Feeding with Gilder Finch (Short Story) - 3/18/2008 2:24:14 PM
I really like this. I think it captures the emotion of the signal event quite well. However, you're missing some commas that wold make the reading much easier, as would some greater paragraph indentations.
Never to Late (Poetry) - 3/27/2008 11:27:33 AM
I really like this one, JD. I could almost see you waggling your finger at me while I read it. - Dave Lane
Never to Late (Poetry) - 3/23/2008 4:43:05 PM
JD, This Is An Excellent Voice You Place With Your Write!
Bravo! You Got It Out!
Great Poetic Express!!
Indeed & Well Said Too!
Embrasse'
Vickie
