Broken Rhymes (Book) - 1/28/2008 3:49:02 PM
"Another distinctive aspect is the rhytm and flow of the poems."
To me, that is not easy to master. You seem to do it with ease, Anna. Congratulations on your book. Love and best wishes,
Regis (Reg)
Good-night (Poetry) - 6/13/2008 2:00:48 PM
A most lovely write, Anna; very compelling and soul-stirring. Thank you for sharing these sentiments. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
Good-night (Poetry) - 6/12/2008 11:19:36 PM
...most beautiful penned expression Anna...and I am happy that you have returned...and I have once again found your poetry.
wishing you all the best...
John
Good-night (Poetry) - 6/12/2008 6:51:01 PM
Loving sentiments indulging in such sweetness, just wonderful....
Be always safe,
Karen
Good-night (Poetry) - 6/12/2008 2:25:44 PM
You have a lot of talent.Continue to always write beautiful poems that make readers like me impress with your words
Edwin
Wedding (Poetry) - 6/12/2008 11:16:00 AM
Most recently had to make sure to prevent just that from happening at our own wedding! And how true it is!
Good-night (Poetry) - 6/12/2008 11:14:48 AM
Some really awesome and well written lines. Highly imaginative.
Good-night (Poetry) - 6/12/2008 2:28:05 AM
Anna,
This is very beautiful,tender and loving. Never go to sleep without saying good-night or I Love You. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.
Good-night (Poetry) - 6/12/2008 1:49:01 AM
BEAUTIFUL, I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! LAST 4 SENTENCES ARE MOST BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! ''That bloom in the heart of this jungle of stone''-------- TALENTED!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Double (I wish I had) (Poetry) - 3/10/2008 3:09:17 PM
I wish I knew you, Anna. I'm pretty sure it would be an awesome experience. You write what I feel. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis (Reg)
Me and the stars (Poetry) - 3/10/2008 3:07:30 PM
You write sweet poetry, Anna. Love and peace and best wishes to you,
Regis
Debt (Poetry) - 3/10/2008 3:06:03 PM
I wish you had given it to me, Anna. You would not have regretted anything. Maybe I would. Maybe not. Sweet write. Love to you,
Regis
Wedding (Poetry) - 2/26/2008 12:48:04 AM
...wonderful words...of fuss...seek to find love...somewhere in a wedding.
excellent pen Anna...
John
Wedding (Poetry) - 2/25/2008 10:02:17 PM
Cute, all the activities attributing to the big day.....
Be always safe,
Karen
Wedding (Poetry) - 2/25/2008 12:12:35 PM
Anna,
This poem speaks volumes to the utter chaos that can surround the planning of a wedding. So often, love is lost in the hustle and bustle of the planning, only to be found, after the ceremony is done!
Well done!
Jill
Wedding (Poetry) - 2/25/2008 9:28:11 AM
Ah yes! Where is love? I find your verses and the theme therefrom very compelling, Anna. Nicely done. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
Debt (Poetry) - 2/7/2008 9:31:02 PM
Wisely and convincingly written....
Be always safe,
Karen
Debt (Poetry) - 2/7/2008 7:03:45 PM
I relate to this poem. Good write. Liz
Debt (Poetry) - 2/7/2008 3:53:50 AM
Anna,
You might want to take a look at a few areas *wink* I love all the thoughts here. Your poem flowed very easily and the rhyme was perfect. Remember, sometimes we can only give so much. Only you can decide when enough is enough. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.
Me and the stars (Poetry) - 2/5/2008 8:28:29 PM
Strong emotions running throughout, yet I sense the hope that will see you through, beautifully written....
Be always safe,
Karen
Me and the stars (Poetry) - 2/5/2008 2:54:42 AM
Anna,
A beautiful but sad write. Some never realize what they have until they have it no more. They can miss their mark by an inch or by ten feet but either way they missed it. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.
