Real Love- -What it is (Short Story) - 9/25/2004 8:33:57 AM
very touching and so true, Cheryl. Wish more people would understand in this terribly superficial, money motivated world.
Johana Smith - Author of 9/11/2001
Real Love- -What it is (Short Story) - 8/18/2003 4:08:25 AM
What a lovely story, it touched me
well done
Real Love- -What it is (Short Story) - 6/30/2002 2:35:55 PM
very well done, cheryl!! god does love us, even if we no longer know who we are or what are we doing or why we are here. god loves EVERYONE!! love, karen lynn.
Real Love- -What it is (Short Story) - 4/20/2002 12:40:03 AM
i have liked ya story and i have a feeling that i would love to learn more please from as much as love is concerned let me know thanks.
Real Love- -What it is (Short Story) - 4/15/2002 6:44:39 PM
Wonderful story, Cheryl. So glad it is true. Gives us a new perspective on love.
Evelyn
over (Poetry) - 7/24/2005 6:20:27 AM
yes, masks can be quite uncomfortable ...
over (Poetry) - 7/17/2005 8:44:52 AM
Great write, Cherly!
God bless,
Sandie.
over (Poetry) - 7/16/2005 9:52:37 PM
Sometimes we grieve a loss even when we know it was the best possible option for us. Once awakening, we realize that we shed an ill-fitting skin when we walked away from that situation and joy fills our spirit. Nicely done, Cheryl.
Take care,
Sherry
over (Poetry) - 7/16/2005 7:30:47 PM
A sigh of relieve in this one. Well-expressed.
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
It is done (Poetry) - 10/6/2004 4:47:37 PM
It's done? Those elves work so well..
silence (Poetry) - 9/17/2002 6:59:50 AM
Hmmm....the silent treatment! I think we've all been there at one time or another.
Good write!
Debbie :)
Ode to Steve...Thanks (Poetry) - 6/24/2002 3:11:53 AM
woo hoo..you go girrrrlll.
he is pretty cool.
hugs
krissy
Ode to Steve...Thanks (Poetry) - 6/23/2002 10:17:38 PM
thanks...i did smile, actually laughed. thanks. me
Love, what is it? (Poetry) - 6/17/2002 6:13:28 PM
Love is everything or nothing. I have had both. Everything is better!!
Love you. Well said.
Black Heart (Poetry) - 5/5/2002 6:21:15 PM
Could it be one has lost their first love.. the lover of our soul, the giver of life? when He is first, all else falls into place.. wonderful poem, i hope you find what you are looking for.
My Song (Poetry) - 5/5/2002 6:17:05 PM
this reads as it must be felt, from the inner depths of the spirit..
First Love (Poetry) - 4/13/2002 8:04:10 AM
Thank you, my darling sister, for this loving tribute to our father. I love you for it. The things I can't say, you did.
Black Heart (Poetry) - 4/13/2002 8:00:32 AM
All I can say, my sister, is WOW!
I know your heart is not black, it is soft and sweet and full of light.
Black Heart (Poetry) - 4/8/2002 4:11:50 PM
I agree with Cathy, really good poem Cheryl.
Janet
Black Heart (Poetry) - 4/8/2002 2:02:07 PM
excellent write. great rythmn & ryhme. as for the subject matter just remember "that elusive butterfly of love" was nothin' more than a caterpillar.-steve
Black Heart (Poetry) - 4/8/2002 1:20:11 PM
Dearest Cheryl,
Maybe you're looking
too hard...
For when you least expect it, it somehow finds it's way to you...
When the time is right,
it will come along...
"Patience is a virture
they say"...
Trixie Love
Black Heart (Poetry) - 4/8/2002 10:57:12 AM
The dark helps us see and treasure the light that much more.
