Alexandria (Short Story) - 6/26/2009 9:57:48 PM
This has to be the best story I have ever read. It is well thought out and well written. I shall add you as one of my favorite authors.
Very good writing, David!
Alexandria (Short Story) - 3/17/2006 2:04:41 PM
This was a wonderfully story, well written, engaging and full of emotion. The style and feel, reminds me of one my favorite books "Great Expectations".. Very good job, this one of the best stories I've read at the den to date.. Truly great writing David, keep it up!!
A Walk In The Park (Short Story) - 7/9/2005 10:57:42 AM
David, you write one of the best erotic stories ever!! Such passion and romance ... oooh!! Okay, time for that much needed cold shower and a glass of warm milk now!
God bless,
Sandie.
Alexandria (Short Story) - 10/10/2004 5:49:42 PM
Oh wow, that is definitely a wonderful, long, engaging read! I was shocked by the ending...how very hurtful... I love the meaning in the story...you did a great job!
Alexandria (Short Story) - 10/10/2004 1:48:33 PM
fantabulous!!!! Your characters are teriffic! I was definitely weepy and mad at the end.
A Walk In The Park (Short Story) - 7/19/2004 7:16:53 PM
I liked this story. I also liked the way Sam set up that joke on David.
Thanks for sharing.
Evelyn.
A Walk In The Park (Short Story) - 7/21/2003 8:34:34 AM
I agree with you, David. Erotica is best in bed with talented storytelling. This is great.
A Walk In The Park (Short Story) - 7/17/2003 5:07:59 AM
David you are masterful at the erotica genre, great story and I like romantic erotica, this is so well penned.
A Walk In The Park (Short Story) - 7/16/2003 3:04:07 PM
A very romantic passionte write!
A Walk In The Park (Short Story) - 7/16/2003 1:52:22 PM
Well David this took my breath away.....cold shower time......maybe tooo late...lol!!
Enjoyed reading this.....a real Gem!!
Love
Tinka
Writing Erotica (Article) - 8/23/2003 6:29:07 AM
I am a firm believer that Men have always wanted and needed the romance and feelings that women have. I feel that if they come across as emotional or passionate in front of a male, they feel unmanly. I think any reason to try writing erotica is a way to get your passion out. I know it certainly helps at our house. I am very emotional and passionate where my husband is as long as no one else is around. I think you hit it on the head so to speak when you wrote this artickle. Great work.
Romantic Love – An Alternative View (Article) - 5/20/2003 10:52:15 AM
I come from a Christian viewpoint, but I think you stated your case well. I also think a lot of religious people miss the point of love.
Romantic Love – An Alternative View (Article) - 5/20/2003 8:52:31 AM
Well said. You don't have to be at all religious to be romantic or in love. Reading your poems is certainly proof of that! The ability to put those feelings into words is a wonderful gift.
Teenage Pride (Poetry) - 2/26/2022 12:27:19 PM
It is sad, now that we no longer need guns to hunt for food, that we seem to buy guns for our own protection that often fall into younger hands in the house, by accident or design.
The teenage years and testosterone often bring out irrational violence as young men try to learn how to be men. In the case of your poem, that scenario is being played out more and more across the great country of the United States. Boys will be boys. Rash action may lead to a life of regret or crime.
Your poem hits us hard emotionally, but harder for those involved.
Ron
Teenage Pride (Poetry) - 2/25/2022 5:37:30 AM
So sad, the turf wars, whether gang or political. Well penned, David.
Loss (Poetry) - 9/11/2021 10:55:20 AM
From the sound of it, the way you eloquently wrote, this poor child came into the world with great pain that wouldn't go away. And it looks like the only way that the pain went away was death. So hard to take, but the alternative may have been worse.
Ron
Remember Today (Poetry) - 6/12/2020 12:08:08 AM
Amen David. This is a poem that I will especially treasure and reflect upon. Well written and a deep calling unto deep, gem.
D.Clure
For Those (Poetry) - 11/11/2011 5:18:06 AM
Yes, David, they deserve remembrance, and so much MORE!
Peace,
Carolyn
Remember Today (Poetry) - 11/11/2011 5:15:59 AM
sage words herein, david.
peace,
carolyn
Remember Today (Poetry) - 11/11/2011 12:26:22 AM
Amen, David; we must never forget.
John
For Those (Poetry) - 11/2/2011 3:55:06 PM
to greatest go the least
they deserve much more
their glory won't decrease
as they reach that far off shore
-nice little tribute David
For Those (Poetry) - 11/1/2011 11:13:43 AM
WOnderful tribute David!!
Good to read you again after a very long time....welcome back!!
Love Tinka
A Simple Kiss (Poetry) - 2/27/2011 8:40:56 AM
Very beautiful but is a kiss ever simple? A joy to read
A Simple Kiss (Poetry) - 2/22/2011 1:25:57 PM
A snap shot of a nice moment in time for.
A Simple Kiss (Poetry) - 2/22/2011 9:20:26 AM
There is wonderful energy in this!
