Wisdom and Knowledge (Poetry) - 8/31/2008 4:45:43 PM
I don't know Bob Marley, but I found this a fascinating writing.
It would help if you used more punctuation, periods at the end of sentences, especially.
As for the content, it is a stark indictment of the world of today in general.
Connie
Enter-net (Poetry) - 8/31/2008 4:40:34 PM
Not wrapped too tight. Great sense of humor and word play
Ron
Wisdom and Knowledge (Poetry) - 8/31/2008 4:33:35 PM
nice - i think Bob Marley would have liked this. -- Jeff
Wisdom and Knowledge (Poetry) - 8/31/2008 4:32:18 PM
Impressive way with words.
Ron
Enter-net (Poetry) - 1/28/2008 9:45:49 AM
I like this poem. If I were the writer, I'd edit and clean up run-on sentences and hone areas. The thought is wonderful.
C.
