Grief (Poetry) - 3/30/2008 3:43:33 AM
Your spare style deals well here. Nice work!
Intelligence the Feotal Flaw (Poetry) - 3/29/2008 9:02:55 PM
I was rambling about in here tonight and ran across your work...and am glad I did. As I am prone to do, I went back to your earlier work first. This is a very good piece...good flow, great imagery and a wise message...it is a piece that will touch those who have been there.
Splendid job with this.
I must look different, do I? (Poetry) - 3/29/2008 4:32:58 PM
Like sometimes does not see like
they are too involved in their own agonies,
sadly...
well written, chin up, Pax A