Christine
A Simple Kiss (Poetry) - 2/22/2011 9:19:37 AM
David, there's nothing like the power of a kiss.
As you prove in your carefully crafted lines.
-gene.
A Simple Kiss (Poetry) - 2/22/2011 8:12:38 AM
Sighhhh thats all it takes sweet man...lovely just lovely..sighhh...keep smiling...Hugsss.. your heart sighss within these lines
First Kiss (Poetry) - 3/15/2010 6:36:19 AM
Beautifully passionate, gorgeous poetry.
First Kiss (Poetry) - 3/11/2010 7:15:45 PM
You brought me on an ecstatic ride of pleasures..Nicely done David!
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
First Kiss (Poetry) - 3/11/2010 7:29:24 AM
Wow, very well done.
I can so relate "As this woman owns me body and soul"- but for me- it took about 4 or 5 before it became like this.
As long as I got there...and this poem so well describes...being there.
John
Lost Childhood (Poetry) - 3/9/2010 3:50:58 AM
Very well written, David.
Aggpup's Memory (Poetry) - 2/27/2010 11:10:19 AM
David,
This pierced my heart. Having losing my beloved Jack last year, and Bob the year before, I feel your pain. They were 16, and people say that's a long time for a cat to live, it doesn't make the pain lessen. I am so sorry for your loss.
Mary
Heaven is a lie (Poetry) - 10/11/2009 11:16:49 PM
the dismissive non-critical mindsets here only serve to aver the brainwashing effects of religion. Heaven can only be heaven when there's an option to decline and come back.
Fatherhood (Poetry) - 9/13/2007 7:20:30 PM
Very cute this one. I remember being young. My Grandmother once gave me some money. Lol, "she said, you can't take it with you."
My bet is those teenager's would rather spend it now.
The Kiss (Poetry) - 6/27/2007 9:28:21 AM
I really like this. It written very well with alot of feeling.
Fatherhood (Poetry) - 5/27/2007 8:22:11 AM
bless you know it far too well
20, 18, 16,15,14,13
four oldest are males
two youngest females
Fatherhood (Poetry) - 5/23/2007 9:32:35 PM
Okay, have me laughing......Yes, that is exactly what happens.....Cute!
Be safe,
Karen
Fatherhood (Poetry) - 5/23/2007 6:01:46 PM
real cool mayne! and very true
Fatherhood (Poetry) - 5/23/2007 1:15:15 PM
hahahahahaha...you not alone in this one!!
Love Tinka
Heaven is a lie (Poetry) - 5/16/2007 7:53:08 AM
To each its own. While your poem was well written, I thought that it was a bunch of nonsense. So all I can say to you is God Bless, and get a little faith, sweetie. Well all need it.
Ladies Apply (Poetry) - 1/24/2007 11:10:54 AM
nice
wishing you the best
lots of ladies here at AD
take care
Age - Epigram (Poetry) - 12/14/2006 10:23:17 AM
Bullseye...this is very good!!
Love Tinka
Age - Epigram (Poetry) - 12/14/2006 7:53:11 AM
The highest compliment you can pay to someone's wit is, I wish I had thought of that...well...I wish I had thougt of that. Clever.
Rusty
The Oldest Profession (Poetry) - 12/11/2006 10:41:37 AM
Oh this is scary...David!!
Thanks for sharing!!
Happy Holidays to you!!
Love Tinka
First Date (Poetry) - 12/8/2006 10:00:30 AM
Dang...I told you you picked the wrong sister....Hugs!!
Warm smiles!!
Love Tinka
First Date (Poetry) - 12/8/2006 7:50:55 AM
Ouch! Been there done that.
Just act as though nothings wrong
and hold your head high.
Well Done
Michael
Royal Command (Poetry) - 11/3/2006 5:49:42 AM
Beautiful tribute to your grandchild...............
Royal Command (Poetry) - 11/3/2006 3:20:36 AM
Awwwwwwwww .... this is priceless....thanks for sharing Grandpa!!
Love Tinka
PC Scream (Poetry) - 8/17/2006 12:03:42 PM
Oh yes been there done that for two days now!!
Love Tinka
PC Scream (Poetry) - 8/17/2006 6:46:31 AM
great poem Mr.knight I liked it. Jennifer peacexxx
Heaven is a lie (Poetry) - 8/14/2006 2:04:50 PM
Nope Life without the "F" is a lie!!
Whatever!!
Each one for his own beliefs..and friends does not really care to share EVERYTHING anyways...!!
So I will say......k e e p the f a i t h okay!!
Love TINKA
Heaven is a lie (Poetry) - 8/14/2006 11:03:28 AM
“Faith is in your head so leave it there
And please refrain from trying to share”
This is what is so wonderful about free will and free speech Sir. It allows not only those who believe a certain way to share their thoughts and expressions as does those who believe counter opposite as well. While I do not promote the pushing of ones thoughts or beliefs on others, I still feel that it lies within the realms of freedom to be able to express. I appreciate your candor, but beg you to realize also that the same right you have to put down…i.e. religion, others bear that same right to lift it up. If I do not like something, I simply choose not to read it, again, my freedom to choose…. Take care…
Allen
Heaven is a lie (Poetry) - 8/14/2006 7:24:54 AM
We all will know when we depart of this earth..I think if I did not believe in it I would have died a long time ago of a broken soul..My prayers are with you for peace and wisdom...
