Bobbing Uncertainty (Short Story) - 1/23/2008 11:52:23 AM
I like where this personal challenge took you. These lines stayed with me:
"...it seemed,the apple enjoyed the depression; as if drowning in sorrow was the only possible answer...
Inspired on occasion by the happy openness of the air, our apple would emerge. Suffocating among the joyous open space. Above the air was different, and uncomfortable."
Very real. Emotions reach out to be heard. Pen on!
~SilentDream
