Commerce (Poetry) - 3/19/2006 3:38:04 PM
'bowels of commerce'. I like that, and it's fitting...
Commerce (Poetry) - 2/18/2006 6:24:10 AM
I can feel the coinage slipping to the ground. Our lives are so ruled by money, aren't they?
Heiligenbeil, 1945 (Poetry) - 1/29/2005 9:30:16 PM
Keep up te good work. Les
Commerce (Poetry) - 1/29/2005 9:28:07 PM
Pretty neat poem! Les
Heiligenbeil, 1945 (Poetry) - 1/20/2004 1:26:52 PM
Not bad... I would suggest that you drop the CAPS and add some punctuation in your second to last stanza. Beyond that--this was really good.
Heiligenbeil, 1945 (Poetry) - 11/13/2003 9:50:29 PM
I don't know what to say except to echo what the others have. Very powerful.
Heiligenbeil, 1945 (Poetry) - 10/27/2002 2:37:22 AM
my dad was one of the men in the battle....powerful tails he told us....very powerful poem
