forged jagged (Poetry) - 5/14/2007 10:19:08 PM
Not good to keep all that stuff inside
oneself..
I've missed ya..
It would be darling if you would come back..
x0x0x0x
diminishing love affair (Poetry) - 5/29/2004 4:57:20 PM
Deeply moving and meaningful sentiments shared here, Aamie. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis
diminishing love affair (Poetry) - 5/29/2004 11:44:14 AM
Wow. This gave me goosebumps. Perhaps it's because I FEEL it so deeply. A painful, emotional write. Excellent work, Aamie.
I wish you well... I shall miss reading your work.
Hugs,
Tami
diminishing love affair (Poetry) - 5/27/2004 11:58:01 AM
this piece travels along that fine line between holding on and letting go ... masterfully, i might add.
diminishing love affair (Poetry) - 5/26/2004 9:09:19 PM
Seems you tire of the goodbyes.....
Emotions run rapid in this one...
Thanks for your poetic genius Aamie....
diminishing love affair (Poetry) - 5/26/2004 8:53:41 PM
a very emotionally stirring poem ... sometimes we have no choice but to live in the twilight ...
forged jagged (Poetry) - 5/22/2004 8:45:30 PM
Succinct. A powerhouse of a gem. Thank you.
Chasing the Winds of Change (Poetry) - 5/16/2004 2:37:29 PM
Pretty fancy images, Aamie. Love you in peace. Regis
Chasing the Winds of Change (Poetry) - 5/9/2004 7:59:49 AM
I like your poem. I love sight-seeing. I just don't enjoy driving for long periods of time. I could let someone ese do the driving. An RV would be nice.
Chasing the Winds of Change (Poetry) - 4/28/2004 7:14:59 AM
You caught in very imaginative, and delicate ways the pictures and ressounding emotions of a gray winter landscape. Drumlins are a bit magic.nFascinating write. Franz
Chasing the Winds of Change (Poetry) - 4/19/2004 10:58:18 PM
Enjoyed the imagery in this, Aamie. Good write.
Chasing the Winds of Change (Poetry) - 4/19/2004 5:16:30 PM
This was beautiful, loved the imagery in this wonderful poem,
Reindeer
Chasing the Winds of Change (Poetry) - 4/19/2004 4:42:53 PM
"Ain't geography poetical. "
Anything is poetical if it moves you--and I was moving right along with you :)
Chasing the Winds of Change (Poetry) - 4/19/2004 10:33:16 AM
You created an interesting description of a dull landscape. That's not easy to do.
Chasing the Winds of Change (Poetry) - 4/19/2004 10:21:51 AM
sounds like you got stung by a drumlin ... excellent way to go, huh? I liked this piece the first time and thoroughly enjoyed the revision.
Chasing the Winds of Change (Poetry) - 4/19/2004 10:05:27 AM
i love the ecological word play
nice work
john+
Another Man's Sons (Poetry) - 1/7/2004 11:31:50 PM
spoken well. . .
very well,
cynth'ya lewis reed
Another Man's Sons (Poetry) - 10/28/2003 2:53:04 AM
..Aamie my dear friend..I live with the father of 'my sons' but that fact does nothing to make him care..thus your leaving the father of your sons was wise indeed..why? You have given yourself back to you..and your sons? ..They don't really need their father..for you have obviously been both...you see Aamie..mine have their's in their life but he is not of it!!..so in the end what our boys need is LOVE that's ALL!!
much love to you my friend..your poetry is always perfect in its conception and delivery...thankyou!!
Vesna oxoxo
Another Man's Sons (Poetry) - 5/7/2003 1:41:42 PM
Aamie this is so full of meaning and sentiment...lovely heartfelt free verse!
~Nikki~
Another Man's Sons (Poetry) - 5/7/2003 11:55:15 AM
hey, if my "another man's daughters" married your "another man's sons" we'd have the making of a sit-com ... or something ... excellent honest write, like seeing ghosts
Another Man's Sons (Poetry) - 5/7/2003 7:17:14 AM
What power you write with, and what strength I know you have, dear friend...and your sons are blessed to have you!
Another Man's Sons (Poetry) - 5/7/2003 5:14:59 AM
This was so heart wrenchingly beautiful,
Just excellent,
Reindeer
Another Man's Sons (Poetry) - 5/7/2003 4:25:37 AM
this really moved me
I will be thinking about this all day
Another Man's Sons (Poetry) - 5/6/2003 9:28:24 PM
Poingnent free verse, Aamie.
Another Man's Sons (Poetry) - 5/6/2003 8:39:50 PM
Fine looking happy lads you have there in the picture. Great pride spiced with finely powdered sighs in and on those lines. Thanks for the share, good Lady [cum strong Woman].
