Charlita and Nester (Short Story) - 1/28/2009 11:56:39 PM
Wow that was sad...hell it made me sad. Unrequired love is the most painful love. To love someone so much and knowing the other person don't love you. At least Clarissa had the strong and the courage to leave. Maybe if Nester's brother Armand told him about Marie. He might have gotten over Marie and love another.
Charlita and Nester (Short Story) - 1/26/2009 12:36:10 AM
Wow! what an interesting, but sad story...and an all too often, true occurence, with women falling in love with the wrong man, thinking we can change him, or his feelings. The story leaves us to our own devices, as to what happens when Nester finds Charlita's note...but in the great scheme of things...it really doesn't matter...what truly matters is that Charlita woke up, and took charge of her life, realizing that she deserves to be with the man whose heart is filled as completely with her, as hers is with him. Good lesson...Good story.