The Wind (Poetry) - 7/8/2007 8:54:26 PM
very very nice...love the flow of this piece. It is bittersweet, yet full of glimmers of hope...very vivid and softly sensual imagery. All in all this is a splendid pice of work.
The Wind (Poetry) - 7/6/2007 2:29:28 PM
This is a very vibrant poem. It's if a spirit of peace has passed by you. As you walk through a timeless fog bank on a highland hill, you emerge to the sounds of waves crashing on the distant shores. Seagulls dance across white foamy waves, revealing that life is indeed precious.
The Wind (Poetry) - 7/6/2007 1:03:34 PM
I love this, it has a sping or autumn feel..
You bio is most cheery...
Beautiful (Poetry) - 7/3/2007 11:01:33 PM
So lovely and heartfelt! Two souls becoming one.....
Be safe,
Karen
Beautiful (Poetry) - 7/3/2007 1:18:33 PM
Yes; I like this short piece. keep writing. Well done
