A Beautiful Day (Poetry) - 10/30/2018 9:16:09 AM
A nice rap for a beautiful day. Would like to hear you tell it for real.
Ron
On the Up Side (Poetry) - 4/10/2008 7:41:54 PM
This is a great description of life, and boy, when we are on the upside, that is the time to sit back and enjoy!! Great one, again. I think I am a new fan of your poetry :) Michelle
The Silent Warrior (Poetry) - 4/10/2008 7:40:08 PM
"In its Webster's dictionary format," is a brilliant line, especially following the line above it, so opposed as it is to desire and all the carnal longing it applies, a great balance of reality and the seductive dreamworlds of desire. Love it.
The Clapping of Their Wings (Poetry) - 4/10/2008 7:37:39 PM
I really enjoy this almost spiritual traveller feel of your poems, the reader transcends place and becomes the moment. Excellent.
Yeji Town Mornings (Poetry) - 4/10/2008 7:35:40 PM
You've recreated place well in this, and without overdoing the descriptions, rather with a light hand of what to say and what to leave out. That final image is a very strong one, too. - Michelle
