Not About Love at All (Poetry) - 11/19/2007 8:56:25 PM
Bedrock beliefs and rock-bottom affairs --Good stuff. --Charlie
Feeling Sorry For Myself (Poetry) - 11/16/2007 6:35:19 AM
mmm.. refreshing hionesty, though painful and gripping. i do admire your style, how the words just fall down the page. .. as if gravity and time and will were nothing.. .
loverly
haunted write~
ness
Something's Bound To Happen (Poetry) - 11/16/2007 6:34:00 AM
love the stopstill almsot staccato images of this...emotions and memories like photographs and heartbeats. .resonant and clear.
there is a quiet tone to this. and it alludes to so much more understanding.
beautiful thing~
ness
