Homeless in a House (Poetry) - 2/20/2008 8:04:46 PM
Interesting and compassionate look at a homeless person, simply a human being. (I think it would be better to write "belonged"). Well done.
Axilea
I Was Waiting (Poetry) - 11/23/2007 10:42:59 AM
"I was waiting ,
digging wholes (maybe "holes"?) inside pale words kept into bleeding heart"
Enjoyed the read!!
Love Tinka
Notes for Tomorrow (Poetry) - 11/23/2007 8:54:53 AM
Jselyn M DD
Thank you for your kind comments and let us the world become more lovely tomorrow with beautiful people
Thanks
Hira
Homeless in a House (Poetry) - 11/23/2007 8:50:35 AM
Thank you Josie, its inspiring
Regards
Hira
I Was Waiting (Poetry) - 11/23/2007 8:46:09 AM
Axilea
Thank you for kind comments- its inspiring
Regards
Hira
I Was Waiting (Poetry) - 11/22/2007 10:56:11 PM
Intense feeling and imagery. I liket he colors and the presence of painting, an idea so close to that of poetry. (I think you might want to check the word "whole").
Thank you for sharing,
Axilea
