Poetry For and From the Soul (Book) - 7/2/2008 7:56:25 PM
Yes, I can see what you are saying. I really like this concept. Bravo!
John Michael
The Butterfly's Song (Book) - 6/6/2008 12:55:45 AM
Dear Patricia,
No matter the title -- this is a beautiful piece. I'm very happy you found your true LOVE.
Sorry it was so long in finding. Once you place anything in GOD's hands, HE will guide you down the right path.
Best Wishes for a New Life, Mrs Butterfly.
Abide in the Lord and HE will guide you down the right path!
God Bless,
Anita R.
The Butterfly's Song (Book) - 6/5/2008 6:38:24 PM
Very beautiufully written statement of your own heart's philosophy complimented by photo and notabel quotes.
Your smile shows in this one...
hugs
fee
Jewels of Awe (Book) - 2/23/2008 4:47:15 PM
Congrats on your new book..
Ron
About Poetry For and From the Soul (Article) - 4/2/2008 9:23:47 AM
Congratulations on your book, Patricia. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
Be the change you wish to see (Article) - 2/20/2008 11:24:45 AM
This is a really great article.
When I was younger I listen to
too many people and what they thought.
I found out I do have a brain of my own.
I think positive always. Everything has
a way of working out for me when
I talk to my God as I understand him.
I apologized to a lot of people in my
life and they forgive me, but there are
two who have so much pride they shun away.
Attitude means alot. I keep a great one.
I'm suprized of how my attitude rubs off on others.
Ron
I'd Like To Keep You (Poetry) - 12/7/2010 8:54:34 AM
An extremely insight of human desire in search of happiness in this lost world of tension. Very nice and Patricia-Hira Sadhak
We Began (Poetry) - 7/7/2009 6:29:33 AM
A robust poem touching inner thoughts , rhythm of joy, in our travel through out this life alone. Thoughts melts in distant landscape, while wind of music waves inside tender heart.Congrats and love Patricia-
Hira
Joy's Birth (Poetry) - 7/20/2008 12:01:10 PM
God's grace is given to us to live by and to be kept in our hearts forever and ever. Never doubt that joy cannot be had, it only is a prayer away.
Death (Poetry) - 7/20/2008 11:59:35 AM
Glad you gave tribute to your stepfather. So many people do not like their stepfathers' for reasons only they know. Some don't even give them a chance. Glad you were so close to your and able to do this write for him.
The Butterfly's Song (Poetry) - 7/2/2008 7:59:48 PM
You touched me deep in the soul of my heart. You have a special gift. I pray that you expand and conquer more horizons!
John Michael
The Butterfly's Song (Poetry) - 6/16/2008 2:50:22 AM
Beautiful
Sincerely,
~Gwendolyn
The Butterfly's Song (Poetry) - 6/4/2008 7:32:32 AM
Gorgeous write, tangible and vibrant!
Selene
Refinement (Poetry) - 6/3/2008 2:09:10 PM
Patricia, I love the way you handle your words and shape your lines.
Yes...like a photograph etched in my soul. - Gene.
The Butterfly's Song (Poetry) - 6/3/2008 2:04:50 PM
A beauty, Patricia. Congratulations to you and your butterfly.
-Gene.
Refinement (Poetry) - 6/1/2008 7:47:44 PM
...all within...the process of refinement...you pen so well...and like fine wine...you share with us.
John
Vanity's Allure (Poetry) - 6/1/2008 7:45:43 PM
...you have said much in this write Patricia...and with honesty...a voice perhaps found in many...heard here.
very well done...
John
The Butterfly's Song (Poetry) - 6/1/2008 7:17:40 PM
...a path...you have well written of...finds wings of the spirit renewed.
beautiful write Patricia...
John
The Butterfly's Song (Poetry) - 5/31/2008 5:19:36 PM
A really lovely poem, and so very filled with truth. Love the title.
Enchanted (Poetry) - 5/31/2008 11:41:52 AM
Enriching is probably the best word to describe the words in the poem. Yes, even every blade of grass has its own splendor ! So, when you look at the price of gas at the pump, know then that this too shall pass. Seek wisdom, like in the beauty of the author's writing. Never fear evil tidings...
The Butterfly's Song (Poetry) - 5/30/2008 11:26:54 AM
A great commentary on the uncertainty of life. Great poem
Mary
Refinement (Poetry) - 5/30/2008 10:13:43 AM
I love your out look on life
Ron
Refinement (Poetry) - 5/30/2008 4:51:25 AM
We are everything that we touch, we are the treasures of our journeys...Great read always
Vanity's Allure (Poetry) - 5/30/2008 4:46:57 AM
I like the loneliness in this poem, the feeding of oneself hoping to become more than you are...Great read always
The Butterfly's Song (Poetry) - 5/30/2008 1:26:29 AM
Patricia,
Your song was beautiful, light and airy. So little time and so many lessons to be learned. Peace, Love and God's Blessings Always, Paul.
