A special place (Article) - 5/14/2005 8:50:07 AM
What a misuse of one's time to waste on unkindnesses, even the coninuance of the original. You're experience of "A Special Place" is what we all should promote...Good article for any day.
Micke
A special place (Article) - 4/11/2005 4:12:20 AM
We always have a safe place that we have created by ourselves. Mine is the dream world and the fairyland.
Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)
A special place (Article) - 5/26/2002 7:59:58 PM
Wonderful thought~ You know I look at the many writers and the many ways they convey their thoughts... There is no perfected writing... we all are different and that is why I adore reading... the differences, a new way to look at life around us..I agree with you; we should all accept our differences and get along and even find some delight in them...
A special place (Article) - 5/6/2002 4:31:19 AM
I'm not aware of the problems yet, but thanks for bringing it to people's attention who don't know. i hate it when people abuse sites like this. When I was on themestream someone wrote a very rude comment about something I had written, and I was going through a rotten time in my life as it was. People do neeed o be careful about what they say.
A special place (Article) - 4/30/2002 8:33:22 PM
Hi Robin....I am going to perfectly honest here...I don't know what is going on...and I do not want to, but I do agree that this wonderful open form of expression and thought is in danger if people do not stop to consider other's feelings. Very nice write, enjoyable read, even if the topic is a little unusual it does provoke thoughts. Thanks again, Trish.
A special place (Article) - 4/14/2002 1:34:33 AM
I like that cute sketch of Ron's. Hey Robin, I must have missed the controversy going on here at Authorsden. I'm not sure what you're talking about. Are some of the writers arguing about something? Anyway, you made me think of my last article called "Peace On Earth." It's not very positive. But I am so frustrated over these suicide bombings. (but I'm still curious about your above article. Let me know what's going on)
A special place (Article) - 4/13/2002 9:28:01 AM
Well-said Robin!! if we carry our differences all around...things will never ever conclude. We'll never find a solution. Let's open our minds...
White Whispers (Poetry) - 11/12/2009 10:56:26 AM
A beautiful, beautiful piece of peotry, and so you. Yes, I can identify.
Who is He ? (Poetry) - 8/1/2008 7:40:38 PM
I agree with the Amazing poet who stated it really causes one to think,....who is he?" , but I think I have an idea and I don't like his ways. his intro seems inticing but then the rest feel slimy and your poem is an excellent illustration of that,
Holy Blessings
peace'',
Richard C Suarez
Cyber Love (Poetry) - 1/6/2008 12:21:23 PM
Good rhythm and rhyme wrap the message in this enchanting poem. Good work, Robin.
-=ra=-
Who is He ? (Poetry) - 1/6/2008 12:18:56 PM
Seduction and mystery ooze through this piece. I was intrigued by the line "sucking up raw lust." Your work is very direct and intense, engaging the reader from title to end. Well done.
Who is He ? (Poetry) - 12/24/2007 3:00:35 PM
Woo-Hoo, Nice one Robin. Happy Holidays!
Your old friend, Janet xoxoxo
Who is He ? (Poetry) - 4/3/2007 3:37:19 PM
IT ALWAYS A PLEASURE TO READ FINE WELL WRITTEN WORK OF POETRY.
Who is He ? (Poetry) - 2/2/2007 12:16:44 AM
I've always loved your mysterious poetry Robin..
Where are you Robin?
I miss you a lot!
Smoooooooooo0000000000CH!
Its Raining Tears (Poetry) - 12/20/2006 6:12:19 PM
Dear Robin,
I've read your wonderful poetry at Author's Den and your skills are impecible. I'd like very much for you to consider joining my site where you'll find many of your fellow AD members. The Guidelines for Submissions are clearly laid out on the second page. If you have any questions please don't hesitate to contact me. I look forward to hearng from you.
Sincerely,
Marcia
http://www.thewritingforum.net
Fear Has A Smell (Poetry) - 11/8/2006 11:13:28 AM
Robin, you describe it so well.
Bravo for writing this.
Elizabeth
Who is He ? (Poetry) - 11/7/2006 8:07:38 PM
Whoa... powerful work, wish I had written your poem :-)
Cliff
NIGHT CRIES (Poetry) - 10/28/2006 4:21:02 PM
I can't improve on what has been said.
This really has impact.
Well done.
Elizabeth
Cyber Love (Poetry) - 10/1/2006 7:36:16 AM
Bitter truths! I have seen so many cyber-friends (male and female)shattered by 'great loves' who disappear into the ether from whence they came.
MY KISS (Poetry) - 9/27/2006 12:11:51 PM
Excellent!
CHILD OF LIGHT (Poetry) - 9/22/2006 10:58:40 PM
Wonderful work touches my heart. Your a child of light.
Hugs Angela
Who is He ? (Poetry) - 8/4/2006 8:26:19 AM
Robin, one of your best...
MY KISS (Poetry) - 4/13/2006 11:53:09 AM
Under the rhythm of libidinal drums this poem flows on the way to lake's pleasure... "MY KISS" has depicted the colors of its message to Cupid's proudness.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Who is He ? (Poetry) - 4/5/2006 6:03:09 PM
Oh your touch of poetry, every so exciting.
