The Kit-KatŪ Christmas (Short Story) - 12/29/2007 4:56:01 AM
Wonderful write, Jason; very well penned! BRAVO!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
The StormSpinner is my twin sister! :)
The Kit-KatŪ Christmas (Short Story) - 12/28/2007 9:02:29 PM
Oftimes, the simplest of gifts brings the greatest pleasure--as did this beautifully moving write. Well penned, held my attention from beginning to end.
Welcome to Author's Den, you're among friends.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
See you live(d) in Utah, I did, too, in 1980--Salt Lake City (actually, Sandy), still have a brother and sister there.
With Silence My Teacher (Poetry) - 12/29/2007 4:29:19 AM
Powerful write; bravo! You take us into your world, make us feel what she felt. That is the mark of a good writer!
And what a cute little baby; awwww! Too precious!
(((UGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn.
With Silence My Teacher (Poetry) - 12/29/2007 12:32:46 AM
Beautiful, adorable baby photograph! Your words speak of may truths and the emotions that ran throughout made me stop and think for a bit. Well versed...
Be safe,
Karen
With Silence My Teacher (Poetry) - 12/28/2007 8:59:57 PM
Such haunting poetry--the reader feels her loneliness, her terror. Well done, Jason. Please, if you can, tell Ms. Oh "Gosohamnida" (thank you in Korean).
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
With Silence My Teacher (Poetry) - 12/28/2007 8:14:34 PM
This is touching me this late Friday evening. I see this child and feel her empty stomach and every tear. It is real. It is too....real. Prayer is what I have to give her and the others just like her.
Thank you.
Susan
