Ever Dance With the Devil (Short Story) - 2/8/2003 11:33:46 AM
The whole piece was great -- sensory imagery, suspense, and all the works, until it was revealed that the girls were vampires! That spoiled it for me... my mind immediately screamed, "CLICHE!" It could have been much better if you proceded with the man being an obsessed serial killer, or if the girls really turned out to prefer each other rather than men (if you get my drift) --- really anything but vampires! Please feel free to email a response.
The Sweetest Gift (Article) - 2/23/2003 4:47:04 PM
sad smile* ...it's thought provoking
The Sweetest Gift (Article) - 7/23/2002 11:05:40 AM
I read this the other day and couldn't stop thinking of it all weekend. What an incredible story and a tragic waste. You have told this wonderfully and I truely enjoyed the reading of it. Fantastic work
Drkman
The Sweetest Gift (Article) - 5/25/2002 5:13:21 PM
How Sad, such a sad article, hopefully it will open some eyes though!
The Sweetest Gift (Article) - 3/13/2002 8:06:53 AM
Re:fionnagh
I looked for the question mark you mentioned but couldn't find it. It wouldn't be a type o, it would be a conversion thing. I have noticed when you convert from certain word processing documents things like tab and hard returns end up in your documents as characters. If I knew where it was I would remove it. Thanks for your comments.
The Sweetest Gift (Article) - 3/7/2002 10:47:17 AM
Was the question mark at the beginning of the sentence a typo? Very nice otherwise.
The Sweetest Gift (Article) - 3/4/2002 3:30:28 PM
What a sad tale, and am sure one that is too often told over and over again. Thank you for this article.
Love and Light
dreamweaver
Left Behind (Poetry) - 7/23/2002 11:08:26 AM
Wow another great write. So good to see your work here. I truly enjoy reading it
Drkman
Left Behind (Poetry) - 5/25/2002 5:14:22 PM
An Emotional Piece!
Left Behind (Poetry) - 3/7/2002 10:48:09 AM
powerful
Left Behind (Poetry) - 3/5/2002 2:25:49 PM
very well written
Left Behind (Poetry) - 3/5/2002 9:27:40 AM
Powerful.
Left Behind (Poetry) - 3/5/2002 1:10:17 AM
very emotional... very well done... Bravo.
Left Behind (Poetry) - 3/4/2002 4:38:05 PM
Excellently written~*