Mr Willow (Poetry) - 3/20/2006 8:09:56 AM
what a wonderful tale, robin! i'm glad i picked this one to read today, it is so prescient and filled with extraordinary wisdom! we all contain our opposition within ourselves, like the yin and yang symbol, huh...you got that across so well, and i loved the rhyme scheme too!
Who is He ? (Poetry) - 3/19/2006 11:48:52 AM
A composition that strikes imagination and makes the reader think...
"Who is He?" flows and dances the rhythm of life's realities and
mysteries.
Keep posting, Poet.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Lost Little Girl (Poetry) - 3/18/2006 9:44:50 PM
this piece is so sad, because it is so prevalent. so difficult for parents to hold their tempers with their little ones, and so many are so hurt instide from past hurts that they simply must pass it on, regardless of the eventual cost to their own souls. you express this ably, and even though it is such a stark and hurt-filled scenario, your wordsmithing is direct and to the point, no frills or sidebars necessary.
Who is He ? (Poetry) - 3/18/2006 9:42:44 PM
man...your writes are always so close to bubbling over with this internal heat and passion that simply must just well up from the center of you into your pen, keyboard and out, into the world, to find it' resonation in the hearts and minds of those of us who red you, robin. your use of language and intensity is admirable and perfect for our shard discipline. thank you for sharing this gem!
Who is He ? (Poetry) - 3/18/2006 5:38:05 PM
Any Time You'd Like Do Artwork With Me Is Fine...Read Your Messages!
Temptress (Damned RightOn)Is sad But Eye Opener Even Your Own Blood-Children Tempt (Screw) You!
TRASK
MY KISS (Poetry) - 3/17/2006 7:32:59 PM
A "true" kiss is and entrance to... ...well, I don't have to spell it out. Thank you for sharing this sentiments, Robin. Love and peace,
Regis
Who is He ? (Poetry) - 3/17/2006 7:31:13 PM
Very much "in your face" and honest, Robin. Well done! Love and peace to you,
Regis
Who is He ? (Poetry) - 3/17/2006 7:22:11 AM
An out standing piece
Enjoyable sensuous write
Peace & Love
William
Who is He ? (Poetry) - 3/12/2006 8:18:18 AM
a sensuous query into a passionate quest ...
Who is He ? (Poetry) - 3/7/2006 9:11:38 AM
This poem is a circle of fire. I like it. ;-) ~~Nordette
Who is He ? (Poetry) - 3/7/2006 5:09:56 AM
Don't know who, but I do know the cure. LOL Good.
Who is He ? (Poetry) - 3/7/2006 2:12:01 AM
Super Duper write!!
Love Tinka
Who is He ? (Poetry) - 3/6/2006 10:02:56 PM
The girl who takes fantasy to the jagged edge and cuts the fire out of your loins dripping with wet lace that must come off!
Sage
Who is He ? (Poetry) - 3/6/2006 7:23:31 PM
This is raw and pure passion in wordss.
Exciting!
Susan
MY KISS (Poetry) - 3/6/2006 11:22:53 AM
boy, you sure conveyed that emotion! such beautiful language and imagery, your wordsmithery is just awesome to behold.
MY KISS (Poetry) - 3/6/2006 9:07:11 AM
Being a woman it's hard to say!!
But if those are your lips...well lips to die for!!
Love Tinka
MY KISS (Poetry) - 3/5/2006 10:11:21 PM
My kiss conveys a specific chant and when she makes me say her name, the shadows on the wall ignite the cedar box where the chains are!
Sage
MY KISS (Poetry) - 3/5/2006 4:27:48 PM
Your kiss conveys volumes.
Ron
MY KISS (Poetry) - 3/5/2006 3:37:54 PM
incredible and sensuous
MY KISS (Poetry) - 3/5/2006 2:35:48 PM
Party pooper! Drat.
MY KISS (Poetry) - 3/5/2006 1:30:10 PM
Wow, got to have your kiss..
Great sexy write Robin...
Lurve ya!
Ron
LOVES PROMISE (Poetry) - 3/3/2006 1:28:37 PM
S e n s u a l-sational!! <3
LOVES PROMISE (Poetry) - 2/27/2006 1:08:11 PM
Oh yes..perfection of ecstasy..
the two as one..
a twin flame sun!
this is a glorious piece ..I have saved it for fear I may lose it..
ty Robin for such a splendid write!
Vesna:)
LOVES PROMISE (Poetry) - 2/13/2006 3:22:31 PM
I echo the sentiments of all on the board so far, Robin. A very sweet and touching Valentine write. And thank you so much for your kind words and encouragement. ~~Nordette
LOVES PROMISE (Poetry) - 2/12/2006 10:52:35 PM
Robin you penned a true gem with this one! Beautiful in every way seductive passionate sensual loving! perfect valentine!
Eileen^
LOVES PROMISE (Poetry) - 2/12/2006 9:58:27 PM
Utterly beautiful..you romantic you!!
Love Tinka
LOVES PROMISE (Poetry) - 2/12/2006 6:37:01 PM
Wonderful and exciting words make this poem a true Valentine's Day treat.
LOVES PROMISE (Poetry) - 2/12/2006 5:21:27 PM
All sensual, sublime and eternal, "LOVES PROMISE" is glowing on a rainbow of love.
