A World Beyond (Short Story) - 5/4/2010 2:06:10 PM
wow I definately like what I have read so far...sort of reminds me of an Adult Alice in Wonderland...
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Never the Same (Short Story) - 7/24/2009 8:18:41 AM
Strong and I must say stunningly honest, we crave what is different and taboo, society seems to think it is only men that want variety and taboos but that is just not so. A lot of women believe men want the perfect shaped barbie doll girls but the truth is most want variety as I think most women do down deep...short, tall, fat, thin, pretty ugly, young, old that is the truth as I see it anyway.
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Training the Rabbi (Short Story) - 2/3/2009 10:18:47 AM
I agree with Mary. Im a glutten for discription and it just wasent there. I really would of like to make a better mental picture with this. Other than that I really enjoyed it.
-Winter
Training the Rabbi (Short Story) - 9/20/2008 9:26:17 PM
It is certainly discriptive of what she is like sexually, but not what is missing, is well, missing. Who are you? What do you look like? How are you dressed/or not? The room is not complete? What does her face look like? You only dressed her from the waist down...Missing her neck, face, hair, arms, and so on...It's a shame, really. Polish should finish this. I felt like I needed a beginning of the story rather than dropping in on the sex right away, it was like coitis intruptus...too fast, too soon. Suggestion would be a build up leading us as a tease to how she got "wet", otherwise, it's just a man's fantasy, not a woman's story. Just my .01 cents. Thanks.
Training the Rabbi (Short Story) - 9/20/2008 9:35:50 AM
Definately perked my interest enough to go check out the website, save to favorites to read when I have more time and free mind.
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