Jigsaw Puzzle (Short Story) - 5/21/2011 5:25:51 AM
lovely story that drew me into the life of this child-trust can come with big costs and even little ones know that-
jch
Jigsaw Puzzle (Short Story) - 3/24/2008 11:08:02 AM
This is a fine story indeed, Lori. I was drawn in at the start and you held my attention throughout. I suppose it doesn't hurt that I am an educator as well but I'm sure he story would be most effective in any event. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes,
Regis
lavender wine (Poetry) - 11/11/2008 12:32:46 PM
I find this very beautiful, Lori. Thank you for sharing your gift. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
lavender wine (Poetry) - 4/8/2008 12:38:40 PM
This is my favorite of yours so far, hands down-this is GREAT, Lori. I will go on and on about this one whenever we talk about writing or if you slack off and stop writing I will be like, remember that poem with the lavendar wine- just to forewarn you :) :) :)
lavender wine (Poetry) - 4/6/2008 11:26:51 AM
This is a splendid write, it's very poetic
Best wishes
HH
i believed (Poetry) - 3/28/2008 4:14:32 PM
I like this, Lori, it reminds me of a scene from a romance novel in its description and has a strong depth of feeling in it, a sadness for what could have been, what was, but not enough. Good one, Lori girl-see you tomorrow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Love, Michelle
i believed (Poetry) - 3/25/2008 12:44:11 PM
Bittersweet memories of "another life" and "another time." I can relate. Thank you, Lori. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
i believed (Poetry) - 3/24/2008 4:21:28 PM
Always hold on to those precious memories because without them there is nothing to look forward to.....
Be always safe,
Karen
i believed (Poetry) - 3/24/2008 2:42:20 PM
Continue to believe... sometimes thats all we have are our dreams... very nice poetry
to b. (Poetry) - 3/24/2008 11:02:20 AM
Succinctly powerful in expressive meaning; thank you for sharing this gift, Lori. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
A-muse-d (Poetry) - 3/24/2008 11:01:15 AM
I can relate to this and I appreciate your attention to rhyme and rhythm, Lori. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace,
Regis
cabin fever III (Poetry) - 3/24/2008 10:59:47 AM
Cleverly concocted and delightfully expressed, Lori. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Regis
cabin fever III (Poetry) - 3/17/2008 2:19:51 PM
LOLOL!! This I can relate to, lol, love it Lori, seriously!!
cabin fever III (Poetry) - 3/14/2008 11:27:17 PM
HAHA, least it's the easter break...
cabin fever III (Poetry) - 3/14/2008 11:25:15 AM
Adorably inspiring.....
Be always safe,
Karen
cabin fever III (Poetry) - 3/14/2008 11:16:32 AM
Just think of all the blessings ou will get one day from your patience today...;) Ed
to b. (Poetry) - 3/12/2008 5:27:05 AM
Great expression in a few lines.
Axilea
to b. (Poetry) - 3/11/2008 8:21:28 PM
I like the simplicity in this and the message-i think we should always be reinventing ourselves. Like this, Lori.
to b. (Poetry) - 3/10/2008 5:19:00 PM
...perhaps in the last line...you have found the key.
excellent write lori...
John
to b. (Poetry) - 3/10/2008 12:43:46 PM
No matter the conditions, one's spirit soars as it was meant to be, beautifully descriptive...
Be always safe,
Karen
Crouching Secret (Poetry) - 3/9/2008 7:22:18 PM
I loved this the first time I read it, second time is even better :)This has some great images, especially that first stanza and the form works well at the end. So happy to see you here :)