I salute You, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
LOVES PROMISE (Poetry) - 2/12/2006 5:15:25 PM
A sacred vow of unity and sensuality pours its pearly sheen on the page here---->tracks imprinted with LOVES PROMISE. Robin, I wish you all of this and truly hope you soar on the wings of a postcard day everyday. This is a Hallmark write. I hope you are giving it to your special one for Valentine's Day. It is truly deserving of the gift of Love's Day.
Sage
Office Love (Poetry) - 2/4/2006 8:56:42 AM
Wow is right
opened collar steam escaping
Love it Robin
very roamntic, excellent write
Love & Peace
William
Office Love (Poetry) - 2/4/2006 1:45:03 AM
you romantic you ...and the end was beautiful..that is what love is all about...yummy stuff...WOW!!
Office Love (Poetry) - 2/3/2006 9:46:31 PM
Hot passion at its best!
Office Love (Poetry) - 2/3/2006 9:33:25 AM
Well I must say I didn't guess thill the very end that it was hub all along..marvelous write..good to see all that passion..no wonder you write so well..every chakra is spinning..YAY!!!
Love your work!
vesna:)
Office Love (Poetry) - 2/3/2006 7:21:37 AM
Lols..Laughing at George's comment below...he always has the best answer !
I'll ditto his remarks !
Peter
Office Love (Poetry) - 2/2/2006 1:53:43 PM
I'm assuming it was your husband , of course.
Office Love (Poetry) - 2/2/2006 1:29:19 PM
Must be nice to have an office with a door! LOL Hot stuff here, Robin, you turned the heat up, for sure!
Office Love (Poetry) - 2/1/2006 9:19:28 PM
who said work is boring? stimualting and flawlessly penned ...
Office Love (Poetry) - 2/1/2006 8:31:34 PM
And I thought you were going paperwork. Tsk-tsk. . .don't suppose you need a third. Kidding, I'm kidding. HOT WRITE!! 'Pea' h-h-h-h....
Office Love (Poetry) - 2/1/2006 5:39:31 PM
Need to call the firemen for the den Robin!;-) Great stuff!
Eileen^
Office Love (Poetry) - 2/1/2006 3:37:12 PM
Robin,
One word: WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!! Okay, two: HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Office Love (Poetry) - 2/1/2006 3:23:22 PM
Now why don't I work where you do?
Steaming hot Robin...
Lurve ya!
x0x0x0x0x0x0x0x0x0x0x0x
Office Love (Poetry) - 2/1/2006 3:18:48 PM
Nothing like some action in the boardroom, thass whot I'm talkin' about. Hot. This one scorched!!!
Office Love (Poetry) - 2/1/2006 3:18:24 PM
This is a two cigarette passionate poem.
Beautiful.
NIGHT CRIES (Poetry) - 1/26/2006 7:18:05 AM
Very, very effective. Stark simplicity the p e r f e c t approach.
B R A V O ~~! !
NIGHT CRIES (Poetry) - 1/22/2006 12:43:05 AM
straight to the point & with a savage twist at the end saludos
Shadows (Poetry) - 1/17/2006 1:44:11 PM
engaging indeed..rather than exploring both halves of our holistic selves, as most choose not to do, knowing one'self is the utmost challenge of a lifetime..whether or not this is based in reality or possibility, the very act of exploration reveals that both sides of human nature feed each other, and, like the yin yang symbol, contain shades of opposition in their very essences. Good contains seeds of Evil, Evil contains seeds of Good. A wisdom drop, this!
NIGHT CRIES (Poetry) - 1/17/2006 1:41:36 PM
MHM...I'm always sad reading pieces like this. When the man whom every little girl trusts most in the world betrays her, there is no worse thing in the world, IMHO. I like the way that you wrote this, so succinctly and in such an accessible manner.
CHILD OF LIGHT (Poetry) - 1/17/2006 1:40:28 PM
Indeed you are...and the light shineth, ever! A wonderful evocation of a life's purpose, our sojourn between the darkness and the light, expressed so ably!
NIGHT CRIES (Poetry) - 1/16/2006 1:44:06 PM
Wow! dark and horryfying but superbly written Robin.
Paul;-)
NIGHT CRIES (Poetry) - 1/15/2006 2:29:17 PM
Aaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaaa,i.e Temptations Of Satan Devil-Huh!
Your Friend, TRASK
NIGHT CRIES (Poetry) - 1/14/2006 8:15:17 PM
a powerful rendering of a tragic circumstance ... (nice format)
NIGHT CRIES (Poetry) - 1/14/2006 6:38:31 PM
gut touching horrifying write because of the reality that lives within it.
NIGHT CRIES (Poetry) - 1/14/2006 4:34:58 PM
WOW! Sad though Monstrously powerful
Excellen wrting
William ......Love & Peace
NIGHT CRIES (Poetry) - 1/14/2006 4:29:30 PM
Evil abounds in this world and the forces of good seems to lack the will to address the situation. Good.
NIGHT CRIES (Poetry) - 1/14/2006 2:07:44 PM
I hope she watches over her daughter and see that she receives care, love and respect from both of you. How can anybody love a heartless person?
