Stargazer (Short Story) - 11/25/2007 5:49:42 PM
Way good. You sucked me in... --Charlie
The Home Game (Article) - 8/20/2008 3:41:43 AM
Well, you have in one short article explained why I remained single! This is cute, but I detect an underlying tension which is very real... You know what I recommend...put that message that is near your A/D pic on the front of your refrigerator...and teach it to all of your family members! I enjoyed this, but also sympathized with "mother."
Lost In Translation (Article) - 4/9/2008 11:45:42 AM
Ha! Ha! This sounds so much like some of the conversations I have had with my own dad over the phone! When our own kids are grown, do you think we will be as bewildering to them as our parents are/were to us?
Cryssa :~)
Glad Charlie told me to look you up...you have some great writing here!
The Home Game (Article) - 4/9/2008 11:39:10 AM
I long ago learned that one should NEVER shop anywhere on a Saturday! Truthfully, nowadays I heartily try to avoid any shopping with my children in tow! :~)
Loved the write...imaginative and funny...yet sadly it felt somewhat like my life. :~)
Cryssa
The Home Game (Article) - 4/1/2008 11:18:57 AM
This is really brilliant! I laughed all the way through, except when I was gramacing in empathy.
Sue Phillips
Lost In Translation (Article) - 4/1/2008 9:05:59 AM
I am busting a gut here laughing, Vivienne. :0) That is so funny...and just what everyone knows. But you wrote it very well. I had a jolly chuckle throughout the whole thing.
See ya around. --Charlie
The Home Game (Article) - 4/1/2008 8:32:03 AM
What a hoot! Love it, Vivienne. I think writing this in second person allowed the readers to experience the ride with you. So I wave merrily out the window at my 5-yr old, "Hey, Matty"... and enjoy my widowed freedom for an hour or two at AD.
Great write. --Charlie
