM
Even with the best of new life before me, divorce haunts me.
I meant forever, it just seemed life did not let that be.
I wish I wouldn't wonder why, but that is life...wondering why.
How good can the journey be when it is costing so much?
Thank God for what good there has been.
I just often wish one of us had died, instead of the love.
Then I would be in your shoes. (Or dead.)
I hope forever finds us.
John
last night (Poetry) - 5/23/2006 5:19:45 PM
You had me from line one on through. A most compelling penning, Bill.
For Diane (Poetry) - 3/12/2006 7:46:25 AM
poignant read