The Butterfly's Song (Poetry) - 5/29/2008 10:57:14 PM
'Light being cast
Applause rings out
As the universe celebrates
The new birth'
Yeah!! Patricia, this is brilliant!
So utterly spot on of 'the Spiritual Path... full of twists and turns, a road upon...' Fantastically written!!
Love, Suzie :-D
Reflection (Poetry) - 4/21/2008 3:41:35 PM
Very innterestly put... enjoyed reading your work...
Wishing you well....
Sam
Reflection (Poetry) - 4/11/2008 8:57:12 PM
I love the tying in of images and water, it makes the poem quite strong though of so few lines.
Reflection (Poetry) - 4/11/2008 8:49:28 AM
...as if to daydream...your words upon water set reflective thought to movement...
excellent Patricia...
John
Inside Your Garden (Poetry) - 4/10/2008 11:25:53 PM
The last stanza is just beautiful...along with a gorgeous photograph.
Of My Despair (Poetry) - 4/10/2008 11:24:37 PM
Very deep with much said between so few lines.
I'd Like To Keep You (Poetry) - 4/9/2008 6:19:07 PM
Lovely, and keep keeping on..
Ron
Reflection (Poetry) - 4/9/2008 11:56:11 AM
Amazing what thoughts cross our minds as we see our reflections, reminding us where we came from and where we are...
Be always safe,
Karen
Reflection (Poetry) - 4/9/2008 5:20:57 AM
What is it about reflections that draw us...Great read
Reflection (Poetry) - 4/9/2008 5:02:24 AM
The very word "water" sets a peaceful image and you've shown that in your poem.
Enchanted (Poetry) - 4/9/2008 4:36:37 AM
I sense a bit of pantheism here; everything is, indeed, a miracle. Lovely.
Reflection (Poetry) - 4/9/2008 12:12:15 AM
"The fantasy of illusion"....excellent!
Inside Your Garden (Poetry) - 4/8/2008 3:19:50 AM
Very nice!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Inside Your Garden (Poetry) - 4/8/2008 2:53:18 AM
Patricia,
Tis the beauty of your words that makes the flowers grow and the touch of your lips that causes the honey to flow. Everyone has a part in the garden of life. An outstanding write. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.
Twisting and Turning (Poetry) - 4/7/2008 7:05:46 PM
Poetry is like painting with words, and you paint well.
Inside Your Garden (Poetry) - 4/7/2008 7:03:59 PM
A very magically and awe-inspiring poem! Love the style!
Inside Your Garden (Poetry) - 4/7/2008 5:44:45 PM
Like a smile it gives you a good feeling.
Inside Your Garden (Poetry) - 4/7/2008 11:57:39 AM
I love the "lightness" to this lovely poem - it has left me feeling uplifted. Beautiful accompanying photograph.
We Kiss (Poetry) - 4/6/2008 7:43:12 PM
sweet words given within this work. passion filled on the wings of songs that rise up within you.
r
Twisting and Turning (Poetry) - 4/6/2008 4:14:57 PM
...you give treasured moments...flames of eternity and spiraling passion...in this fine write.
well done Patricia...
John
We Kiss (Poetry) - 4/6/2008 4:11:01 PM
...wonderful words...romantic and passionate...are given wings of poetic freedom...become sensory.
excellent Patricia...
John
We Kiss (Poetry) - 4/6/2008 3:32:38 PM
That is indeed sweet, and tender, and sensues, with just a touch of.... loved it! Jasmin Horst
Twisting and Turning (Poetry) - 4/6/2008 3:17:14 PM
Great poem "Twisting and turning Blazing and burning" with emotion
Twisting and Turning (Poetry) - 4/6/2008 3:11:46 PM
this poem is very sensory and that is what makes for amazing poetry!
thanks so much for sharing!
Fall in Open May (Poetry) - 4/6/2008 2:11:38 PM
Your wards fall like the raindrops from the sky!
Stunning poetic view of thoughts
Excellent flow and imagery!
Peace love and Hugssss...Morning star
Fall in Open May (Poetry) - 4/4/2008 12:41:20 PM
Hello Patricia,
This Is A Lovely Poetic Express!
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie :)
Fall in Open May (Poetry) - 3/31/2008 1:07:36 PM
Simply powerful in expression, Patricia. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Fall in Open May (Poetry) - 3/26/2008 4:44:36 PM
Simply, yet perfectly done...
Wishing you well..
Sam,
Fall in Open May (Poetry) - 3/23/2008 11:41:36 AM
...words fall...love like...of a season held in Spring.
excellent poetry Patricia...
John
Fall in Open May (Poetry) - 3/21/2008 11:48:05 AM
Beautiful!!!!!! I like the simplicity.