Peace & Love, Dove
Heaven is a lie (Poetry) - 8/14/2006 6:48:16 AM
Just because the messenger is corrupt, doesn't mean the message is bad as well. What I object to is "dumping on God" when things are rough. The old adage "God helps those who help themselves" is more my line of thinking. If He was to do it for us, the Old Boy be walking in our tennis shoes. You put the disatisfaction most feel about organized religion and their self-righteous bible thumping in perspective. I agree to with all the "sharing", especially when you see the mess inside some of these folks.
Good work...and you made it rhyme yet! ROFL
Elizabeth
Questions And Answers? (Poetry) - 7/18/2006 10:12:22 AM
Great offering David!!
Love Tinka
Muses (Poetry) - 6/12/2006 3:17:27 PM
This ontological and social questions in "Muses" stimulate awareness and develop our thinking capacity. It is a mirror of our minds and a poetic-philosophic message to be studied by this an many generations to come.
Thank You, Poet for sharing "Muses".
Healthy Long Creative Life through a Blissful Living.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Questions And Answers? (Poetry) - 6/12/2006 3:02:09 PM
Wise "Questions And Answers?" in this magnificent poetic accomplishment, make this a scented flower.
It was pleasant privilege to read "Questions And Answers?".
Thank You, Poet for sharing Your wisdom through Your poetic art.
Gratefully,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
I Hate You (Poetry) - 6/5/2006 12:30:26 PM
I really enjoyed reading this. I hate, hate period. Hate is ugly and vicious. Thanks for sharing this fantastic write.
Muses (Poetry) - 5/31/2006 3:13:52 PM
Strong questions and yet they come with no answers...We arrange our lives so that we don't have to think...then we drink and/or take drugs to hide and numb our pain...fools and dreamers are we.
Take care,
Sherry
Muses (Poetry) - 5/31/2006 2:44:15 PM
Thanks for sharing!!
Love Tinka
Muses (Poetry) - 5/31/2006 7:07:41 AM
interesting points
A Man I Know (Poetry) - 4/27/2006 12:21:56 PM
This is really well-written.
A Man I Know (Poetry) - 4/27/2006 11:22:56 AM
He’ll talk non-stop of his silver motorbike???
I guess I can go with that...lol!!
Vroooooooom!!
Not a bad bio mate!!
Love Tinka
A Man I Know (Poetry) - 4/27/2006 8:10:39 AM
he sounds delightful...wonderful self portrait
Rhetoric (Poetry) - 4/20/2006 11:40:05 AM
Powerful meassge...thanks for sharing!!
Love Tinka
Rhetoric (Poetry) - 4/20/2006 7:33:39 AM
if only...good rant though david, maybe one person will change because of your words and it would be worthwhile
Animal Farm (Poetry) - 3/2/2006 5:35:05 PM
I like any scenario where it is the animals who are in charge. Sometimes I wonder how humans got to be boss.
A New Love (Poetry) - 1/30/2006 9:14:10 AM
Can I take her for a spin???
Yip got a licence to drive that baby!!
Love Tinka
Merry Christmas (Poetry) - 1/7/2006 1:02:15 PM
Hope you had a great one, David!
Happy new year and God bless,
Sandie.
Merry Christmas (Poetry) - 12/28/2005 4:29:16 PM
This is a snappy little Christmas greeting.
Merry Christmas (Poetry) - 12/25/2005 2:04:31 PM
The nicest card I've seen lately.
Ron
Merry Christmas (Poetry) - 12/25/2005 8:25:35 AM
Merry Christmas David!!
ANd hey no wrestling in the hay today okay!!
Lol!!
Have a wonderful day anyways!!
Love Tinka
Merry Christmas (Poetry) - 12/25/2005 5:51:38 AM
A nice little poem!
Merry Christmas to you too David!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Special Night (Poetry) - 12/22/2005 3:16:59 PM
Christmas through the eyes of a child is the true miracle.
Special Night (Poetry) - 12/21/2005 12:52:42 PM
She's brave alright - at hardly four, sleeping alone and I hear creaking stairs - I'd run like a scared chicken! Lol. Wouldn't even wait to see the sack of presents ... lol ...
Beautiful Christmas write, David.
God bless,
Sandie.
Special Night (Poetry) - 12/21/2005 9:31:59 AM
Wonderful though a little haunting at times Christmas Tale!!
Love Tinka
A Winter's Day (Poetry) - 12/11/2005 3:25:25 AM
Brrrr ....
I Hate You (Poetry) - 12/11/2005 3:11:16 AM
Reading this, the reasons behind such hatred sound so childish, but yet they are there. Well written, powerful write, David!
God bless,
Sandie.
