Dave's Lament (Poetry) - 2/1/2009 10:12:33 AM
This composition is very in contents, but it seems that "Dave's Lament" requires a revision.
In respect,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Blood (Poetry) - 2/1/2009 9:57:05 AM
Chaos could be the reaction.
"Blood" strikes the sense of humanity and justice. A stimulating and inspiring composition.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Eternal Sunset (Poetry) - 2/1/2009 9:46:51 AM
The first line of "Eternal Sunset" could be accepted scientifically, but the second line shows that it needs revision.
"Eternal Sunset" depicts the enter of the night leaving a metaphor for the day.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Man or Monster? (Poetry) - 2/1/2009 9:14:14 AM
An inspiring poetic writing... "Man or Monster?" gives the reader a tour through an ontological depicting of the king animal ~ who made the Lion king of the beasts ~ and "DBA" his time as the Lord of all biologic-spiritual beings.
I salute You, Poet.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
The Heart of Darkness (Poetry) - 2/1/2009 9:07:30 AM
Wisely said in poetic expressions... "The Heart of Darkness" shows the nature of Man.
I salute You, Poet.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Man or Monster? (Poetry) - 1/28/2009 3:51:28 AM
I always felt sorry for the Frankenstein monster who didn't ask to be 'born' and received nothing but hostility and fear from everyone who beheld him. Just like King Kong, the monster's end was rather sad.
A long poem, Mario, but never boring.
best wishes!
Blood (Poetry) - 12/4/2007 10:37:15 AM
Very sad :(
Blood (Poetry) - 12/4/2007 7:34:53 AM
I don't know, but the thought leaves me feeling cold. I know it happens--that last line. On the news you hear of blood abusing blood.--so sad, it tears me to pieces.
