What Gnaws on My Spine (Poetry) - 8/6/2007 8:28:23 AM
OUCH! This one made me hurt! Very well done, though...
Sick (Poetry) - 8/5/2007 6:32:37 AM
What a twisted, insane mind you must have. I love it. It's like you're the love child of Shel Silverstein and Edgar Allen Poe.
Amazing stuff.
Leo
Ouija (Poetry) - 8/5/2007 6:28:55 AM
Greatness! Truly original to put something like this in rhyme. Gripping story.
Leo
What Gnaws on My Spine (Poetry) - 8/5/2007 6:23:24 AM
Chris, I don't know whether to laugh or cry. On the surface, this is a jovial little piece. As a matter of fact, I laughed all the way through it. However, there is a slight undertone that smells of tragedy. I love the dichotomy of that.
Well done.
Leo