Me and the stars (Poetry) - 2/4/2008 7:50:46 PM
I liked this, but it seemed a little bumpy in places. For instance, "awaiting for food" seemed just a tad clunky. I think you can do better. I KNOW you can do better. Ok... feel free to hate me. JD
Me and the stars (Poetry) - 2/4/2008 3:29:31 PM
Sad little poem, some peeps have it all then hit the self implode.
Fiction, yet faction too. wel said, many will relate...
Public love (Poetry) - 2/4/2008 11:28:56 AM
Very sad but true
The letting go (I hope she's good) (Poetry) - 2/4/2008 11:22:51 AM
Lovely....they(the new girl) are never worth the pain, we are always the best!:-)
Me and the stars (Poetry) - 2/4/2008 11:20:54 AM
Very beautiful poem
Me and the stars (Poetry) - 2/4/2008 11:17:30 AM
An eternal love that stays in all seasons. Enjoyed
Double (I wish I had) (Poetry) - 2/4/2008 4:02:16 AM
I love it. Keep them coming. JD
Away through the window (Poetry) - 2/2/2008 2:02:03 PM
Very emotional poem, a lot of hurt here! You convey your feeling well.
Stay well and keep writing.
Ed
The letting go (I hope she's good) (Poetry) - 2/2/2008 1:56:20 PM
Very emotionally giving poem. I use a similar style so I like the flow. Well done. I have a poem called letting as well I'll be posting soon, it's not as giving as yours. Wonderful poem.
Stay well and keep writing.
Ed
Public love (Poetry) - 2/2/2008 1:51:49 PM
Well written and very true. Peers can do so much damage to love.
Stay well and keep writing.
Ed
Double (I wish I had) (Poetry) - 2/2/2008 12:20:57 PM
A tribute to true love- just lovely
Public love (Poetry) - 2/1/2008 3:40:01 AM
Anna,
I remember going through something like this. The word was out that we were too young and it would never last. On January 28th my wife and I celebrated our 41st wedding anniversary. What seems right can never be wrong. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.
Public love (Poetry) - 1/31/2008 8:54:45 PM
...well written pen...in soft silence...love held.
John
Public love (Poetry) - 1/31/2008 8:48:04 PM
Keep writing. Very strong words. JD
The letting go (I hope she's good) (Poetry) - 1/31/2008 3:48:05 PM
Love the flow in this piece, Anna...there is beauty even in the hearts contortions through lost love. Glad you are here at AD
Amor
Public love (Poetry) - 1/31/2008 3:25:39 PM
very willowy classical tones and themes; i enjoyed this muchly.
ness
Public love (Poetry) - 1/31/2008 2:32:14 PM
These verses ring so true that I feel as though you've written about me, Anna. Thank you for sharing this poignant offering. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Dictionary (Poetry) - 1/29/2008 7:42:42 PM
Nice. You have a gift. JD
Dictionary (Poetry) - 1/29/2008 1:31:29 PM
Thank you for this look into your "personal" dictionary, Anna. I like the way you did this (wrapping it all up with "hello" and "good-bye." Nicely done. Thank you for sharing. Love and peace,
Regis
Away through the window (Poetry) - 1/28/2008 3:47:23 PM
Your verses flow like a stream of saddened tears, Anna. Very compelling. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
The letting go (I hope she's good) (Poetry) - 1/28/2008 3:44:34 PM
Powerfully compelling in emotion and meaning expressed, Anna. This reads like a dirge from your soul. Very effective. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Stolen sky (Poetry) - 1/28/2008 3:43:02 PM
The powerful imagery that you have used enhances the theme expressed in your verses, Anna. Well done! Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Invitation to the past (Poetry) - 1/28/2008 3:41:40 PM
A soul reaching write, Anna. I find your verses very emotively engaging. I also appreciate your attention to rhyme and rhythm. Thank you for sharing this gift. Welcome to AD. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Invitation to the past (Poetry) - 1/28/2008 1:20:54 PM
I like rhyme and you have made it work. Thanks for sharing your talent.
God Bless You and Your Loved Ones
Bill Heffner
Poetic Police Officer
Elvis Tribute Artist
