I Feel a Clearing of the Skies (Poetry) - 6/21/2013 6:30:55 PM
I could imagine in my mind, the display of the word play in your poem. Awesome write.
I Feel a Clearing of the Skies (Poetry) - 6/9/2013 7:52:02 AM
Beautiful imagery and wonderful words. Although the ending is much better, reminds me a bit of my poem, Slow Moving Front.
Ron