Caught (Poetry) - 10/22/2012 2:28:59 PM
Excellent expression, Dana I find it odd that some people try not to be obvious in their deceit but it sometimes defeats them. This can be compared to the original (father of the lie) Satan, when he deceived Eve and the forbidden fruit turned out to be rotten in its core when they lost this perfection...now he has no escape.
Synthetic Sympathy (Poetry) - 10/12/2012 11:35:39 AM
I feel this way and will continue to do so. Only sympathy after the hurting i've been through... I know a situation like this isn't fun but life goes on.
Caught (Poetry) - 10/12/2012 11:34:24 AM
Good writing, makes sense, it happens to many ,,,,they get locked inside, and lose everything.... noone is the perfect bride.
Free Once More (Poetry) - 10/12/2012 11:33:09 AM
I had no promises, just adored him and he went to love his other girl friend and i'm out, Let the rain fall....it's been 3 mo now, and tears still come... but the sun rises too, each new day is more far away from him i get in my thoughs. I'm free once more too except for the memories.
Of Destined Meetings (Poetry) - 10/12/2012 11:31:52 AM
it's the same here with me, a love affair ended, but like you said all sould meet ===in the end.
Caught (Poetry) - 10/12/2012 5:50:16 AM
Another young woman's sad story here. if this is not a work of fiction I feel for you. Our daughter endured a similar situation. She still remains wounded; five years down the road. People use each other anymore like plastic spoons and forks and then dispose of them. A sad state of affairs. Very little honor anymore.
Caught (Poetry) - 10/11/2012 10:19:40 AM
You left me thinking that maybe you spent some time in that cage and now you are announcing how you got out.
Ron
Caught (Poetry) - 10/11/2012 4:28:41 AM
the protection of ones heart from the hunter, well done
budd
Free Once More (Poetry) - 10/7/2012 7:43:08 AM
The desperation to escape humiliation and pain. We have all been there. 'He took my strength and became my weakness'...I can relate to that if not recently. Very effective lines. By the amount of work you have posted here I am thinking you must be new to the "Den". Welcome. I am already a fan. Be well, Kathy
Synthetic Sympathy (Poetry) - 10/7/2012 7:40:11 AM
This packs a punch. The very phrase 'synthetic sympathy' is attention catching alliteration at its best in my view. Your symbolism is clever without being so criptic the reader is distracted by it rather than engrossed by it. Very nice work. Be well, Kathy
Of Destined Meetings (Poetry) - 10/7/2012 7:36:15 AM
Dana, this touched my heart. Simultaneously it speaks of connection and loss. Love and loss. You have set up a story here that the poem completes but I could see it becoming a love story as well. I feel every word is needed and enhances the poem but I love the last part the best. "Follow you path, I'll follow mine, and all souls meet-in the end. So wonderful. Be well, Kathy
Of Destined Meetings (Poetry) - 10/6/2012 12:32:05 PM
A beautiful way of letting go.
Ron
Of Destined Meetings (Poetry) - 10/6/2012 10:34:21 AM
a tale that may be repeated often thank you for the sharing
budd
Synthetic Sympathy (Poetry) - 12/14/2007 5:54:31 PM
The clarity of your words speaks volumes as I know many in situations such as this....
Be safe,
Karen
Free Once More (Poetry) - 12/9/2007 2:15:25 PM
The Creator grants us happiness automatically but only if we believe that sun shall shine brighter tomorrow. Beautiful work, Dana...Welcome to the den
Free Once More (Poetry) - 12/7/2007 1:21:36 PM
Asking God is your first step towards realizing there is always a future. Best holiday wishes to you.
Free Once More (Poetry) - 12/6/2007 2:34:11 PM
Be free and God with guide you through...
Be safe,
Karen
Free Once More (Poetry) - 12/6/2007 2:00:17 PM
Let it go, and be free, trusting the Lord.
I have friends from Ukraine, Valentina, Svenanna and others, and they love England and England loves them...
Freedom is priceless, yet one can't put a price on freedom.....
Free Once More (Poetry) - 12/6/2007 1:51:37 PM
powerful and poignant work here...great flow and rhythm. Welcome to the den. I will be looking forward to more of this quality of work.
Free Once More (Poetry) - 12/6/2007 12:43:14 PM
Powerfully emotive and meaningful, Dana. Sadly, it is a common theme on this chaotic world. You do end on an empowering note though. Thank you for sharing your sentiments. Welcome to AD. Love and best wishes,
Regis