Daddy's Princess (Poetry) - 1/14/2006 1:25:15 PM
this piece is almost too painful to read. and i don't know how to comment on it, except to say that i am so sorry that you experienced this kind of trauma, and i hope that the knowledge that others care will ease your mind a little.
Daddy (Poetry) - 1/14/2006 1:19:50 PM
you're right that it is easier to stay angry than to feel pain. you've written this piece with such honesty and heart. i hope that it has alleviated your feelings in some way, and that eventually you will find peace.
NIGHT CRIES (Poetry) - 1/14/2006 1:14:19 PM
a powerful expression of what so many children must endure. well done on a succinct piece.
NIGHT CRIES (Poetry) - 1/14/2006 11:53:02 AM
a horrible picture, excellent written!
NIGHT CRIES (Poetry) - 1/14/2006 10:53:43 AM
Robin...You confront Evil , Four Square which is the only way to destroy it !
When you do, it shrinks back into the Darkness from whence it came !
Very potent and courageous write !
Peter
NIGHT CRIES (Poetry) - 1/14/2006 10:42:15 AM
A sad statement on a universal theme that must be exposed and faced up to. Thank you, Robin. Love and peace to you,
Regis
NIGHT CRIES (Poetry) - 1/14/2006 10:23:47 AM
..an ugly truth..needed to be told...so much pain so much terror..so much shame..
You did this superbly Robin..brava!!
Vesna:)
NIGHT CRIES (Poetry) - 1/14/2006 5:56:37 AM
Awww stark reality to many!!
Thanks for sharing this insightful piece!!
Love Tinka
NIGHT CRIES (Poetry) - 1/14/2006 5:44:48 AM
A stark reality that goes on
too often.
Thanks for sharing Robin..
love,
Ron
NIGHT CRIES (Poetry) - 1/14/2006 12:17:17 AM
Wow! This brings back memories I try to forget. Well done. Short, concise and emotionally charged.
Bobbi
NIGHT CRIES (Poetry) - 1/14/2006 12:15:14 AM
Now this is one that reflects the saga of the partner of a child abuser who is in denial. Strong stuff!
blessin's, and I ditto the remarks below. . .
cynth'ya
NIGHT CRIES (Poetry) - 1/13/2006 10:20:22 PM
potent revelations that sear the soul... painful poem that needs to be told...Well done!
Words (Poetry) - 1/13/2006 7:10:40 AM
I myself have to be careful of what
I could say to some butt heads.
Powerful work....
Love,
Ron
CHILD OF LIGHT (Poetry) - 1/11/2006 5:03:08 PM
an excellent poem reflecting on spiritual struggle and the hope in becoming a child of light ...
CHILD OF LIGHT (Poetry) - 1/9/2006 11:39:41 PM
A deeply-touching write. Really enjoyed this wonderful peac. Thanks child of light. I have similar name with this.
Abdi-Noor
CHILD OF LIGHT (Poetry) - 1/9/2006 9:57:48 AM
This is beautiful. So glad you reviewed
my poem so I could discover your work.
I enjoyed this one and it is a long way back.
Thanks for your review, also.
CHILD OF LIGHT (Poetry) - 1/9/2006 4:34:12 AM
Always keep yourself in the light, Robin, and you will find warmth and gentle guidence that will make bright your pathway through through life. A very heart-felt write that delivers a mighty punch.
Take care,
Sherry
CHILD OF LIGHT (Poetry) - 1/8/2006 4:29:34 PM
None Could Be Better Than From Intelligent Lady Who Can Write As Well Ass Read Between Lines!
Thank You For Your Caring About Our Children-Your Honest Comments...
TRASK
CHILD OF LIGHT (Poetry) - 1/8/2006 12:00:23 PM
Most uplifting...though deep touching poem!!
Thank you for sharing!!
Happy New Year Robin!!
Love Tinka
CHILD OF LIGHT (Poetry) - 1/8/2006 10:52:38 AM
Through the darkness shines the light of hope. You bring this out effectively in your verses, Robin. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace to you,
Regis
CHILD OF LIGHT (Poetry) - 1/8/2006 10:39:04 AM
Darkness can touch us, but the light within in will always guide us back as this write has illustrated quite well. Wonderful write.
CHILD OF LIGHT (Poetry) - 1/8/2006 9:50:30 AM
The Lord fills us with enough grace and strength to overcome the Darkness Robin !
" I can do all things through Christ who strengthens me ! "...Phillipians
Be strong in the Lord
God Bless
Peter
CHILD OF LIGHT (Poetry) - 1/5/2006 9:12:29 AM
I like this..I really like this..my kind of poetry..
exceptional work..
Vesna:)
saved this one..ty Robin
CHILD OF LIGHT (Poetry) - 1/4/2006 9:06:52 AM
Some never see the light, though they light a thousand candles. This is a very good insight into the struggles of the soul. Well done.
CHILD OF LIGHT (Poetry) - 1/4/2006 7:06:15 AM
i'm glad you saw the light!
CHILD OF LIGHT (Poetry) - 1/4/2006 6:32:54 AM
This composition shows the reminiscences of a mind that heard
the inner call of the "I" when a "CHILD OF LIGHT" was born.
"CHILD OF LIGHT" is a poetic FLOWER scented by aroma of awareness.
