Chasing the sunset (Poetry) - 2/16/2010 3:18:13 AM
This is wonderful Richard
truely beautiful in the essence of love's questing desire
to reach & embrace...
I agree with William "outstanding write"
Peace & Blessings
Vickie
(on ur bio-cute pic of the groovin pup w/shades!)
Your Man (Poetry) - 2/6/2010 8:26:18 AM
Cus
You don't post regularly here because of your precious time
that you must share with others, but when you do, I must say you are a poet to be recon with, Great write Cus
Peace be with you always
Cus June
Chasing the sunset (Poetry) - 2/6/2010 8:17:22 AM
Richard, Cus
This is an extremely outstanding write
I admire your ability to express yourself so profoundly
Peace Be with you
Cus June
Black Tears (Poetry) - 2/6/2010 8:09:15 AM
You see Cus,
Now I ask myself, "How did I ever miss this
Gen of a poetic piece you posted back in June", shame on me
This is a Well Penned offering......
Keep posting here at the Den
Peace Cus My regards to the Family
Cus JUNE
My Moon My Love (Poetry) - 1/30/2010 7:11:25 AM
BRILLIANTLY COMPOSED CUS
YOU HAVE OUT DONE YOUR SELF WITH THIS ONE
WHAT ARE YOU GOING TO DO NOW?? "GO TO DISNEY WORLD??"
PEACE BROTHER.......
D'Artagnan
She Rose A Queen (Poetry) - 10/28/2009 8:16:07 PM
This is absolutely beautiful.
Chasing the sunset (Poetry) - 10/28/2009 6:21:41 PM
Such an intense revelation..Nicely written Richard, I enjoyed your poem.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
She Rose A Queen (Poetry) - 12/3/2008 6:17:02 AM
A star your own upon which to gaze. What a wonderful blessing - your family's foundation.
The Conflict (Poetry) - 11/30/2008 8:03:16 PM
Wouldn't it be nice if all mankind could agree that we are all human and begin from their without the malace of who is better than who, great writing.....
Be always safe,
Karen
The Conflict (Poetry) - 11/30/2008 12:45:25 PM
hey great to see you again Cus
its been a while since you've posted and now
you come out swinging with a great kick ass piece like this
An excellent write I must say, how are you and the family doing? those boys must be getting big, Haven't seen them for a spell
hoping to see them soon, planning on passing by Curtis for the New Year
Peace be with you and your wonderful Family
Cus "June" & Cookie
The Conflict (Poetry) - 11/30/2008 6:47:17 AM
I found true peace within the hidden walls of Christianity. I studied the holy scriptures and learned to love my neighbors. But being surrounded by one particular race was too much to ask of me, as they had always played the bad guys. Can you guess what race that was?
Your Man (Poetry) - 7/6/2008 7:21:43 PM
Oh how sweet, sincere and generous this lovely piece is and how giving a heart you possess....
Be always safe,
Karen
Your Man (Poetry) - 7/6/2008 4:17:56 PM
What a wonderous thing to be giving of oneself for a loved one.
Beautiful.
Mary
coward (Poetry) - 6/30/2008 5:49:58 AM
Good Morning Richard,
your passion evokes the frustration of what is indeed a reality for some debilitated by fear
emotive write
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie
Black Tears (Poetry) - 6/29/2008 8:51:13 AM
This is so sad and heartwrenching, a person whether it be clown or what, losing the respect of his peers.
Mary
Black Tears (Poetry) - 6/29/2008 3:58:29 AM
VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
coward (Poetry) - 5/28/2008 3:42:54 AM
A wonderful write with a great message, has a great lyrical feel...well done! Oh yeah, welcome to the den!
Blessings,
Joyce B.
coward (Poetry) - 5/25/2008 6:31:27 PM
Very deeply moving, you have made a point and with passion and conviction you send it home.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
coward (Poetry) - 5/24/2008 3:07:56 AM
Running isn't cowardice is the ownership of very fast legs, you can't tell them to stop once they start pumping, even if you have a lions heart and a mucho macho actitude, don't call man a coward for running call him a road-runner because there's a coyoye coming up his tail beep-beep...beep-beep
Georg
coward (Poetry) - 5/23/2008 11:31:41 PM
Great Write Cus
Sometimes I felt as if my feet were stuck in deep mud
When the Mind was willing but the flesh was weak.