Words (Poetry) - 12/11/2005 3:01:46 AM
Aaw, what a beautiful write1 Love what Tinka wrote too! Beautiful and sweets!
God bless, David!
Sandie.
A Winter's Day (Poetry) - 12/1/2005 10:40:08 AM
Old cold and you got the bike blues.....lol!!
Geez wish I still had mine...but son made a good job sending it to the scrapyard!! Somer is here and all I can do now is sit and write poetry instead of taking a spin on my bike and let the wind clear my mogged brain!!
Now I am feeling the chill too....!!
Love Tinka
I Hate You (Poetry) - 11/30/2005 10:16:35 AM
it takes a lot of misunderstanding to hate people like this; i know what it is like to feel prejudice's sting because i have a problem with people who are mexican. i try not to dislike them or get angry at them, but i have a problem with their not learning english when they choose to live/work here. good points you raise.
I Hate You (Poetry) - 11/30/2005 9:13:29 AM
Hmmmmm okay I think I understand just a little better now!!
Thank you for pin pointing them out!!
Different indeed....yeah!!
Love Tinka
I Hate You (Poetry) - 11/30/2005 9:06:38 AM
Good points made. I also like your ryhming scheme.
I Hate You (Poetry) - 11/30/2005 8:24:20 AM
wow, so simple but so perfectly stated..our reasons to hate always sound so silly when put into words don't they
Black Beauty (Poetry) - 11/28/2005 4:38:49 PM
Beautiful~~~~
Words (Poetry) - 11/28/2005 4:37:55 PM
always enjoyed your den
really nice
Black Beauty (Poetry) - 11/28/2005 11:21:36 AM
Beautiful write David! Great sensuous tribute!
God bless,
Sandie.
Words (Poetry) - 11/23/2005 9:48:35 AM
Okay....Mister Knight....here you go and did it in a fine poem???
Here's one right back at you!!
Deep within your heart
As you read this tonight
Very slowly rekindle these words
I ain’t gonna give up on love
Deep within my heart
Joy with this piece you did bring me…oh yeah
Knowing the silly part of life all too well
Now and then the sun slips away
I sit here and read your words
Good friends are rare to find
Honesty the best of them all
This my time to surrender
Love Tinka :)
Black Beauty (Poetry) - 11/18/2005 11:12:18 AM
Very passinate write!
Black Beauty (Poetry) - 11/18/2005 10:25:07 AM
The black women from Africa can be quite enticing...to men..I guess!!
Nicely done David!!
Love Tinka
Black Beauty (Poetry) - 11/18/2005 9:01:54 AM
A beautifully sensuous and lovingly inspired tribute.
Need a Holiday (Poetry) - 9/24/2005 4:01:59 PM
Lolol! Love it! You've got to teach me how one can collect such guts - would love to pull one of those. Lol. I so envy you, David - have a great one!
God bless,
Sandie.
Desire (Poetry) - 9/18/2005 9:10:45 AM
I agree- well, at least with those less naiive.
Desire (Poetry) - 9/18/2005 9:10:17 AM
I told you to behave while away...and WHAT a return you made,,,,,thought provoking desired poetry indeed...lol..:P!!
Love Tinka
Desire (Poetry) - 9/18/2005 7:07:31 AM
I think being a man, you know better... :)
I think there's some truths in this.
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Need a Holiday (Poetry) - 9/8/2005 11:46:03 AM
Aha....one very bossy poem but well written...tee-hee...hey don't you break tomany hearts okay!!!!
I am watchin ya!!
Love Tinka
Need a Holiday (Poetry) - 9/8/2005 6:50:32 AM
I just had a week off and already feel like I could use another Great write.
Need a Holiday (Poetry) - 9/8/2005 12:57:18 AM
Hehehe...I can relate!
Good poem.
Need a Holiday (Poetry) - 9/8/2005 12:28:41 AM
Brilliant. a wonderful piece of creative poetry
Animal Farm (Poetry) - 8/28/2005 1:52:25 PM
this is excellent-you should be writing kids books. This reminded me of a cross between Orwell, Chicken Little, the one with the chicken baking the bread and Waddell's "Farmer Duck"- but yet, it is totally original as your own voice comes through strongly.
Animal Farm (Poetry) - 8/23/2005 1:46:53 PM
Well written...and I think this minds me of some people I know too!!
Love Tinka
Animal Farm (Poetry) - 8/23/2005 6:38:33 AM
I know people with this same outlook!
David I really enjoyed this tell of tales.
Lisa
Animal Farm (Poetry) - 8/23/2005 6:20:21 AM
Love your animal tale, David - especially the ending! And it truly reminds me of some folks I know!
Dark-Skinned Boy (Poetry) - 8/22/2005 1:37:37 PM
Oh how powerful and true this is, really reaches in and just grabs your heart, outstanding.
Reindeer
Dark-Skinned Boy (Poetry) - 8/17/2005 10:30:47 AM
Oh this is so sad....and not sure if it will ever end!!
The world has become too greedy!!