I salute You, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
CHILD OF LIGHT (Poetry) - 1/4/2006 4:19:43 AM
"
When nothing filled me, I clung to pride.
My exterior looked strong while I crumbled inside.
This past year has been one long and soul crushing ride.
My heart ravaged and jaded feelings looking for someplace to hide."
I grewup in a family of Lutherans they were strick through many challenges and defeats i ran like this during teens till early thirties. Then it was not enough and so much darkness some how I was stopped and Met the lord once more he too calls us children of the light. It is much nicer in the light of things. A very positive and well expressed poem and witness. Ty for sharing the inspiring poetry.
CHILD OF LIGHT (Poetry) - 1/4/2006 2:55:17 AM
Another inspiring write indeed! Thank you, Robin!
Happy New Year!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Love Me Like Air (Poetry) - 12/31/2005 11:10:43 PM
The title alone got me. Excellent!
deleted (Poetry) - 12/31/2005 11:09:52 PM
ON WOW - THIS WAS BRILLANT! I got a little "charge" run throuhg me.
TRANSPARENT ILLUSIONS (Poetry) - 12/25/2005 11:51:18 AM
what an insightful and soulful write. loved the rhyme scheme as well, it looks like it was a difficult write, but it came out wonderfully! flows nicely, with a good, thoughtful message.
White Whispers (Poetry) - 12/3/2005 11:52:07 AM
"White whispers in my ear" alone is worth a king's ransom. S o u n d s so right. L o v e l y. 'Pea' <3
TRANSPARENT ILLUSIONS (Poetry) - 11/23/2005 12:27:48 PM
Most powerful offering!!
Love Tinka
TRANSPARENT ILLUSIONS (Poetry) - 11/18/2005 10:01:12 PM
Wow...very powerful words there, Robin.
Well done.
TRANSPARENT ILLUSIONS (Poetry) - 11/15/2005 6:56:49 PM
Creative and thought-provoking. Assuming it is autobiography,
you may be "running on empty" in terms of the relationship, but
you are definitely running with a full tank creatively and
intellectually. B r a v a !! 'Pea' <3
TRANSPARENT ILLUSIONS (Poetry) - 11/15/2005 11:30:48 AM
Emotively and meaningfully powerful, Robin. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace to you.
Regis
TRANSPARENT ILLUSIONS (Poetry) - 11/13/2005 5:54:52 PM
Dan,
Asking me to take an entire poem and condense it to a sentence or two I am not sure is fair but hey I like a challenge as much as the next women so here we go.. it's about a jaded women with some communication problems and a man that "GETS" it but she is not sure she can be everything that he deserves or needs. phew,,,,,so, how did I do with the Reader's Digest version? :) and thank you for your comment. I do look forward to reading you again but I see you are slipping..you didn't mention the typo.
TRANSPARENT ILLUSIONS (Poetry) - 11/13/2005 5:26:18 AM
Robin,
This says a lot. Trouble is that I'm not sure what you are trying to say. Please elaborate. Whether you chose to or not, it does have great rhyme.
Dan
TRANSPARENT ILLUSIONS (Poetry) - 11/10/2005 3:34:53 AM
Quite a powerful piece, Robin.
TRANSPARENT ILLUSIONS (Poetry) - 11/9/2005 7:30:47 PM
i like the diaphanous nature of this poem ... amorphous feelings expressed quite coherently ...
TRANSPARENT ILLUSIONS (Poetry) - 11/9/2005 7:03:15 PM
Superb poetry Robin! Depth of feeling is palpable!
Eileen
TRANSPARENT ILLUSIONS (Poetry) - 11/9/2005 5:23:54 PM
"TRANSPARENT ILLUSIONS" diffuses wise thinking and shows how to rinse the soul with essences of wisdom.
This composition pays its poetic dues with diamond of poetic beauty
through the lines of "TRANSPARENT ILLUSIONS".
I salute You, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Apprentice-poet by the Grace of The Mother-Poet
TRANSPARENT ILLUSIONS (Poetry) - 11/9/2005 4:59:30 PM
Well-said and well-written piece!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Love Me Like Air (Poetry) - 11/5/2005 6:50:04 AM
Oh, my. I don't want to spoil this feeling by talking about it.
I will send a message after I get my breath back. Write on! 'Pea' <3
deleted (Poetry) - 11/5/2005 6:48:31 AM
'Yes!' Poetry down to its essence! Intriguing and more than a little frightening, yet inspiring because it makes the viewer/reader
think. React!! Thank you!! 'Pea' <3
Desire (Poetry) - 11/1/2005 12:52:24 AM
by Jove you're good..love it!
vesna :)
Eternal Love (Poetry) - 11/1/2005 12:51:00 AM
Oh I do love this one..eternal love is a fact indeed..thankyou Robin for gifting us with this wondrous piece.
Vesna :)
An Angel Speaks (Poetry) - 11/1/2005 12:48:57 AM
You are an incredible writer..I am so pleased I dropped by..This is excpetional work..saved it ty Robin..
Vesna :)
Words (Poetry) - 10/31/2005 6:28:40 AM
"Words" sad it in full, and delivered a wise message.
Keep wording, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Daddy (Poetry) - 10/31/2005 6:22:30 AM
A depicting of a sad experience of a child that made a teenager old
to age a billion years... "Daddy" strikes thoughts on family and social affairs and stimulates social responsibility.