Outstanding presentation
Peace be with you
William
splash (Poetry) - 5/11/2008 8:46:08 PM
Wow, sounds passionate and exciting, love how you did this :)
splash (Poetry) - 5/7/2008 12:01:17 PM
A romantic evening, one to savor and think about throughout the day, making all problems disappear.....
Be always safe,
Karen
splash (Poetry) - 5/7/2008 4:08:47 AM
Lay back relax, light up a cigarete
and think about how great it was,
Excellent write Richard
Peace be with you
William
splash (Poetry) - 5/7/2008 12:59:11 AM
Richard,
An Invigorating Poem!!
Embrassé
Vickie
splash (Poetry) - 5/7/2008 12:32:52 AM
The two rivers meet but nobody gets drowned...just melting themselves into each other and flow...flow...flow...
Georg
She Rose A Queen (Poetry) - 3/30/2008 4:26:40 PM
Heartfelt and heartwarming tribute for your Aunt, Richard. She will live on through her examples...
Nucje
Dry Eyes (Poetry) - 3/30/2008 4:04:49 PM
Your words speak tomes of sadness, Richard. When loving remembrances come, so shal the rains. Have patience...
Micke
She Rose A Queen (Poetry) - 3/30/2008 8:20:02 AM
Thank You Cuz
This is truly a great tribute deserving of A Royal Rose indeed
for she was wise and well as humble before all that desired
her blessings and adivse in the path of knowledge and wisdom
Peace be with you and may the Lord keep her within His Kingdom
In Paradise.
William
She Rose A Queen (Poetry) - 3/29/2008 7:32:45 PM
This was great! I truly did appreciate your effort in describing such a rose!
Dry Eyes (Poetry) - 3/29/2008 7:19:20 PM
Richard,
"Revitalize the rivers and
let them come racing
In hopes of filling my souls empty basin
And I, will like the dove, fly above
and seek this promised land of love"
Your Words Are Beautiful
Embrasse'
Vickie
She Rose A Queen (Poetry) - 3/29/2008 7:09:44 PM
Hello Richard,
This Is A Beautiful Tribute To Your Aunt Irma!!
Embossed With Poetic Roayalty :)
Embrasse'
Vickie
Phoenix of Love (Poetry) - 3/21/2008 3:40:21 PM
"Phoenix of Love" quite interesting presentation. Welcome to the den enjoy your stay.
~Gwendolyn
Phoenix of Love (Poetry) - 3/21/2008 11:41:53 AM
That's a real interesting way to look at love, as a Phoenix, great idea! Like this!!
Phoenix of Love (Poetry) - 3/18/2008 8:08:59 AM
So, Richard, that uncle of you gave a few Musketeer's drops of blood and that romanticism that will take you a long way in the ladies world as well as in the literary.
Like your uncle said, a touch of that old libido doesn't hurt, that's of course if the wife doesn't read it, then, Duck my friend, that's another can of beans! ! !
Georg
Phoenix of Love (Poetry) - 3/18/2008 4:41:43 AM
Excellent writing sweet man,stay safe and well...Hugssss
Phoenix of Love (Poetry) - 3/18/2008 1:54:53 AM
I can relate to this so deeply. As, of now in my life, love does not exist, but the memories do, when i did have it. Some day, I am sure I will find that feeling again.
Welcome to AD, and hope you have many reviews and look forward to reading more of your work
Holding On (Poetry) - 3/17/2008 5:28:39 PM
"Time passes but grief still holds me tight
My mind exhausted no longer wants to fight
I fear I may be losing my futures sight
And still I hold to the promise of a coming light
Still I hold, still I hold and still I hold..."