Love tinka
Question - Epigram (Poetry) - 8/15/2005 6:20:49 PM
overpopulation, lack of education, and poor family planning don't forget ignorance and racism.
There I think i covered part of your question
Thanks for raising our consciousness!
Cheers
Alain
Question - Epigram (Poetry) - 8/15/2005 11:00:23 AM
Good question...maybe!!
Love Tinka
Question - Epigram (Poetry) - 8/15/2005 4:47:46 AM
Let the voice be heard!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Differences (Poetry) - 8/11/2005 11:51:12 PM
Lolololol ... haaa haaa haaa ... David you are a hoot. Please read The Moment - its not as hilarious as yours but its on the same page. Excellent write, David!
God bless,
Sandie.
Differences (Poetry) - 8/10/2005 6:55:23 AM
Well Done.
Work & Play (Poetry) - 8/9/2005 12:21:48 PM
a little less work
a little more play
ah what a perk
if it were my way
but the more I play
the more I have to work
and things dont go my way
and I feel like a jerk
working is needed
playing is too
but once you've been bleeded
there too much to sift through
finding the time to play just a bit
without worrying about work on the side
is a bit of a hit
a long rough ride
a little less work
a lot more play
that's the perk
and frame of mind today
it's a perfect day for a ride too!!
A Rider Explains (Poetry) - 8/9/2005 12:09:31 PM
ah I think you captured it so well! the essence of a ride, the thrill of the kill, the glory of it all
Differences (Poetry) - 8/9/2005 11:23:02 AM
Excellent write David :)!!
Love Tinka
Differences (Poetry) - 8/9/2005 9:04:32 AM
i love the flannel lines...my brother always said my sister-in-laws red flannel was a flag that he wasn't getting any
Differences (Poetry) - 8/9/2005 9:01:29 AM
Differences indeed!!! oh this was brilliant and oh so true (for the most part *grin)
difference between she and me
is that I remain as I am free
the difference between him and them
is a poem like this, a beauty a gem
she ties knots in his mind
I tie knots of another kind
he leaves wounds time won't heal
He leaves emotions that only a real woman would feel
all are different yet one in the same
oh what fun this little game
battle of the sexes
battles of wits
battles of the ex's
and the miss with new tits
I amuse myself in this ryhme
However found yours simply sublime
The difference so clear
The difference so fine
Oh I fear
I wish this were a write of mine
well done
Differences (Poetry) - 8/9/2005 8:46:46 AM
Oh I liked this very much, excellent!
Reindeer
Differences (Poetry) - 8/9/2005 6:17:48 AM
Yeah, but I for one, didn't want to BE a Miss after the age of 18. I wanted to be a Mrs. (as the law clearly allows).
He Speaks In Capital Letters (Poetry) - 8/8/2005 1:33:36 PM
Powerful, powerful write! He is always prowling around looking for victims - and never ever tires - the more he gets, the more he wants. Too well written, David!
God bless, David!
Sandie.
He Speaks In Capital Letters (Poetry) - 8/5/2005 10:16:52 AM
wow, this really hits home these days...seems like he has more work than he can keep up with
A Rider Explains (Poetry) - 8/2/2005 9:05:15 AM
Beautifully expressive David, That must be a wonderful feeling of freedom!
Reindeer
A Rider Explains (Poetry) - 7/27/2005 11:50:58 AM
David, the way you described it makes me also want to ride! Great write!
God bless,
Sandie.
A Rider Explains (Poetry) - 7/26/2005 11:47:49 AM
Aha love it....all the way...make a wheely or a "doughnut" just for me okay!!
But be careful those babies can hurt you badly!!
Love Tinka
A Rider Explains (Poetry) - 7/26/2005 9:14:15 AM
is that a crotch rocket? i rode harleys when i was young but these new bikes look scary when they whiz by
I Choose Solitude (Poetry) - 7/24/2005 7:38:32 AM
nicely crafted rhyme and meter ... powerful expression of how your present state of being was affected by you past ...
I Choose Solitude (Poetry) - 7/19/2005 1:40:12 PM
Very well expressed David!!
Love Tinka
I Choose Solitude (Poetry) - 7/19/2005 10:59:46 AM
Ah yes, so very true and heart-breakingly real, I understand all to well, excellent.
Reindeer
I Choose Solitude (Poetry) - 7/19/2005 9:53:44 AM
Sometimes we meet the wrong people at the right time. Or the wrong people at the wrong time - for a reason. Don't give up. Better yet - leave it all the Almighty, when the right one comes along, He'll show you. You'll know for sure. Beautiful write, David!
God bless,
Sandie.
The Kiss (Poetry) - 7/18/2005 1:56:58 PM
Whoa Davod!! It is definitely getting hot in here! Sizzling hot! Beautiful sensual write, David! love it! So sensous!
God bless,
Sandie.
My Girl (Poetry) - 7/18/2005 1:44:51 PM
Great twist! Lol! I was beginning to wonder what kind of a woman is this? Darn! Then I remembered you had told me about the twist! Lovely poem and you're one lucky man to have such a loving girl, David. Lol!
