Matthew's Hero (Book) - 8/28/2009 6:31:55 AM
Loved this story and I hope you get it made into a documentary..LadyJ
Matthew's Hero (Book) - 2/28/2008 6:29:14 PM
Loved your quote, and description sounds like a great book. Words were vivid and descriptive my kind of book.
SK Whalen
Chapter one of Matthew's Hero (Short Story) - 5/30/2008 7:50:42 PM
you need an European style editor to work with you on the philosophy of the writing art. You present too many absolutely needless details. You drown a reader in them. As a saying goes, behind trees it is impossible to see the forest. The composition of the chapter is eclectic. It is difficuld to read. After moving through the chapter, I have not acquired a desire to force myself through the thicket of irrelevan information.
For a success with literary educated public the work must be cleaned up and polished.
On this site I, probably, alone to give you a critique. If anybody else would decide to comment on your work, it will be a panegyric with dripping saliva, because they expect the same from you. In simple words, they call themselves boxers, yet refuse to hold even one lightest punch.
good luck, persevere
Chapter one of Matthew's Hero (Short Story) - 3/5/2008 4:06:03 PM
This is a dear subject to me. It's been going on for as many years as I've had children and I had so many friends who just never got how easily these children are taken every year. More so at Christmas time when little boys make expensive presents to some very sick people. I hope your book brings much needed awareness to this sad tale. WElcome, Lady J
