Why Must I Die (Poetry) - 12/15/2012 12:04:07 PM
powerful graphic, powerful read
The Frosted Window (Poetry) - 12/9/2012 6:21:31 PM
Love in an unspoken language brings on the choirs.
Peace,
Dayvid
The Frosted Window (Poetry) - 12/7/2012 11:43:44 AM
You gave this Christmas love poem all the sound effects, "A floorboard creaks / bent and broken" and you didn't leave out the love which surrounded each of these two very vibrant people on Christmas Day. Well done poetry.
The Voyage to God (Poetry) - 10/21/2012 9:44:59 AM
I'll have to check all of these people, some of whom I don't know, but your little poem is really sweet in the way you have weaved these people into your quest for God.
Ron
The Voyage to God (Poetry) - 10/21/2012 8:40:41 AM
I'm the captain of my soul. Never agreed with that old chestnut.
You're not sailing alone, not with Gods personal Spirit at the wheel.
Serene feel to this poem, a poem that starts off as rather macabre. Yet ends so powerfully. Or begins at the end!
The Voyage to God (Poetry) - 10/21/2012 6:11:17 AM
witty. and light well done
The Voyage to God (Poetry) - 10/21/2012 4:37:46 AM
Thanks, Jerry for reading.
The Voyage to God (Poetry) - 10/21/2012 3:56:07 AM
Turning the helm over to the carpenter not a bad idea.
Storm (Poetry) - 10/9/2012 2:52:07 PM
So well crafted and you make the moment new, the emotion new with that unexpected leap at the ending ~
Blessings,
Christine
Storm (Poetry) - 10/8/2012 7:23:39 AM
That last line is a surprise. One would think there would be calm after the storm. But in this case, it appears that the storm brought more than bargained for.
Ron
Cupid's Kiss (Poetry) - 8/30/2012 9:37:24 AM
Asa - But we cherish those moments.
Chrsitine - Thanks. I'm sure there are more beautiful poems to write about it
Cupid's Kiss (Poetry) - 8/29/2012 3:34:44 PM
Your words and presentation make the moment new!
Be well,
Christine
Cupid's Kiss (Poetry) - 8/19/2012 9:02:39 AM
yeah it has...sadly, i have experienced my first 'real' love. the moment was beautiful, but only for a...moment...sadly. thanks,
asa
Ruined plans (Poetry) - 8/9/2012 1:49:12 PM
The great outdoors beckons… But it's always good to have an indoor plan.
Ron
Ruined plans (Poetry) - 8/8/2012 2:35:02 PM
Very true and it happens often, ruining my plans!!! very nice short poem