God bless,
Sandie.
Zoe And Rat-Face (Poetry) - 7/9/2005 11:01:47 AM
Lololol ... I must say, you are as good a story-writter as a poet! Brilliant write!
God bless,
Sandie.
Zoe And Rat-Face (Poetry) - 6/3/2005 1:07:43 PM
hmmmmm...good one...say more.....grrrrrrrrrrrr!!
Love Tinka
Zoe And Rat-Face (Poetry) - 6/3/2005 5:59:27 AM
Time hangs heavy on some womens heads causing them consternation when they get out of bed. The wrinkles formed by times own hands just make our dolls that much more grand. Nice way to start my day , with a chuckle and a grin but I'm sure the women here may not see it that way. LOL
Not A Hope (Poetry) - 5/19/2005 11:13:48 PM
Interesting write.
Not A Hope (Poetry) - 5/19/2005 11:49:54 AM
A very thought provoking piece David!!
Love Tinka
Arrogance & Fame (Poetry) - 5/13/2005 7:19:40 AM
A good dale poetically told. Thank you, David. Love and peace. Regis
Arrogance & Fame (Poetry) - 5/12/2005 11:42:32 AM
Something to be said for vigilantism when the law doesn't work.
Well said...
Elizabeth
Arrogance & Fame (Poetry) - 5/12/2005 10:27:27 AM
Most interesting read here David!!
????? not catching the "moral of the story" in this one..little confusing I guess....but excellent poetry!!
Love Tinka
Arrogance & Fame (Poetry) - 5/12/2005 9:06:53 AM
i'm afraid i dont' know the reference but the poem is exceptional, in its style and flow
My Red Beast (Poetry) - 5/7/2005 10:21:39 AM
Ride on, David. Love and peace. Regis
My Red Beast (Poetry) - 5/5/2005 8:31:31 AM
Nothing like a good ride. Thanks for taking us on one!
My Red Beast (Poetry) - 5/5/2005 5:32:29 AM
excellent write, i also had something else in mind before reading the end.
My Red Beast (Poetry) - 5/5/2005 4:59:57 AM
Well penned
thought you were heading in that direction
ejoyed, hope it's a "Hog"
William .......Peace
My Red Beast (Poetry) - 4/29/2005 11:08:12 AM
Excellent...had something completely different in mind than Sue....lol!!
Love Tinka
My Red Beast (Poetry) - 4/29/2005 9:28:24 AM
for some reason i thought of a harley when i read the title. this is one kind of beast i'm not afraid of
The Insular Man (Poetry) - 4/28/2005 8:18:13 PM
An excellent awakening poem of how so many do in this world.
Excellent!
Thank You!
You should get this one out and about to "society".
bulletin boards, newspapers, even schools, etc...
Tracey
The Insular Man (Poetry) - 4/27/2005 6:48:58 PM
your sarcasm overrides the serious nature of this very poignant poem ...
The Insular Man (Poetry) - 4/27/2005 11:16:48 AM
Well expressed!!
love Tinka
The Insular Man (Poetry) - 4/27/2005 9:00:50 AM
you make your point perfectly...why indeed should we care...and if we don't...who will
Wedding Blues (Poetry) - 4/26/2005 11:53:24 AM
I like this;)
Jennifer
Wedding Blues (Poetry) - 4/26/2005 11:38:19 AM
it is hard, isn't it?? but still, a very good write; well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :(
Why do we hate? (Poetry) - 4/26/2005 11:37:39 AM
i love the way you write, as for this piece, it was excellent!
Wedding Blues (Poetry) - 4/26/2005 11:34:22 AM
wow, i understand this way of thinking all too well!
very nice written!
Wedding Blues (Poetry) - 4/26/2005 11:18:36 AM
Awwwwwwwww....hugs...I think I know what you mean..once bitten twice shy huh...or is it trice....nevermind....the same which ever way it goes!!
Love Tinka
My Dog's Desire. (Poetry) - 4/6/2005 8:48:28 PM
Such a sweet and true poem I'm so envious of them!
Wouldn't that be nice to be just like them.
Thank You so Much (c:)
Tracey
My Dog's Desire. (Poetry) - 4/6/2005 8:06:37 AM
That is a dog for you and mine just loves having her tum rubbed. They all dog. Excellent write.
Work & Play (Poetry) - 4/5/2005 11:13:18 AM
Easier said than done...but like the motorbike yeah!!
Love Tinka
Work & Play (Poetry) - 4/5/2005 9:48:16 AM
yeah, it is easier to say than to do. i happen to be a harley rider from way back, although my riding was done on a seat leaning against a sissy bar, it was still exhilarating
Work & Play (Poetry) - 4/5/2005 6:35:04 AM
I loved this, sure agree completely! Sounds like a fun way to relax!
Reindeer
Why do we hate? (Poetry) - 2/16/2005 3:58:06 AM
This is a very good poem. It flows smoothly and your message is very clear. The very things that are supposed to bring unity are the things that separate us all.