Your last stanza is speaking powerful emotions of determination
Excellent Write Richard
Embrasse'
Vickie
Phoenix of Love (Poetry) - 3/17/2008 5:25:02 PM
Richard,
I Enjoyed Your "Pheonix of Love"
Speaking An Empowered Express Of Love's Drive
Embrasse'
Vickie
This Is Who I Am (Poetry) - 3/17/2008 5:20:46 PM
Hello Richard,
I Enjoyed reading about you In Your Poetic Express.
I must say I especially love:
"At night I look at the
Heavens so that I may stay grounded." This & the very begining pulled my interests immediately wanting to read more.
Nice To Meet You!
Embrasse'
Vickie
Phoenix of Love (Poetry) - 3/17/2008 5:20:28 PM
Richard,
This poem envelopes the climax of love and spiritual enlightenment. I loved the way you used the capital letters to really grab the reader.
Nicely done.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Phoenix of Love (Poetry) - 3/17/2008 5:04:13 PM
Darn, I had to read again after seeing William's comment...still don't see "erotica"; but do see a deeply passionate poet who can express his feelings...and that's good.
Micke
(wondering...what did she miss? :o)
This Is Who I Am (Poetry) - 3/17/2008 4:55:59 PM
If you don’t believe me, look at your current presidency
And try to convince me it is not testosterone driven.
Richard, methinks you give him too much credit...after all, he is the DUH-bya bush! Testosterone, NO. Greed, YES. The Ha-li-burton man, Chaney, is the puppeteer. Darn, didn't mean to get on this subject...
Another great poem, and appreciate the lines
"To me, my seeds are the epiphany of my mortality, I
am fallible, I am human
This is who I am."
After reading your first poem, posted by cuz William, the above part has so much meaning.
Micke
Phoenix of Love (Poetry) - 3/17/2008 4:15:17 PM
An excellent write Richard
a touch of erotica goes a long way
Peace be with you
William
Phoenix of Love (Poetry) - 3/17/2008 3:09:53 PM
Richard,
Interesting approach to love in big bold caps ....... I like the style you are developing.
Thanks, ~D.
Holding On (Poetry) - 3/17/2008 8:31:13 AM
Welcome, Richard, to the Den! Your poem, tho sad, shows strength and determination...what a great introduction to your works. Look forward to more.
Micke Jinks
Holding On (Poetry) - 3/17/2008 7:26:15 AM
Welcome to the den...this is a powerful, yet at the sametime a very sad poem...stay strong
Carole~
Holding On (Poetry) - 3/17/2008 6:54:54 AM
Welcome--and this is quite an entrance.
We post hoping someone may relate to our poems. Hoping someone may understand. And this is one I can relate to big time.
Well done.
Looking forward to sharing more.
--RaeLynn
This Is Who I Am (Poetry) - 3/17/2008 5:19:13 AM
Richard,
again, such a wonderful and heartfelt poem. I especially loved the way you ended this one:
"I hear the waters, they beckon my return
Peace and tranquility are things that I yearn
My seeds, to them I am immortal incapable of failure, a super-whew!-man
To me, my seeds are the epiphany of my mortality, I am fallible, I am human
This is who I am"
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Holding On (Poetry) - 3/17/2008 5:16:58 AM
Richard,
I welcome you first to the den, many blessings to you.
First, I read your other poem when William posted it, and I loved it. This one is a bit more intense...The one thing that stands out to me, is how well your passion for survival and lightness is felt throughout this poem. I look forward to reading more works from such a talented poet.
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Holding On (Poetry) - 3/17/2008 4:50:41 AM
This is deep Cuz
Don't let those wall crumble Pal
Hold on, the calvery is on its way
keep your sanity, pension nears
..............lol
William...........
Holding On (Poetry) - 3/17/2008 4:03:16 AM
Powerfully penned, my friend, and Welcome to Author's Den!
This Is Who I Am (Poetry) - 3/16/2008 9:29:06 PM
Well Cuz
You sure made a grand enterance here with this well penned
extraordinary offering, Welcome to the Den,
hope you make yourself at home here,
I've been here for almost seven years,
Peace be with you
William
Holding On (Poetry) - 3/16/2008 7:46:11 PM
Superb poem,powerfully written! Welcome Richard,I look forward to more of your writings/
Eileen