Black Heart (Poetry) - 4/8/2002 10:51:29 AM
Well wriiten...Dark hearts are just the underside of light hearts..We all have a dual heart we just have to try harder to keep the light part showing...;-)
Black Heart (Poetry) - 4/8/2002 10:31:53 AM
Well-written...and with such feeling! No "black hearted" person could write like this!
Black Heart (Poetry) - 4/8/2002 10:00:21 AM
Everyone has to find their way in this world of love. We will both find our true love someday. In the meantime I've learned to love myself and be happy with who I am. I wish you peace.
Black Heart (Poetry) - 4/8/2002 9:23:02 AM
Hi Cherl,
At least you have still one,just find another one,similar,make a matching pair.
( thought about heart transplants)
Anyway I bet it is not as black as its painted,
Morchuis.
ps the enamelled ones are worse.
Black Heart (Poetry) - 4/8/2002 9:18:38 AM
Soft voice and strong emotions make for heartfelt poems and truth. Good Job
The Search (Poetry) - 4/6/2002 8:02:34 PM
Cheryl, my sister, part of my heart. Thank you for loving me after all the long years.
I am so glad you didn't quit looking. I love you, and you write beautifully.
Love, what is it? (Poetry) - 4/5/2002 12:14:16 PM
Love has many faces, some real and some not. It is really sad that it seems you have only seen the not real ones. Keep faith, you will get to glimpse a real one.
Good write.
Blessings
Love, what is it? (Poetry) - 3/28/2002 12:18:10 AM
only love is real ~ all else, illusion ~ lovely poem ~
Love, what is it? (Poetry) - 3/27/2002 12:35:49 AM
love is the essence of creation... and the joy of sharing it...
Let's Dance (Poetry) - 3/26/2002 9:25:49 PM
i hope I never dance like this
Love, what is it? (Poetry) - 3/26/2002 9:25:29 PM
Love is the all it is everything
To See the Sun (Poetry) - 3/26/2002 9:23:38 PM
good for you!
Love, what is it? (Poetry) - 3/26/2002 9:22:03 PM
Love is it's own definition
The Search (Poetry) - 3/26/2002 6:12:45 PM
This is just beautiful and fantastic! I'm soooo very happy for both of you.
Sandie Angel :o)
The Search (Poetry) - 3/26/2002 5:55:43 PM
A beautiful poem for a fantastic occasion...all the best to you both, thanks for sharing your happiness...
The Search (Poetry) - 3/26/2002 5:21:38 PM
Wonderful...and so very touching.
The Search (Poetry) - 3/26/2002 5:19:24 PM
Beautiful, just beautiful.
First Love (Poetry) - 3/25/2002 3:26:52 AM
A nice tribute to your father. Beautifully written! Your father must be smiling at your now.
Sandie Angel :o)
First Love (Poetry) - 3/24/2002 9:55:34 PM
I guess we've all felt this one. Nicely done.
First Love (Poetry) - 3/24/2002 8:03:52 PM
What a wonderful tribute to your father. this was sad and lovely at the same time...well done...
Left Needing (Poetry) - 3/23/2002 2:05:25 PM
It made me wonder if it was just ignorance or selfishness. Oh well, excellent writing!
Left Needing (Poetry) - 3/23/2002 9:10:31 AM
Nice piece dear :)
Left Needing (Poetry) - 3/23/2002 8:23:36 AM
nice poetry..you need to speak up..wake him up..
Left Needing (Poetry) - 3/23/2002 7:24:51 AM
Betrayal of a brocken heart...!
Blue eyed fish...
Left Needing (Poetry) - 3/22/2002 7:18:01 PM
Great poem Cheryl, but the second half of it
sounds like whoever is a loser. I like the poem.
Left Needing (Poetry) - 3/22/2002 6:29:36 PM
Turn around and pound his face in with a pillow. He has some learning to do, obviously.
Left Needing (Poetry) - 3/22/2002 6:25:09 PM
Whoa...guess some will never guys learn...better luck next time...Well done..;-)