M.Rose
Why do we hate? (Poetry) - 2/14/2005 10:35:21 AM
yep i agree with JudeAce and Dave here
we have it all inside it is our up bring that ensure love or hate
then on to what we learn about ourselves and others as we grow that will be the driving force behind love or hate
excellent poem!!!
Why do we hate? (Poetry) - 2/12/2005 8:16:28 PM
hate is lead, sinking us further on into oblivion ...
(Dave made an excellent comment)
Why do we hate? (Poetry) - 2/11/2005 2:23:25 PM
Good write and good questions. I believe, we are born to hate. We don't need instruction, on envy, or betrayal, or rage. But we need to be taught love... The worst thing any religion ever did was put its beliefs in written form (Martin Luther) - then we would just have to use our knowledge and logical... that all love is God...
Why do we hate? (Poetry) - 2/11/2005 2:06:36 PM
It is a good question but the God that I know does not preach hate it is those who twist his written word to put their interpetation into it. I now stop myself when I use the term hate because it should be alien to us.
Why do we hate? (Poetry) - 2/11/2005 11:41:23 AM
Good question David...but you know thereis such a thin line between love and hate...and if the one you love stars making life impossible for you it turns into hate!!
I know this sounds heartless...but I asure you it takes time to get there..but once you step into danger zone the is no turnaround!!
Love Tinka
Why do we hate? (Poetry) - 2/11/2005 10:26:09 AM
In my opinion, hate is the other side of the coin...Hate/Love It is like all of the duality of nature and humanity, without one we don't understand the other...it is up to us to control ourselves whatever the emotion and therin lies the answer. Most ansers can be found within ourselves if only we were to look, and examine ways to behave....Excellent write!Thank you for sharing...etw
Why do we hate? (Poetry) - 2/11/2005 9:47:05 AM
david,
hate is sort of antithetical
i mean-it's the result of
the issues of humanity
nice writ,
thanks,
d.
Why do we hate? (Poetry) - 2/11/2005 7:44:25 AM
I think we hate because we lack the ability to see the others point of view.. I have worked VERY VERY hard on this... Now I try to put myself in a helicopter to see all angles.. It works.. Now I see my abusive mother as a human being with problems.. Doesn't excuse the behavior but it helped me to understand.. and that was enough for us to at least have a civil relationship.
I'm Insane? (Poetry) - 2/8/2005 5:41:09 PM
Well you would be in good company and I have never pleaded guilty to sanity.
I'm Insane? (Poetry) - 2/8/2005 2:11:22 PM
LOL. A prerequisite of being on here, is to be insane, at last you're out of denial..
I'm Insane? (Poetry) - 2/8/2005 11:16:12 AM
Hahahahaha...love this...welcome to my world of insanity!!
Time to play in the lavender flowerbeds.....lol......yip I remember that story!!
Love Tinka
I'm Insane? (Poetry) - 2/8/2005 9:29:39 AM
i get hooked on the word games rather than the action ones but i know the feeling
I'm Insane? (Poetry) - 2/8/2005 7:18:03 AM
Just the mere fact that a computer is in your house, makes you as insane as the rest of us...Ed ( a good funny smile for my morning, thanks)
I'm Insane? (Poetry) - 2/8/2005 7:17:05 AM
lol David, They may say you are insane but at the least you travel not alone! Not in this day and age anyway.
Keep playing! You are in good company!
Lisa
Frustration (Poetry) - 2/2/2005 6:50:40 AM
Ha ha this was great, loved your thoughts here, so true!
Reindeer
Frustration (Poetry) - 1/31/2005 11:41:08 AM
hahahaha, yes you are so right
that happens to me all the time
and right when i'm posting or leaving a message the computer clumps out....or you get in the shortest line at the store to find out when you get to the front she/he has served their last customer or they need to call for the key....
thanks for the thoughts buddy :) just kidding
Frustration (Poetry) - 1/28/2005 11:55:35 AM
Now this was worth reading and I have wondered these same things.
Frustration (Poetry) - 1/28/2005 10:02:13 AM
Ah, David... you've been poking around in my head, haven't you? (grin) Is it just me? I find it most marvelous when someone with a real gift for meter and rhyme, tells a tale that makes my head nod and brings forth audible sounds like "yep"... or... "that's for sure"... and the ever-popular "you got that right!" Great stuff! katy xox.
War and Religion (Poetry) - 1/28/2005 9:56:58 AM
Carefully laid out, steeped in truth, this is bold, fearless and right! (oops... I mean correct!) hmmmmm...
David, as long as Iraq sits on the world's oil supply, Mr. Bush will be blinded to the death and destruction he has unleashed in order to obtain it. In his zeal, he must have forgotten that word "covet" in the 10 Commandments... of course, I'm making a leap, assuming that he has actually ever read them. They made little impression, if he did. I admire your courageous and very honest commentary here. katy xox.
Frustration (Poetry) - 1/28/2005 7:05:15 AM
LOl! boy do I konw this all too well nice one David at least you art won out in the end.