Fall in Open May (Poetry) - 3/20/2008 5:01:55 AM
Nice write Patricia, thank you form sharing.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
Fall in Open May (Poetry) - 3/18/2008 2:26:57 AM
Patricia,
Very endearing piece. All habits become hard to break. Peace, Love and Blessings, Paul.
With Open Hands (Poetry) - 3/17/2008 5:47:07 AM
Profoundly said and felt my new writer, for my heart to enjoy!
Write On!
W E L C O M E to this surprising inspirational den! Where inspirations happen like the wisp of the wind...
Warmest Blessings, LOVE, LIGHT and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Shexoox...
STay Positive!
STay STrong!
With Open Hands (Poetry) - 3/16/2008 6:00:11 PM
...beautiful poetic words...open hands of acceptance...in the suns tomorrows...and what forward brings...like the tide...gifted words roll in.
your words roll with beauty Patricia...
John
With Open Hands (Poetry) - 3/12/2008 1:47:44 PM
Pat welcome to the AD yes you are correct
Yesterdays are gone we must look to the present!
very beautiful imagery and vividness
Stunning poetic view of thoughts!
Wishing you lots of
Peace and love and many hugsss....Morning Star
Weary (Poetry) - 3/7/2008 6:49:13 PM
Wow this is great...tried to write something along the same lines
it never materialized but that's okay you did it for us...Gerard
Pure As A Rose (Poetry) - 3/7/2008 6:59:19 AM
Oh, this is so good. There are no wasted words in this poem.
Sandie May :o)
With Open Hands (Poetry) - 3/7/2008 6:58:04 AM
Lovely Imageries!!! I enjoyed this!!!
Sandie May :o)
Pure As A Rose (Poetry) - 3/6/2008 3:35:22 PM
I love the way you express a world of emotions and thought with such exquisitely crafted lines!
Pure As A Rose (Poetry) - 3/5/2008 11:49:26 AM
A really deep read. wonderful
Casting Away Shadows (Poetry) - 3/3/2008 4:07:58 AM
I may be reading this for my heart but I feel as though you felt you had failed and soon accepts what your final decision was which makes it all worth while in the end. Thank you for sharing.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
Pure As A Rose (Poetry) - 3/3/2008 4:04:45 AM
A beautiful write that shows the love in your heart, thank you for sharing.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
With Open Hands (Poetry) - 3/3/2008 4:03:29 AM
Great write Patricia, Thank you so much for sharing. Welcome to the den and hope you enjoy the family.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
Weary (Poetry) - 3/2/2008 9:51:10 PM
...perhaps within the closet of despair...can be found also...the wings of an angel...put upon the shelf long ago...to be dusted off...worn in friendship once again.
well written Patricia...
John
Casting Away Shadows (Poetry) - 3/2/2008 11:47:28 AM
Oh my, I sense this is a woman who is hurting...
Or just a fine wine poem...
Pure As A Rose (Poetry) - 3/2/2008 11:45:32 AM
Beware of the pricks. BUT this is back to Adam n Eve
Weary (Poetry) - 3/2/2008 11:43:27 AM
LOL, won't do the corny thing and say my name is repair.
In hard times I've noticed how so many mates just go, never ring or write. Stay strong...
With Open Hands (Poetry) - 3/2/2008 11:40:56 AM
Indeed, yesterday does not exist. Kewl poem, and love the miniskirt in your bio.lol Hot hot hot... (Andrew behave)
kewl to seya on here, I can tell you are an accomplished writer...
Looking forward to more of your stuff.
Welcome to the den
Pure As A Rose (Poetry) - 3/2/2008 5:44:36 AM
Beautiful in its essence and pure love from a womans heart.
Casting Away Shadows (Poetry) - 3/1/2008 5:04:16 PM
Stunning spiritual view of thoughts!!
Acknowledging self worthiness and value!!
Outstanding Piece!!
Peace love and hugssss...Morning star
Aeon's Path (Poetry) - 2/29/2008 11:09:03 PM
You have a smooth flow
Ron
My Fire (Poetry) - 2/29/2008 5:57:28 PM
very Passionate--well done
Of My Despair (Poetry) - 2/29/2008 4:33:52 PM
Soulful, deep write.
Casting Away Shadows (Poetry) - 2/29/2008 4:24:06 PM
A very insightful, spiritual write. Excellent.
Of My Despair (Poetry) - 2/28/2008 7:39:03 PM
Well penned..
Ron
Joy's Birth (Poetry) - 2/27/2008 12:29:11 AM
...joy's birth...gives beat...to ones heart.
very well done Patricia...