I have learned from this composition the importance of a child care;
and what family represents.
Thank You, Poet for lighting the candle of healthy life.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Love Me Like Air (Poetry) - 10/29/2005 1:38:49 PM
Love is all, Robin. You express it well in your verses here. Thank you. Love and peace.
Regis
Love Me Like Air (Poetry) - 10/27/2005 8:44:04 AM
such a basic, primal need. air, love...i appreciate the paucity of word usage here, you use only what's necessary, not expending energy in extraneous metaphoric construction, which only builds a sense of airiness, in perfect compliment to your subject. well done, poet.
deleted (Poetry) - 10/27/2005 8:43:04 AM
great stuff right here! sometimes life is like that, right? ha!
An Angel Speaks (Poetry) - 10/26/2005 11:05:24 AM
Wisdom, art, knowledge and grace abound through the lines of this
magnigicent poem, "An Angel Speaks".
Never rest Your Pen, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
P.S.: Please check lines eight and twelve. They sound like they
could be revised for better harmony of their rhythm.
Thank You
Love's Abate (Poetry) - 10/26/2005 10:42:22 AM
It is always a privilege to come to a literary banquet that pleases my soul and nourish my mind. “Love's Abate” offers a full emotional composition to satisfy Phoebus, make Erato proud, and Minerva smile, while Cupid confesses his mistakes. This poem meets knowledge, embraces wisdom, and glows by the monument of The Major Art enriching the history of Poetry.
Long Healthy Creative Life, Poet!
In gratitude and reverent admiration.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Love Me Like Air (Poetry) - 10/26/2005 9:01:55 AM
Romantic daring demanding, "Love Me Like Air" flows from the fountain of desires.
Enjoyed the reading of "Love Me Like Air".
I salute You, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
deleted (Poetry) - 10/26/2005 7:18:51 AM
Lot to think about....
Hope it's not too serious....
Ron
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Thanks for your comments!
Love Me Like Air (Poetry) - 10/23/2005 11:56:22 PM
Romantic You!
TRASK
Love Me Like Air (Poetry) - 10/23/2005 10:59:18 AM
Very orginal and well written.
Love Me Like Air (Poetry) - 10/23/2005 5:51:42 AM
imagery & motif are consistent and well-defined ...
Love Me Like Air (Poetry) - 10/23/2005 4:49:55 AM
A truly lovely poem, Robin.
Love Me Like Air (Poetry) - 10/22/2005 7:08:02 PM
Exquisite beauty~
Love Me Like Air (Poetry) - 10/22/2005 6:54:51 PM
WOW! this Well Penned Piece
rocks great write
William .....Peace & Love
Love Me Like Air (Poetry) - 10/22/2005 3:03:56 PM
What a knockout stanza that last one is Robin! I love it!
The whole poem is great!Beautifully written!
Love,
Eileen
Love Me Like Air (Poetry) - 10/22/2005 2:46:26 PM
I always love your work..
Thanks for your comments
With love
Ron
Love's Abate (Poetry) - 10/20/2005 4:57:48 PM
Ah, hindsight...doncha wish it would come sooner...
Poignent work. Well said and done.
Love's Abate (Poetry) - 8/14/2005 2:23:35 PM
Dear Robin,
I'm glad I stumbled upon your den. This is an incredible poem. Classical poets of yore would welcome you among their midst. How well I know the pain of a broken heart but never have I been able to express it as profoundly and effectively as you just did. Great work!
Chanti
Love's Abate (Poetry) - 8/10/2005 6:08:26 AM
No greater pain than a broken heart, surely. Few if any of us escape it, yet we are nothing without opening our hearts again...
Love's Abate (Poetry) - 8/6/2005 11:07:52 AM
Very nicely created and shared. Thank you, Robin. Love and peace to you.
Regis
Love's Abate (Poetry) - 7/26/2005 10:32:19 PM
a most difficult and disheartening situation to find oneself in ...
poetically, very vivid imagery, nice rhyme and i like the tone ...
Love's Abate (Poetry) - 7/21/2005 1:47:05 PM
Sad Romantic You Write--Now You (All)Got To Turn Walk Away And, Never Look Back!
TRASK
Love's Abate (Poetry) - 7/21/2005 1:45:24 PM
I loved it. I went through three marriages. I went through three wonderful women. Fault was all mine. Every time. Except the third one stuck. Well, mmaybe the first one was a little bit her fault. Oh, yeah, while I'm thinking about it that second one . . . Just kidding around here. Loved the poem.
Love's Abate (Poetry) - 7/21/2005 1:27:53 PM
I agree with Eileen.
Also my first marriage was such a lie
on her part....
Hope life is being go0d to you Robin..
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Love's Abate (Poetry) - 7/21/2005 12:05:49 PM
Wow Robin! superb imagery in this in-depth poem of loves
diappointments! Excellent write!
Eileen
Daddy's Princess (Poetry) - 7/19/2005 4:41:35 AM
Some fathers are like animals. They do not fit to be fathers.
Last night I've watched "Nanny 911", it is the best show I've ever seen. The couple have adopted two twin girls. They are so good to the children who have gone wild, the Dad was concerned so he had dialed "Nanny 911" for help, and I'm so glad he did.