Paul;-}
Frustration (Poetry) - 1/28/2005 6:31:31 AM
hehehehehe and poetry won!!
Thanks for the giggle!!
Love Tinka
Frustration (Poetry) - 1/28/2005 4:20:14 AM
It's Murphy's Law. - Whatever that could go wrong would go wrong. Heeeheee!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
The Legal Drug (Poetry) - 1/21/2005 7:19:23 PM
glad i didn't miss thisone so many are under the influence of this drug,this is a very well put together piece on a very real situation that touches us all in one form or another
The Legal Drug (Poetry) - 1/19/2005 3:11:58 PM
David,
A powerful warning to the insidiousness of alcohol's power. You may have saved many lives today with this excellent write! Well done!
As one who has been sober 22 years (thank you, God), I can testify to what alcohol does. I quit drinking the night I had a blackout and the next morning, safe in my bed, I couldn't remember how I'd gotten home...it's only by the grace of God that I didn't wreck my car, have an accident or cause one, didn't hit or kill anybody AND got home in one piece. To think I drove in that condition still gives me shivers!
Thank you for this much needed post. Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
The Legal Drug (Poetry) - 1/19/2005 9:54:24 AM
Hi David,
I must be blind....but truly...not drugged yet...but I struggle to read your words....very small and very bleek in color my friend!!
But thanks for sharing this anyways!!
Love Tinka
The Legal Drug (Poetry) - 1/19/2005 9:33:47 AM
when i gave up illegal drugs, i turned to alchohol and felt that it was a better choice...until i had to quit because it ruled me worse than any 'recreational' drug ever did. i have been sober for 15 years...and i'm still afraid of that legal drug
The Legal Drug (Poetry) - 1/19/2005 9:14:23 AM
Excellent points made, they are all valid and need to be made!
No one likes to tackle drinking becasue so many do it, but it
is lethal for so many. Thanks for sharing.
Eileen
The Legal Drug (Poetry) - 1/19/2005 7:50:46 AM
Alcohol is a drug and posts more people to succomb to that old devil bottle than what is known. The typing was light and it was hard for me to read because my vision was impaired after having surgery so much. But I did understand what you said and this is a most welcome poem on the subject.
War and Religion (Poetry) - 10/10/2004 9:38:55 AM
Lots to take in in this poem but thought provoking..Just the kind of writing that I love to read...Great job! Do you think we could put Tony and George in the next shuttle to the moon? They do seem to love one another sooo.......smile
War and Religion (Poetry) - 9/30/2004 10:20:12 PM
Well written..although I don't agree there was any 'rush' after 17 UN resolutions.
War and Religion (Poetry) - 9/27/2004 11:37:22 AM
Extremly well written
War and Religion (Poetry) - 9/27/2004 11:35:06 AM
Very powerful write David!!
Welcome back!!
Love Tinka
War and Religion (Poetry) - 9/27/2004 9:31:20 AM
God is such a convenient excuse for so many to go to war
War and Religion (Poetry) - 9/27/2004 5:42:01 AM
I agree with you that Religion has always been the spark that ignites warfare and rallies the troops, it has done so since the beginning of mankind, but I believe the underlying root cause has always been bigotry and greed.
War and Religion (Poetry) - 9/27/2004 3:53:55 AM
Greed and power have lead the world's inhabitants to many human errors. That is the reason for the wars.
Good write.
Sandie May Angel
Why Poetry? (Poetry) - 9/6/2004 4:42:40 PM
yes yes yes!
lololol
always.......love this.....my highest compliment to you......WISH I WROTE IT.......... pax A
A Rude Awakening (Poetry) - 8/18/2004 1:44:48 PM
Sorry to hear you have had to go through this. Things like this make you realise how short and precious life is. A relief you aught it when you did. Hope the rest of the year is much much kinder to you.
Humanity’s Condescension (Poetry) - 8/13/2004 9:30:31 PM
Nicely crafted, on point verse! Much related and enjoyed. Thanks for sharing.
Humanity’s Condescension (Poetry) - 8/13/2004 11:27:48 AM
Something to think about.
Welcome Back Buddy!!
Excellent rhyming!!
Love Tinka
Humanity’s Condescension (Poetry) - 8/13/2004 8:13:54 AM
So true, so true, Great fruit for thought.
Reg.
Children In Need (Poetry) - 7/13/2004 12:01:15 AM
very original presentation!
Children In Need (Poetry) - 7/11/2004 2:31:11 PM
Powerful and hardhitting write; well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :( >tears <
Children In Need (Poetry) - 7/11/2004 4:32:53 AM
The sadness of it all it is going on all over the world my friend!!
Painful reality to read!!
Love Tinka
Children In Need (Poetry) - 7/11/2004 12:00:58 AM
This is painful and it is everywhere in the world so very sad.. A much needed write.. Touched by this one..
LP
A Rude Awakening (Poetry) - 7/10/2004 11:40:07 PM
Sorry to hear that, but I am glad you are okay and that you are back
God Bless
Michelle~
