Running (Poetry) - 5/12/2012 12:39:14 PM
Maybe that's why I never won any races. I always felt a lot better. You certainly are describing the agony of a runner who runs full out.
Ron
Fall (Poetry) - 5/5/2012 9:17:04 AM
You have evoked some interesting images and cast some intriguing phrases like, “a half paced over walked mumble. Reads like a rap song.
Ron