The have finally broken the walls between themselves and the children, and they now can finally sit down and play with the children. The two twin girls was re-assured the love that is stored for them.
I like how the mother told the adopted child when asked by the child where did she come from. The mother answered, "You've come from my heart." I think that was a beautiful answer. When re-assured of the love she has for the girl, the girl finally broke down and cried and hug the mother. It was a wonderful show.
There are several nannies in this show "Nanny 911", unfortunately, next show will not be the same nanny. I think last night's nanny was the best. She knew where the problem lies in the family and was able to make everything better. I was so moved by last night's show I sat there and cried.
Then after that "Hell's Kitchen" came on, and I felt sad for Elsie, who had to leave the show because all her competitors were jealous of her success. Some people are so wicked I can't believe what I saw happening right on the TV. They were supposed to be working as a team in the kitchen, but all of them ignored her, no one said a word to her last night, no help came to her. As a result she was bumped out of the show. Sad indeed!
Two good shows on every Monday night, beginning at 8:00 p.m. Eastern Time.
Gosh! Look how your poem has made me talk. Sorryeeee!...if you think I'm talking too much!!!!!!
Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)
Daddy's Princess (Poetry) - 7/18/2005 5:46:29 PM
Honest. Real. Not to be ignored any longer. Now. What are WE doing about this? It's like war. This world is alien to its inhabitants. We have no excuses. We CAN change it all. Stuff like this (what you write) provides the reason. Anyway. Thanks. And love and peace and strength to you. Regis
Daddy's Princess (Poetry) - 7/18/2005 1:39:06 PM
This kind of moralistic treachery happens so much more than I ever thought that it could . . . or would. Sometimes I have some of the very same feelings about the male sex that a lot of women do. Yes, we are evil, but as in anything else, not all of us are. Men do not hold onto the title of evilness alone, women can be just as bad. Not trying to make excuses for pedophiles because to me they are the lowest common demoniator. They deserve a life sentence withough parole, plus castration for the first offense. There will be no second offense.
Daddy's Princess (Poetry) - 7/18/2005 1:30:19 PM
Robin you have presented this with chilling effectiveness.
It has always been a mystery to me how a father could do this
to a daughter. So hard for me to fathom what gets into a mans
psyche to do such things. I wonder why more isn't done to deal
with this abuse that continues to horrify and ruin so many
childrens lives. It is a disgrace in an enlightened society
that it continues to happen, and even more so than ever before.
A blight on our society!
Eileen
An Angel Speaks (Poetry) - 7/18/2005 12:29:26 PM
My arms are empty without you to hold... Magnificient introspection and outward expression of caring for those that need it most. Splendid write.
Daddy's Princess (Poetry) - 7/18/2005 10:11:41 AM
this is so tragic and real...the teacher should be slapped for missing such an obvious pleas for help...
Daddy's Princess (Poetry) - 7/18/2005 8:41:10 AM
extremely effective ...
Daddy's Princess (Poetry) - 7/17/2005 7:45:35 PM
But Angels like you Robin do help many
of these hurting girls.
Sad, but too true of a write...
Thanks always for sharing..
Love ya! Ron
Hope life is being good to you Robin...
Daddy's Princess (Poetry) - 7/17/2005 6:28:19 PM
Your readers should read your biography, and know that you are working tirelessly with young girls who need help. Thank you for what you do with your life and talent. I saw this poem aout a year ago, and am glad to see it posted again. Keep doing your vital and important work to help young women. - Bill
Daddy's Princess (Poetry) - 7/17/2005 3:24:13 PM
Too many have looked the other way, too long. A chilling expose.
Ron
Daddy's Princess (Poetry) - 7/17/2005 12:38:55 PM
This is frightening. So vividly written.
Too many children experience this. If ever there were a justification for the death penalty, this is it. ~ Sara
Daddy's Princess (Poetry) - 7/17/2005 12:27:44 PM
"Daddy's Princess" seems to be depicting thousands cases in this
- nightmare's story - and it is, for a great number of similar situations are accounted throughout the country, (USA) and in most cases the "RULE OF SILENCE" is the reason that the
EPIDEMIC MALADY can't be eradicated.
I have enjoyed the reading of "Daddy's Princess".
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Daddy's Princess (Poetry) - 7/17/2005 11:32:15 AM
Been there, done that. Still in therapy and if it weren't for a strong Faith in God and decent meds, I'd have been dead a long time ago.
I used to wonder how long he would get away with it. The thing that I never knew was 'God sees everything' and he didn't get away with anything at all.
He died in his apt. alone, was there 6 days before being discovered. I have to tell myself that he was mentally ill or I'd go crazy. Love & Peace my dear friend.
Janny, xoxoxo
Daddy's Princess (Poetry) - 7/17/2005 10:55:18 AM
Such an awful dispicable act. You have poured out your soul and your pleas for help here. Don't give up, tell everyone until someone listens. I hope you find solace in writing poetry
An Angel Speaks (Poetry) - 7/11/2005 8:17:42 AM
Soul touching write...very precious...love n luck...BHUWAN!!
