Is It Really Forbidden? (Book) - 10/3/2007 9:53:33 PM
If it's as interesting and well-written as your bio and synopsis, you've got a winner! Best of luck Phoebe!
Stranded Heat Part 1 (Short Story) - 4/16/2009 6:52:20 AM
This a good story.I think this could be a very good book. The story could definitely be expanded going more in depth on their relationship(i.e. how they met? how the courtship developed, etc), this is a solid foundation. I think you did a terrific job establishing the c haracters and also defining their personalities in such a short time frame, you quickly developed who they are. Very well written. Turn this into full novel!
Stranded Heat Part 1 (Short Story) - 4/15/2009 10:39:05 AM
I never thought Stranded Heat would be so good! It had me on the edge of my seat, can't wait for part 2!!
Stranded Heat Part 1 (Short Story) - 4/10/2009 6:39:11 PM
Phoebe, you have an interesting, romantic, wonderfully-lustful story here that deals with real-life relationship problems...An interesting read...Keep writing.