John
Joy's Birth (Poetry) - 2/26/2008 7:25:29 PM
Thank you for sharing this personification of joy, Patricia. Lovely sentiments. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Joy's Birth (Poetry) - 2/26/2008 6:33:34 PM
What a wonderfully creative piece of work
Ron
Joy's Birth (Poetry) - 2/26/2008 6:18:34 PM
Absolutely beautiful, Patricia, indeed. Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Joy's Birth (Poetry) - 2/26/2008 5:36:46 PM
What I wish the world could be filled with, very touching....
Be always safe,
Karen
Of My Despair (Poetry) - 2/26/2008 2:37:41 PM
Sometimes truth is hard to see in oneself especially a vain truth. Good read...Gerard
Of My Despair (Poetry) - 2/26/2008 3:08:26 AM
Patricia,
Deep, soul searching write. Knowing, Loving and Believing in oneself is despairs equalizer. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.
Of My Despair (Poetry) - 2/25/2008 10:55:20 PM
Interesting and one to surely ponder over....
Be always safe,
Karen
My Fire (Poetry) - 2/25/2008 7:08:11 PM
Fire deserves fire..your kind of passionate fire..
Cleaver write..
Ron
My Fire (Poetry) - 2/25/2008 6:54:17 PM
...pen of passion...bold letters of desire...and between the lines...kindling.
well done Patricia...
John
Of My Despair (Poetry) - 2/25/2008 6:51:52 PM
...perhaps in the darkness of despair...the mirror held no light to relect upon.
...pensive pen in search of hope...well done Patricia...
John
Casting Away Shadows (Poetry) - 2/24/2008 7:21:23 AM
"Casting Away Shadows" is a celebration of the sanctity of life and how such recognition transforms us from mere creatures of the world into spiritual beings that personify and glorify God's love.
"To merge into wholeness" fulfills His intent. It is as it should be.
I view this poem as a profound statement of spiritual enlightenment.
Well done, Patricia. Well done.
Richard
You still remained (Poetry) - 2/22/2008 3:16:20 AM
Patricia,
I thought your poem was beautiful in a haunting sort of way. The dark can play tricks with our eyes but certainly not in our minds. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.
You still remained (Poetry) - 2/21/2008 6:23:37 PM
A meloncholy feel, but well expressed...
Be always safe,
Karen
Holy Temple (Poetry) - 2/20/2008 5:42:54 PM
A beautiful write... I enjoyed reading it...Wishing you well...
Sam
Upon My Soul (Poetry) - 2/18/2008 10:48:22 AM
A voice so long unheard
Safely tucked into the womb
Of love’s sweet arms
Woven of all that glitters
Sweet verses, Patricia. There is no doubt that this is your style. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
Regis
As Timeless As Creation (Poetry) - 2/17/2008 10:39:32 PM
Beautiful sentiments expressed in this poem...
I love the imagery used.
Cryssa
Jewels of Awe (Poetry) - 2/17/2008 5:01:56 PM
Truly you are inspired, Patricia. It must be a great feeling. I have not been very prolific in my "writing" for some time; I am grateful if I can be given one poem every few weeks. Thank you for sharing your inpiration. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Casting Away Shadows (Poetry) - 2/17/2008 4:59:55 PM
I find this wonderfully validating. You accept and see your worth and value it. I wish I could do that. I do hope that I am not being too forward in interpreting what I read from your verses. Thank you, Patricia. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Across the Flame (Poetry) - 2/17/2008 4:57:40 PM
Yes! Your words reach deep into the soul (mine anyways) and echo there and the echo waits for a response. Refreshing poetry, Patricia. Thank you for sharing your gift. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Open Channels (Poetry) - 2/17/2008 4:55:45 PM
Your poetry gives the reader pause for reflection, Patricia. I really like it very much and I do not say that to just anybody. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Open Channels (Poetry) - 2/17/2008 4:20:59 PM
Wonderful poetry..
Welcome to authorsden
Ron
We Began (Poetry) - 2/17/2008 1:46:07 PM
Lovely verses expressing beautiful sentiments; thank you, Patricia. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Bowl of Fruit (Poetry) - 2/17/2008 1:44:31 PM
Symbolic verses worthy of more than a single reading; substance for reflection. Thank you, Patricia. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
Death (Poetry) - 2/17/2008 1:43:23 PM
A sad but loving tribute and a reminder to all of us of what the passage that we must all eventually take. Thank you, Patricia. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Holy Temple (Poetry) - 2/17/2008 1:41:21 PM
Lovely sentiments; that is what a temple ought to symbolize and transcend. Thank you for sharing this gift, Patricia. Welcome to AD. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
Endless Beauty (Poetry) - 2/17/2008 11:09:28 AM
...few words...break ground...with peaceful and everlasting beauty...in this pen...yet say much.
well done Patricia...
John
We Began (Poetry) - 2/17/2008 11:07:18 AM
...beautiful pen of beginning...until the end of time.
well done Patricia...
John