An Angel Speaks (Poetry) - 7/9/2005 9:50:50 AM
An exemplary creation of poetic construct and well-expressed meaning, Robin. Thank you. Love and peace to you. Regis
An Angel Speaks (Poetry) - 7/8/2005 9:18:01 PM
Bad thing is, their pain will always pop up when their
getting older. You write these perfect Robin...
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An Angel Speaks (Poetry) - 7/8/2005 1:44:59 PM
Angels are amoung us...nicely done
Jennifer
An Angel Speaks (Poetry) - 7/8/2005 9:40:01 AM
a very moving and well constructed poem ... you're poetic ability to capture the emotion and mood is just great ...
An Angel Speaks (Poetry) - 7/8/2005 8:57:28 AM
beautiful and soul touching write, robin; very well done! brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :( >tears <
An Angel Speaks (Poetry) - 7/8/2005 8:15:01 AM
A very touching and soulful rendition Robin
Described with alacrity and great feeling
Angels hide their eyes at such horrors
Peter
Daddy (Poetry) - 7/8/2005 7:39:14 AM
Wow Robin, the story in itself is heart-breaking but I do understand. The rhyme scheme is impeccable my friend. I'll be in touch about my surgery, thanks again friend
Love, Janny xoxoxo
Mr Willow (Poetry) - 7/7/2005 5:43:07 PM
excellent poetic tale ... the rhyme is flawless ...
Mr Willow (Poetry) - 7/7/2005 5:22:26 PM
A fantastic poetic tale, Robing. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace. Regis
Mr Willow (Poetry) - 7/7/2005 3:06:05 PM
This was compelling and a fun, rhythmic ride that held my attention all the way from question to closure - or not, as the case may be! A well-told tale - you seem a very relaxed and natural story-teller, Robin - and I like the slightly open-endedness of it. Yes, it is a heavy demand to put on just one other "ordinary" person to hold everything that encompasses perfection as far as we are concerned; and yet, the inverse of that is that, if we are together with the "one" who CAN make us complete in every way (that's certainly not to say PERFECT!!), then surely his imperfections we will love as much as his perfections; in fact, perhaps that is what we will come to love about him - the fact that he ISN'T perfect so that he won't show us up! Sorry, feeling scrambled after the London thing, but I enjoyed this immensely, and thank you for your visit to my pages, too. Kate xx
Fear Has A Smell (Poetry) - 7/7/2005 2:08:31 PM
Oh my gosh, I know the smell of sheer terror as well, you never forget it. My first memory was peeing on myself while being beaten and not daring to cry. That memory irks my soul. Love the style of this.
Janny xoxoxo
Mr Willow (Poetry) - 7/7/2005 2:01:40 PM
How very Zen! I love the story, this could be a mini-series, kind of like the Twilight Zone. ;) This also could be taken in more than one way, I love it, keep the reader interested and guessing. A real power-house.
Love, Janny xoxoxo
Mr Willow (Poetry) - 7/7/2005 1:38:39 PM
Thanks for sharing this most outstanding piece!!
Love Tinka
Shadows (Poetry) - 7/7/2005 5:12:55 AM
An engaging write, Robin!
Mr Willow (Poetry) - 7/7/2005 4:10:01 AM
Fasinating poem and can be taken a couple of ways
there is more here than the surface
Lost Little Girl (Poetry) - 7/7/2005 2:36:58 AM
No child deserves to go through this. A very sad, chilling and compelling write.
" ... Your love came with a sting from the knuckles of your fist.
If only I could scream or cry
but my mouth forever silenced. "
Great write, Robin! God bless,
Sandie.
Cyber Love (Poetry) - 7/7/2005 2:32:12 AM
Robin, such honesty and strong principles! I love it! With cyber love its true one can be dishonest to the next person. People will say what you want to hear and will be what you want them to be. Do read my short story - Computer Love - she met her man alright ... no more said. Ahem.
God bless, Robin!
Sandie.
Mr Willow (Poetry) - 7/7/2005 2:24:03 AM
Finding a ticket on the ground with my exact wish would have freaked me BIG times! Now riding a train full of clones of Bob Jim, whoa!! Lolol. Jokes aside, interesting poem, Robin.
God bless,
Sandie.
Mr Willow (Poetry) - 7/7/2005 2:16:24 AM
" A man's a man for a'that " quote Robert Burns
A man or woman with a good heart is a treasure !
Peter
Mr Willow (Poetry) - 7/6/2005 9:24:27 PM
This is a full course poetic meal... "Mr Willow" sings its
story beyond the twilight zone and can be heard throughout
the four corners of the world of imagination.
I have enjoyed the contents and the rhythm of "Mr Willow".
Thank You, Poet!
Keep enriching the golden pages of Poetry. Never rest Your pen.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Mr Willow (Poetry) - 7/6/2005 7:32:38 PM
I really enjoyed your story here Robin..
I want women the same with a different names..
Lurve ya!
Hope you had a teriffic 4th Robin...
Mr Willow (Poetry) - 7/6/2005 6:04:52 PM
Robin that is some poetic tale! Fantasy lives;-) well done
don't know if I'd like the concept though. I like a real man,
that wouldn't be every man
Eileen
Mr Willow (Poetry) - 7/6/2005 4:06:58 PM
Quite a tale, Robin.
Ron
